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Very deep and, at times, poetic. I loved it!

I really like that one, it has a nice flow to it.

Thank you very much! It's nice to get some feedback.

No prob, anytime!

Hey, that's pretty good.

Ok, this is a poem I wrote that's kind of an elegy. I originally posted it on my deviant art but haven't really got a lot of views. I want some feedback so I figured I'd post it on here too. So give me your comments good or bad. Thanks! Whispered by the wind Listen closely my friend To the wind from the grave. It faintly whispers a story Of a life lost long ago. Her presence, Now angelic, His sorrow Still remains. The years they spent together Ended with a grave. Soil covers the remnants Of his one true love. A single rose is placed On the bed of earth. The pain resurfaces, His tears dampen the grave. Her face is lost, Faded into obscurity, One memory Still remains. He held her close As they slid to the floor. With her last breath, I love you was whispered. The last goodbye, Shared long ago. Her kiss now cold, Her touch now unfelt. Her life Ended by mortality. The love they felt lives on, Their story immortal, Whispered by the wind.

You guys are pretty good. Keep working hard and one day you may become prosperous with your music.

I like them, the songs Forsaken and comatose are really good.

That is funny.

8/10 Alice In Chains

The Hand That Feeds- Nine Inch Nails

Great update!

Yeah, thats kind of like when I listen to Chic 'N' Stu or Violent Pornography by System of a Down. The lyrics seem to make absolutely no sense but are fun to listen to, especially when your on a sugar high!

Yes, all members of SOAD are of middle eastern decent, and that is a major part of why they have such strong political views in their songs and what we're seeing in Serj's solo project.

If your looking for an good indie band as in independent and not the genre then Drist is an awesome band. Also a good site to find indie music is http://cdbaby.com