Dark Angel Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 I wrote this poem today. Doesn't rhyme, but then again, not all poems have to rhyme. Enjoy, well, you probably won't... Welcome to my life, My times, pain and suffering. Say hello to darkness, And goodbye to hope. I've lived like this Since I don't know when. I wish it would go away, But it won't. I have no life anymore, I don't know why, so don't even ask. All I know is that I woke up one day, And I felt like this. I begin to get more of an attitude, Towards my parents, And become more dark, Towards my friends. I feel so depressed, So alone in this world. I'm starting to drown, Drowning in hopelessness. I think I've fallen to far down. To far down to pick myself up. No one sees me there, No one tries to help me up. I'm lost in this world, Drowning in hopelessness. I wish I knew why, but don't, So just leave me to die alone. Quote [broken External Image]:http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y94/fantasyhorse/NnyBanner2.gif I'm sorry I don't subcomb myself to your fashion If life were simple, what'd be the point of it? No, you got that backwards. I'm the one who's normal, stuck in an abnormal world. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LpLuVaGuRl Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 omg! genius. . . i really relate to this. ur one great poet! Quote [broken External Image]:http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/6301/chesterbennington7kq.jpg ~LpLuVaGuRl~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marizka Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 I love it! I can so relate to this one too, and you described it so well. great work! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/1f3f1672c41a196591ae77f9d8e11a0a.jpg This one world vision Turns us in to compromise What good's religion When it's each other we despise Damn the government Damn their killing Damn their lies Placebo-Sleeping With Ghosts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
numbStruck Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 Wow thats a great poem, i cant relate to it buts its still great. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/da86c46ecd0b956e1ffcebb973f5fe2e.jpg"Wooooooooooo Three Cheers for the Green Ducky." And thanks "Azem" for the cool sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xblackwidow20X Posted June 16, 2005 Share Posted June 16, 2005 awsome peom!!!!! good job Quote [broken External Image]:http://www.powow.com/hinacnj/BLACKWIDOWLP.gif I don't need you anymore, I dont want to be ignored, i dont need one more day, Of you wasting me away................ WITH NO APOLOGIES!!!! http://www.myspace.com/xblackwidow20x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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