Marizka
New member
here's a poem i made about suicide, cuz it's been on my mind a lot, and playing abig part in my life right now, it's very frustrating cuz you feel so powerless, that's why i wrote this. I also posted this in the petition for life thread at PMA, so if ur a member there, you might allready have seen it.
4u
you feel like you swim in an ocean of fire
surrounded by someone else's dreams and desires
and your own have sunken to the bottom
they seem unreachable and forgotten
you feel there's nothing left to live for
but what is there to die for?
what do you get by leaving this place?
nothing, you'll disappear without a trace
only the memory keeps a part of you alive
but what is a memory compared to life?
don't give in!
please be strong!
let life carry you on
dont let this be the end of your song
remember all the people that love you
remember all the people that care for you
imagine what they'd go through
the pain of losing you
life is full of temptation
and I know ending it is one
leaving it all behind
with the promiss you'll find a place to hide
don't give in!
please be strong!
let life carry you on
dont let this be the end of your song
you need to hold on to life
there's still so much to do, so much to try
you can make the change on your own
all you need is the will to fight
and you just might
get the life you wanted all along.
4u
you feel like you swim in an ocean of fire
surrounded by someone else's dreams and desires
and your own have sunken to the bottom
they seem unreachable and forgotten
you feel there's nothing left to live for
but what is there to die for?
what do you get by leaving this place?
nothing, you'll disappear without a trace
only the memory keeps a part of you alive
but what is a memory compared to life?
don't give in!
please be strong!
let life carry you on
dont let this be the end of your song
remember all the people that love you
remember all the people that care for you
imagine what they'd go through
the pain of losing you
life is full of temptation
and I know ending it is one
leaving it all behind
with the promiss you'll find a place to hide
don't give in!
please be strong!
let life carry you on
dont let this be the end of your song
you need to hold on to life
there's still so much to do, so much to try
you can make the change on your own
all you need is the will to fight
and you just might
get the life you wanted all along.
Good Job on it :thumbsup:
