Hey people. This album's called "16 Cries for Help"

Hey people. I haven't been on here since 2003. Anyway, if I was annoying back then, I'm a whole different person so... whatever. Anyway, I play guitar and drums and I have been writing an album. It will have 16 songs. I have written 4 that MIGHT be on there, so I'm going to post them here. I hope you enjoy them.

This song is about a friend who had two personalities.

1. The Bipolar Song

verse I

There's a face that you hide everyday

A face that fails you in every way

You seem like you're scared of yourself

Don't be ashamed to admit that you need help

So quit telling me that you're fine & well

You're putting yourself in a living Hell

And now, deep inside of you, there's a hole

A hole that used to contain your soul

verse II

Your mindset has been scaring me

Your vision, one I'd hate to see

You're heart's turned black, what to do?

You don't care, you've nothing left to lose

And you think that I'm so full of hate

You've gone downhill, now whatcha think of fate?

You're slowly but surely falling off the ball

Will your ignorance be your downfall?

chorus

I'm gonna throw you away

I'll never let you down

I'm gonna shove you away

I'm gonna throw you around

And I've got something to say

I'll give you something I've found

I'll never do that for you

I'm not determined or bound

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(guitar solo)

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This song was written today. I have a guitar part for it, and am wondering if drums or bass is even necessary. This song is about my grandmother, who lived around a forest. She died last year.

2. A Better Place

Verse I

The memory of your loving eyes never cease to haunt me

You're a rose in a land of stone

Nothing you couldn't do; you helped me learn and grow

I still think of you; I can't believe you're gone

I've known you for so long

You were kind to everyone you met

You knew everything; you left no plain unseen

A few years ago you knew that it was almost time for you to go

That didn't ever bring you down

I was lost but you found me

I still love you, can't you see?

Chorus

And I love you

The woman who became a part of me

The thought of you in a better place

It comforts me

Verse II

You mean so much to me

Looking at your picture brings me back

To a time long ago; that's a memory I never will let go

That house: The one I grew up in

I wish for just one day, we could all be there again

I want to go back to that waterfall

We sat by it for hours, not a moment ever sour

You did so much for me

I know we'll meet again, in the end, yeah, we all win

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This song's about Katrina.

Comedown

verse I

I've figured out what you're all about

And now I don't have a doubt

I trust in you... I know you can do this

I live for you... I know you'll be proud of this

chorus

So let the rain come down and right all the wrongs

That we've dealt with for so long

So let the rain come down and give us everything

That we've wished for for so long

Oh... so long... so long

verse II

No one would've ever dreamed of this

No longer, the cold wind that I kiss

I always had faith... but never in my dreams...

I never would've thought of this

No matter what it seems

Its great to see people give a s***

chorus

So let the rain come down and right all the wrongs

That we've dealt with for so long

So let the rain come down and give us everything

That we've wished for for so long

Oh... so long... so long

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speaking quietly

I guess this just goes to show that good things can come out of disasters...

Pick Up the Pieces

verse I

You tell me to pick up the pieces

But I'm at the end of my rope

Can't you see this?

You say I was lost but now I'm found

You've gotten me so high with your lies

The only way I've got to go is down

(pick up the pieces...)

verse II

You tell me lose my ideals

I understand opinions

But this is just evil

You tell me to regain control

But how can I do that

If you've stolen my soul

bridge

So don't tell me to start again

So don't tell me to let you in

So don't want me to give in

You think you can always win

Well mistakes like that can cost you your life

You always said you believed in the hype

I wish you could see it my way

I wish you could be fair someday

Verse III

You tell me to be a little more grateful

Well I want you to be

A little less hateful

You tell me to stop moping & cheer up

How can I do that

If you don't give a fuck?

Nice songs, I like the feeling you put in them.

One thing though, how were you on here in 2003?

Nice songs, I like the feeling you put in them.

One thing though, how were you on here in 2003?

i was actually wondering the exact same thing! but i thought...maybe they were just lurking around the forums as a guest and finally decided to join.. *shrug* i don't know

wow great songs out them on, lol my mums bipolor she dont have two personalities,

i think you mean borderline diorder or slipt personalitie, but meh