Enternal Scars.

[Greyfoxx]

Enternal Scars.

Years ago you hurt me

Now I know I’ll never be free.

Enternal scars are on my soul.

My soul has paid the ultimate toll.

Trust may never come to me again

Not even if you act like a friend.

People never believed what I said.

So you were never convicted of the deed.

Nobody understands what it’s like.

Having your soul torn apart.

I tried to put the pieces back.

But I’ll always have the everlasting Enternal scars.

Now, after years of torture

I am still suffering from the hurt.

That everlasting hurt upon me.

I will never be free from it.

My mind and soul are still suffering

Even if I try, I know I cannot escape it.

The hurt still burns into me.

The pain is always there.

And you still go free.

Knowing perfectly well of what you did.

And yet you go on, with a smile on your face.

And behind that smile, is my torturer.

And my soul is never going to be set free.

 

[Pheonix791989]

**** thats good fox. sis you ought to make a book of poetry or sumthin

 

[Ravynlee]

Very deep, emotive, personal... and heavy, yes. But in parts I felt like I could relate - and that's what defines good writing from ****. Having the ability to put feelings into words and transfer them so that others feel it too... it's a gift that some just can't do. You do it well. A lot of people do it well here... anyways, great work.

Heavy. Me likey very muchly

~Rav

 

[Greyfoxx]

thanks, its is very heavy, i admitt, but it is what i feel... so thank you