Kates
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this is one I wrote about/for my mom. It's kind of personal, so it might be confusing to you. If there's anything you feel I should change, please tell me.
we thought our problem had been solved
that all the pain had gone away
that things were back to normal again
that our friendship had come back together again
but slowly and unoticed
I was being ripped apart
piece by piece I fell
fell away into my own grave
we should have just let it go
you were so quick to make me happy again
so quick to mean the world to me again
you pushed me away and
expected me to come back to you
laughing and smiling and happy again
this seperation finally back together again
like a puzzle that's missed a piece for years
and now we found that missing piece
that piece turned black and burning still
we made it worse and now it's gone
just push me away again but don't
expect me to come back to you
don't want me to run to you
because I won't be hurt again
no, you can't let me hurt myself again
I died once in your arms
and this time I'll die alone
Thank you.
I really didn't put much thought into this. I wasn't so strict on making rhyme. I just wrote what I felt, and somehow I was able to come up the perfect tune for it. Tell me what you think. ^^;
we thought our problem had been solved
that all the pain had gone away
that things were back to normal again
that our friendship had come back together again
but slowly and unoticed
I was being ripped apart
piece by piece I fell
fell away into my own grave
we should have just let it go
you were so quick to make me happy again
so quick to mean the world to me again
you pushed me away and
expected me to come back to you
laughing and smiling and happy again
this seperation finally back together again
like a puzzle that's missed a piece for years
and now we found that missing piece
that piece turned black and burning still
we made it worse and now it's gone
just push me away again but don't
expect me to come back to you
don't want me to run to you
because I won't be hurt again
no, you can't let me hurt myself again
I died once in your arms
and this time I'll die alone
Thank you.
I really didn't put much thought into this. I wasn't so strict on making rhyme. I just wrote what I felt, and somehow I was able to come up the perfect tune for it. Tell me what you think. ^^;