Jews - (me)

LPHybridSnax

New member
A few of you know that I've made a few techno/ambient tracks (I just hit 50 on newgrounds), but I've always had a love for rock and metal. So, for my literature class we had a list of options of extra credit projects we could do on the book "A Canticle for Leibowitz". One option was to record a song. Of course I jumped at this. I've been drummer, guitarist, keyboards and dj for bands before, but I did this all on my own so it was my first time on vocals. The song is just supposed to be fun, I'm not the best vocalist out there, but all I want is an honest opinion how "listenable" the singing and the song itself are. The vocals are completely raw (except for the last few seconds) and it's December and Indiana so I have a small cold (nothing too major). The song is technically called "Leibowitz" for school, but I like the title "Jews" better. Listen and you'll see why.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/523612562d7fc849/

- open to constructive criticism

 

LPHybridSnax

New member
^ yeah sorry, I just posted the lyrics and I might re-do the vocals since it was my first time "singing", it's a long life I'm only gonna get better. I've just been practicing for a couple weeks... when I'm in my car lol... I'm only happy with it because my friends would literally laugh at me when I talked about doing doing vocals.

(verse one)


it's the story of Francis and the wondering Jew



if you think it's fair then Jesus can come too



they blame it on Name and his little government mission



they can say what they want I still say it was Nixon



each section is split into six hundred years



but to get through each chapter takes about six hundred beers



I don't know when this book will end



but I can only hope it's soon



cause I have the attention span



of a senile baboon






(pre-chorus)



Jews



Jews


 


(chorus)


I'm not writing a canticle for Leibowitz



cause I don't believe in that gospel Christian music ****



so crucify me because I'm not a ******* hypocrite



just like the ******* catholic priest that got caught ******* little kids



it's okay to pray so let's all say grace



(because)



they shot Francis in the face


 


Jews



Jews






(verse two)



the pope had kids that were also his nieces and nephews



but what else would you really expect Christian to do



they live on a hill all deformed and coved with sports



if they wonder into down you can stab them with a fork



this is where Wes Craven stole the "Hills Have Eyes"



but he's also a Christian Jew so I'm really not surprised



he'll always be another one



who likes to take it in the ***



because he has the same *** appeal



as a blubbly baby seal


 


(pre-chorus)


Jews



Jews


 


(chorus)


I'm not writing a canticle for Leibowitz



cause I don't believe in that gospel Christian music ****



so crucify me because I'm not a ******* hypocrite



just like the ******* catholic priest that got caught ******* little kids



it's okay to pray so let's all say grace



(because)



they shot Francis in the face


 


Jews



Jews


 


(guitar solo)


 


(pre-chorus)


Jews



Jews


 


(chorus)


I'm not writing a canticle for Leibowitz



cause I don't believe in that gospel Christian music ****



so crucify me because I'm not a ******* hypocrite



just like the ******* catholic priest that got caught ******* little kids



it's okay to pray so let's all say grace



(because)



they shot Francis in the face


 


Jews



Jews



He-



-brews


 


(chorus)


I'm not writing a canticle for Leibowitz



cause I don't believe in that gospel Christian music ****



so crucify me because I'm not a ******* hypocrite



just like the ******* catholic priest that got caught ******* little kids



it's okay to pray so let's all say grace



(because)



they shot Francis in the face


 


(outro)


Jews



Jews



Jews



Jews



Jews



Jews



Jews


 
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