big rap!!! :D

[non_stop]

you gave me aids, and i will pay
for my stupidity(-s), in that city
i will slowly die, (no) matter how much i cry
i dont want to die, i never ever lie
and i dont (will) have sex, without a prophylactic
i will be alive and then it will (be) fantastic...

check that rhyme out, and write your own
then write it down its not the on(-ly)! :thumbsup:

one thing: it concerns not me!!
i dont have aids!

 

[non_stop]

after i was not here for such a long time i will post my new lyrics... but this time, i think its a good one...*lol*
the last were a **** one!


I WILL POST IT TOMORROW... CAUSE ITS A LONG ONE

 

[non_stop]

Here it comes...

LMAA, Here comes BLFEA 'n he knows what he's sayin',
He, He, He, He knows the new ****,
the new rappers 'n what they're spittin',
he has the best rhymes 'n is gotta hit 'em!
All he grew up with were kicks 'n punshes,
'n all he has in mind is to win 'n to punish 'em!
For all their stupidities 'n all they were sayin',
RUN! if you're scared 'cause 'til now I were only playin'!
I'm a new playa in da game 'n all ya sayin' will be used against ya...
'cuz I'm the one 'n only 'n true gangsta!!
I've got the real gangstablood 'n childhood,
'n ya didn't take a look on me, didn't ya understood?!
So, man, did ya realize? you don't have a chance!!
Cuz' this is my new, damn game 'n no ****in' romance!!!
So, come on, spit 'n make me blind with ya rhyme,
or would ya like to sit in the conner 'n take a lil' cry?!
you're not a lil' crybaby, are ya?!
but if I'm done with spittin', done with rhymin',
ya can search for someone ya can cry with!
Damn it, homie, that was my rhyme,
now it's ya turn:
GO ON OR CRY!!!







what do you think bout this rhyme? good or bad?

 

[Stenners]

I dont understand the point of this topic
yet alone why I shoukld actually rap on it
but here I am anyways spittin down the rhymes
rather then spittin typin the lines
im too tired to come up wit something meaningful
so I will do some more later people

 

[Friðbjörn]

it was not the worst verse I've heard
but it just had too much cursing words
and gangsta ****, flip it up next time you're gonna spit
is this really it? because you're killin it
I'm not gonna take more time
nor waste more rhymes
but damn it, you should take more time to plan it
or just make it simple and rap in your own mother language