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Noodles

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I walk to my home

Which is nothing anymore

Just a past memory

That has been lost at sea

When I stop and think about it

I wonder if I was ever there

Or did I imagine it

Seeming no one cares

 

I try to think of my past

But all it was one big flash

Am I even real now

Because all I can do is fall down

 

The little kid in my mind

Has been crying for quiet some time

His scrapes and bruises

From his fight with the older losers

But nobody helped him out

When he got beat up, and fell down

 

I walk the desert road

As I did many times before

With my bag of empty loads

Ready to fire through the door

Of my lethal memories

The ones that you never see

 

I was pushed to the beyond

To a place where I am someone

The spectators gather around the body

To realise I was a nobody

They shrug their shoulders

So they look no further

Not caring about my future

 

Feeling this emptyness

That was never missed

Is being what said is to be blissed

But they can't feel this

When I slowly fall down

To the dead silent sound

 

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Amazing, Noodles!!!!!!

I luv the part:

 

"I walk the desert road

As I did many times before

With my bag of empty loads

Ready to fire through the door

Of my lethal memories

The ones that you never see"

 

Very talented....

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