Pheonix791989
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just so you know fox and I are writing this together. were in cahots lol
I stuck my hands in my pockets as I looked out over the glazz flat ocean. There was an awesome set earlier today, but i had just barely missed it by a couple of minutes. My name is Mel, I live in Venice Beach, known to the locals as Dogtown, and I surf. I live here with my dad. I'm not a very social person but I do have a few friends that I hang out with. Like theres Di, he's the oldest of us, he owns a surf shop on the boardwalk, and his right hand man is a mexican imagrant named Chino, sometimes the dude reminds me of bigfoot with a mulette. My other friends include Shogo, Syd, and Adam. We're all the same age and have the same intrests. I sat down on the end of the old run down pier, known to us as either the Cove or P.O.P. I heard someone calling my name, I looked up to see my twin sister Fox and her old boyfriend Sully. He's like so way too old for her but if he makes her happy then I guess I can deal. Fox and I are two worlds apart with personalities, she has a more fiery personality, easily ticked off, hyper and outgoing, just like fire. I'm more mellow, shy and reserved, mostly calm and cool like my precious ocean. and as far as looks go, we're also different too. she has fiery red hair with loads of tattoos and pircings, I have dirty blond hair thats long, and curly with a grungy look to it and only one tattoo. I still live with my dad while she lives with her boyfriend.
"What are you doing out here? A bit far from the hills arnt you?"
"ha ha very funny sis. I came to see you."
Fox said as she sat down with me with sully at her heels.
"Thats nice to know, whats up?"
I said streatching my legs as I made sure my surfboard didnt fall off the pier.
"You wanna come have dinner with us or do you have homework?"
Fox said with a smirk. I rolled my eyes at her and gave her the finger before standing up to dust my legs off.
"Unlike you, I'm not a drop out has been who hangs around smokey bar clubs hoping to get a reccord deal."
"Ouch mel. I've trained you well in the art of sarcasim."
I s******ed as I followed her to the car with sully. I will admit though, Sully was the perfect guy for her, the rocker type who always looked rough around the edges. I rolled my eyes at my sister once more before her helping me put my board into the back of the truck.
"How's dad doing?"
She asked. I shrugged, compleatly honest. I didnt know where he was.
"If I knew I'd tell ya. hes always working late, comming home early in the morning sleeping all day. I swear I spend more time at Di's then at home."
"Mel you know I dont like you hanging out with Di, hes this drunk high idiot."
I snorted as I climbed into Fox's truck. She pulled out of the lot and edged the car in the direction of our favorite sushi place.
"well as far as drunk goes, he drinks only a little more then you do and he only gets high once a week. Di isnt that bad fox."
Sometimes its hard to tell people we're related. I frowned as we walked into the resturant. Sully excused himself to take a phone call while Fox and I ordered drinks.
"You cant blame me for looking out for my sister now can you?"
I snorted as fox was trying to act all sisterly.
"Where do you get off on the bad *** rockstar vibe with trying to be a sister?"
"You know you could be a little less emo."
I made a face and pretended to cut at my wrist with a chopstick. I stopped when Fox gave me a glare.
"Come on, you and I both know that little phase in life is over. I have better things to do then that."
Fox snorted, inhaling half her sake up her nose.
"yeah right like what? Surfing all day?"
I scowled at her once Sully came back in, snaking his arm around her waist.
"of course, surfing is my passion, all it is, its just you and the wave, a part of nature..."
"Yeah yeah shut up ms miyagi. Look I have a friend I want you to meet. Now before you say no, just come with me on friday to meet him. I'm not trying to hook you up with him and all I just think you and he should meet."
I rolled my eyes and took a drink of my green tea.
"Fine I'll come, just don't expect anything too good alright?"
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Fox had come over friday night to help me get ready for the club. I had found a nice pair of black pants and a great red and black striped shirt. Fox was cool with teh clothes but she kept trying to brush my hair. Trust me it was more pain then it was worth. Finally she just decided to pull it into a loose pony tail.
"*** why am I letting you do this?"
I growled as Fox finally was finished.
"because you trust me?"
"really? well why should I?"
I snorted making fox scowl.
"well when have I ever did anything?"
"well there was the time with the sharks, the bears, the last guy you tried to set me up with, that one time you told me you sold my surfboard just so you could scrape up enough money to see your dork of a boyfriend in concert...."
"ok ok I get it, just go with me on it alright?"
"Fine."
I said as fox led me out to the car where Sully was waiting. we drove to some small club in the hills, making me even more uncomfortable. I hated the hills for a good reason. It was **** on wheels for me. This was just probably one of Fox's half baked schemes to try and get something out of someone.
"I hope your right..."
I muttered as Sully parked the car and we got out and walked up to the club enterance. One look at sully and the big bouncer let us right in. there was the low throbbing bass of some wacked out techno ****, not my music really, I'm a big fan of bands like AFI, Fallout Boy, Avenged Sevenfold, HIM, the 69eyes, Hanoi Rocks, Taking Back Sunday bands like that. I saw fox wave at a guy with long feathery black hair and dark green eyes. I knew who he was and I immedeatly turned to walk out of the club if Fox hadnt caught me by my shirt collar stopping me in my tracks.
"Oh no you don't, just go talk to him."
"yea....no.... no I so don't think so."
"Come on Mel..."
I gave my sister a pleading look, but she wouldnt have it.
"You like might be used to all that rock star **** but I'm like not alright? He's Adam Lazzara, if I go talk to him I'm like gonna go all like teeny bopperish and like die."
"calm down mel."
"I am calm."
"No you arnt because you just used the word like about four, maybe five times in that one sentance. Besides if you don't talk to him, I'm gonna go tell him about that story you wrote about him."
I could bet my surfboard that I was so pale by that point in time.
"no! Fine, you're so dead. ****! here he comes!"
I wanted to give all the money in the world to dissapear on the spot as Adam came over to greet my sister.
"Adam, its good to see you. this is my sister, the one I was telling you about."
"Mel right?"
He asked me. I almost fainted. I just ended up nodding weakly at him. and when Fox said she and sully were going to dance, I wanted to kill her. Yeah I'm like totally stoked that Fox decided to introduce us but its my nerves that I'm ****** at, I can surf waves almost two stories high, I can surf in water like 10 below but I cant get up enough ***** to talk to a regular guy let alone a rock star. what the **** is fox thinking?
I stuck my hands in my pockets as I looked out over the glazz flat ocean. There was an awesome set earlier today, but i had just barely missed it by a couple of minutes. My name is Mel, I live in Venice Beach, known to the locals as Dogtown, and I surf. I live here with my dad. I'm not a very social person but I do have a few friends that I hang out with. Like theres Di, he's the oldest of us, he owns a surf shop on the boardwalk, and his right hand man is a mexican imagrant named Chino, sometimes the dude reminds me of bigfoot with a mulette. My other friends include Shogo, Syd, and Adam. We're all the same age and have the same intrests. I sat down on the end of the old run down pier, known to us as either the Cove or P.O.P. I heard someone calling my name, I looked up to see my twin sister Fox and her old boyfriend Sully. He's like so way too old for her but if he makes her happy then I guess I can deal. Fox and I are two worlds apart with personalities, she has a more fiery personality, easily ticked off, hyper and outgoing, just like fire. I'm more mellow, shy and reserved, mostly calm and cool like my precious ocean. and as far as looks go, we're also different too. she has fiery red hair with loads of tattoos and pircings, I have dirty blond hair thats long, and curly with a grungy look to it and only one tattoo. I still live with my dad while she lives with her boyfriend.
"What are you doing out here? A bit far from the hills arnt you?"
"ha ha very funny sis. I came to see you."
Fox said as she sat down with me with sully at her heels.
"Thats nice to know, whats up?"
I said streatching my legs as I made sure my surfboard didnt fall off the pier.
"You wanna come have dinner with us or do you have homework?"
Fox said with a smirk. I rolled my eyes at her and gave her the finger before standing up to dust my legs off.
"Unlike you, I'm not a drop out has been who hangs around smokey bar clubs hoping to get a reccord deal."
"Ouch mel. I've trained you well in the art of sarcasim."
I s******ed as I followed her to the car with sully. I will admit though, Sully was the perfect guy for her, the rocker type who always looked rough around the edges. I rolled my eyes at my sister once more before her helping me put my board into the back of the truck.
"How's dad doing?"
She asked. I shrugged, compleatly honest. I didnt know where he was.
"If I knew I'd tell ya. hes always working late, comming home early in the morning sleeping all day. I swear I spend more time at Di's then at home."
"Mel you know I dont like you hanging out with Di, hes this drunk high idiot."
I snorted as I climbed into Fox's truck. She pulled out of the lot and edged the car in the direction of our favorite sushi place.
"well as far as drunk goes, he drinks only a little more then you do and he only gets high once a week. Di isnt that bad fox."
Sometimes its hard to tell people we're related. I frowned as we walked into the resturant. Sully excused himself to take a phone call while Fox and I ordered drinks.
"You cant blame me for looking out for my sister now can you?"
I snorted as fox was trying to act all sisterly.
"Where do you get off on the bad *** rockstar vibe with trying to be a sister?"
"You know you could be a little less emo."
I made a face and pretended to cut at my wrist with a chopstick. I stopped when Fox gave me a glare.
"Come on, you and I both know that little phase in life is over. I have better things to do then that."
Fox snorted, inhaling half her sake up her nose.
"yeah right like what? Surfing all day?"
I scowled at her once Sully came back in, snaking his arm around her waist.
"of course, surfing is my passion, all it is, its just you and the wave, a part of nature..."
"Yeah yeah shut up ms miyagi. Look I have a friend I want you to meet. Now before you say no, just come with me on friday to meet him. I'm not trying to hook you up with him and all I just think you and he should meet."
I rolled my eyes and took a drink of my green tea.
"Fine I'll come, just don't expect anything too good alright?"
_______________
Fox had come over friday night to help me get ready for the club. I had found a nice pair of black pants and a great red and black striped shirt. Fox was cool with teh clothes but she kept trying to brush my hair. Trust me it was more pain then it was worth. Finally she just decided to pull it into a loose pony tail.
"*** why am I letting you do this?"
I growled as Fox finally was finished.
"because you trust me?"
"really? well why should I?"
I snorted making fox scowl.
"well when have I ever did anything?"
"well there was the time with the sharks, the bears, the last guy you tried to set me up with, that one time you told me you sold my surfboard just so you could scrape up enough money to see your dork of a boyfriend in concert...."
"ok ok I get it, just go with me on it alright?"
"Fine."
I said as fox led me out to the car where Sully was waiting. we drove to some small club in the hills, making me even more uncomfortable. I hated the hills for a good reason. It was **** on wheels for me. This was just probably one of Fox's half baked schemes to try and get something out of someone.
"I hope your right..."
I muttered as Sully parked the car and we got out and walked up to the club enterance. One look at sully and the big bouncer let us right in. there was the low throbbing bass of some wacked out techno ****, not my music really, I'm a big fan of bands like AFI, Fallout Boy, Avenged Sevenfold, HIM, the 69eyes, Hanoi Rocks, Taking Back Sunday bands like that. I saw fox wave at a guy with long feathery black hair and dark green eyes. I knew who he was and I immedeatly turned to walk out of the club if Fox hadnt caught me by my shirt collar stopping me in my tracks.
"Oh no you don't, just go talk to him."
"yea....no.... no I so don't think so."
"Come on Mel..."
I gave my sister a pleading look, but she wouldnt have it.
"You like might be used to all that rock star **** but I'm like not alright? He's Adam Lazzara, if I go talk to him I'm like gonna go all like teeny bopperish and like die."
"calm down mel."
"I am calm."
"No you arnt because you just used the word like about four, maybe five times in that one sentance. Besides if you don't talk to him, I'm gonna go tell him about that story you wrote about him."
I could bet my surfboard that I was so pale by that point in time.
"no! Fine, you're so dead. ****! here he comes!"
I wanted to give all the money in the world to dissapear on the spot as Adam came over to greet my sister.
"Adam, its good to see you. this is my sister, the one I was telling you about."
"Mel right?"
He asked me. I almost fainted. I just ended up nodding weakly at him. and when Fox said she and sully were going to dance, I wanted to kill her. Yeah I'm like totally stoked that Fox decided to introduce us but its my nerves that I'm ****** at, I can surf waves almost two stories high, I can surf in water like 10 below but I cant get up enough ***** to talk to a regular guy let alone a rock star. what the **** is fox thinking?