Diseased

[darkprincess]

Diseased

Crying Revolution, Crying out the disease,

sickly manifestation if you please,

bleeding scars, sharp thorns to my eyes,

your simple requests, foreshadowing demise.

Analyzed tears, results within the hour,

breaths of my soul, agony you devour,

plausible revision of my absurd thought,

leading onto the musty path of distraught.

Dust on the soles sticks like the pain,

causing the heart its strength to feign,

hail the conqueror, the mighty force,

as portrayed upon his black arabian horse.

criticism/comments is/are welcome <3

 

[diana]

Hey, thats soooo deap! You need to read it again and again to get it_what is it bout... Its like real poetry, its not symple but accually very hard to understand... Great job!

 

[ForgottenKid]

That was a really deep poem. I like it...alot.

 

[darkprincess]

kool u guys liked it. i thank you both for commenting!!! :thumbsup: