a poem I wrote...tell me what you think

Xblackwidow20X

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Cold Blood

 


Tears of blood drip from a crippled eye.



They are feeding hate and killing love.



Growing a puddle of deception that started with one lie.


 


They appear every night When the girl is alone.



When she feels safe to open up.



Where there's no one to yell at her in a despising tone.


 


She can't stop the blood from flowing.



she can't mend her heart from breaking.



She can't kill the hate that is growing.


 


There are no smiles that are real.



no laughter to satisfy her loving thirst.



She see's no respect there to feel.


 


The mended wounds on her heart have broken open at last.



Cold blood pours from them and turns black.



She feels herself reliving the past.


 


the coldness kills the warmth that had once dwelled in this place.



It devours anything good and happy.



it now hides behind the fake smile on her face.


 


It laughs when she becomes angry and when she begins to cry.



it mocks her denial of knowing love.



It will never be satisfied until the affection would die.


 


She now has a war to battle inside.



others can help her only if they knew.



If they could see the pain that tries to hide.


 


Shes sinking faster into this puddle of hate.



She screams and reaches for a loving hand.



Sadly, no one comes to help change her fate.


 


She opens her eyes and puts a smile on to wherever she will rome.



she never reveals the war she hides.



until the sun falls and she is once again, alone.


 


wriiten by: Terry O


 

Pheonix791989

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that was so totally awesome dude. this is one that I'm printing out so I can put it on my wall with the other poems. congrats, your going on the LP wall. nice job
 

Marizka

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Terry O! Wow! that was so.. ow ****, ill try my best to translate this right: intriging?? does that make sense?? ow well, i loved it! :thumbsup:
 
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