******* anger(a poem)

[lpunderground]

*** i am so mad and this is what i came out with.

Lost in tears of my own

after your unjust rant

Its not fair to judge someone

before you know them

Go a head and judge me

by the people who made the diecisions

I AM TOO YOUNG TO BE ON MY OWN

so get ur yelling done

and yell at me for what i have NO say in

Your ill minded and crule

unjust and unfair

Do you always judge someone before you have all the fatcs?

Those words cut like glass to flesh

So you still want to judge me?

The decsion of many and NOT MY OWN

Anger sufaces at ur outlash

FINE if u never want to talk to me

but one day you will see what u did

and it will haunt you ..always

One day i will meet you and once i see who u really are forget everything

because of the irrational thing you said

You broght me down and judged me by the thing i said that i cant control who leads the people

 

[rock star]

THAT'S REALLY SOO COOL I love it man !! But there is sumthing miss to dunno how and where !! But really i like it ..!! LOL btw i'm recording this poem HAHA it's nice

 

[lpunderground]

THAT'S REALLY SOO COOL I love it man !! But there is sumthing miss to dunno how and where !! But really i like it ..!! LOL btw i'm recording this poem HAHA it's nice

what do u mean ur recording it? thanks

 

[rock star]

hehe i mean like i'm tryin to do this i'm recodeing it by my voice got it ?wanna hear it LOOL **** no MY voice SUXX

 

[lpunderground]

im sure its fine.

 

[Xblackwidow20X]

not to bad. you can defently tellt hat you were angry when you wrote that. its pretty good. but i have to agree...there seems to be somthing missing. but what do i know. other than that i like it

 

[MrRandomGuy]

something is missing in the poem, but otherwise it's pretty good