th3ory Posted January 4, 2005 Share Posted January 4, 2005 As days go by Emotions change But certain thoughts They never change The minutes pass The hours The days But certain moments They just stay the same. From good to bad And bad to good The paintings change But not the frame All is lost Inside this hole Hole of pain, of darkness, and cold Its like a puzzle Of identical squares Too many ways The shapes can be paired And when your finished It always seems That the final result Hasnt even changed. Your back where you started Trying to dust off the pain But you cant figure out how to washout the stain the waters dirty the cloth is dry life stands still and you start to cry peaceful as a dove but you can not fly your locked in this moment as life passes you by. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img185.exs.cx/img185/572/imwithyouimgrdt3wc.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilightcrimson7 Posted January 4, 2005 Share Posted January 4, 2005 wow. that.was.awesome. you have talent!! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/caa111db447cb1d28d713cebad979c8d.png ...:away and onward:... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rain Posted January 4, 2005 Share Posted January 4, 2005 i like it...there are a few places that didnt flow well...but you mad up for it wiht alot of REALY good lines... Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/5759b415544d1549a203fbc43a45360e.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chester_Crazy Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 I likey! Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angelwithburntwings Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 i like that, well good! :thumbsup: Quote I remember your other account being banned OOPS!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ocean_soul Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 wow that's really great :thumbsup: i really like it Quote Never sigh for better world, it's already composed played and told Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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