Escape

[MrRandomGuy]

Scream as much as you like

You'll never get away

The more you flee and run

The closer you get to be done

You run but soon you'll find

That you're only running in your mind

You can't escape, you cannot hide

Nothing can save your cute little hide

You have crossed the line and can't go back

Running will get you closer to death

You will never be free

Or ever be filled with glee

Because once you start to run

Your life has already been done.

 

[keza]

You can't escape, you cannot hide

Nothing can save your cute little hide~lol i like that bit...haha

but seriously its really good, short, and it works...

'You run but soon you'll find

That you're only running in your mind' ~i like that line...*claps* cool!!!

 

[gaia89]

yup..i agree with keza..i like it too

however,some parts of the rhymes can be improved

 

[LPpinkfreak821]

i like that alot. it is really good. it so SPIFFY..lol seriously now, i really like it alot. it's very cool (and is going up on my wall.. lol)

 

[lpp]

sounds like me.

very good

 

[MrRandomGuy]

yup..i agree with keza..i like it too
however,some parts of the rhymes can be improved

yeah, they could, of cource it wasn't the best I could do, I did it off the top of my head at 2 in the morning out of boredom

 

[uwantme2b]

I really like that, it's good. Especially this bit:

You run but soon you'll findThat you're only running in your mind