In Me <<<<Poem

[Greyfoxx]

Hey all. This is a poem i wrote. Enjoy.

In Me

Darkness flows through my veins

Evil is pumped out of my heart

Nobody can excape it

No, not even you.

When the sun goes down,

My evil comes out

I like my evil better than the normal

So it stays with me

Wherever I may go, you can see

Red Flashes in my eyes

The Darkness is in me

What are you goig to do?

 

[twilightcrimson7]

I like it. Its evil &lt;3

 

[Greyfoxx]

Thank You.

 

[uwantme2b]

Like I said yesterday, I really like that. Nice work.

 

[Greyfoxx]

Like I said yesterday, Thanks. I am not used to sharing my work with many people. so this is very hard to let ppl see it

 

[uwantme2b]

Well it's good that you did. I'm pretty much like that, I don't like posting my own creations on forums and stuff. It's good to try and do so though, because more often that not the responses will be positive.

 

[keza]

wow, i really like it, its really different!

cool... *claps*

 

[Greyfoxx]

what do u mean....Different? different than what? im confused

 

[keza]

than anyother poem ive ever read before...its a gd thing...uv done a poem that could follow the same lines as alot of other poems but u didnt

u made it different and interesting...

 

[Greyfoxx]

Ah, i see. So, i am different than other peoples poems. Ah. Well, i do not like doing what other people do, thats one reason why i dont post my poems alot.

 

[twilightcrimson7]

*nod* thats true Keza, I feel like I'm not reading the same thing over and over again...it fresh and new ^^

 

[keza]

yeah, but what im saying isnt a bad thing, if it was the same then it would be uninteresting, like in stories, if the story line is similar to that of another story people arent gonna want to read it

same with this....

*for some reason i get the impression u arent taking this as a gd thing...* lol

 

[Greyfoxx]

Hmmmm...thanks for the feed-back. I understand now.....i think

its comeing as a good thing.....yea