Jews - (me)

A few of you know that I've made a few techno/ambient tracks (I just hit 50 on newgrounds), but I've always had a love for rock and metal. So, for my literature class we had a list of options of extra credit projects we could do on the book "A Canticle for Leibowitz". One option was to record a song. Of course I jumped at this. I've been drummer, guitarist, keyboards and dj for bands before, but I did this all on my own so it was my first time on vocals. The song is just supposed to be fun, I'm not the best vocalist out there, but all I want is an honest opinion how "listenable" the singing and the song itself are. The vocals are completely raw (except for the last few seconds) and it's December and Indiana so I have a small cold (nothing too major). The song is technically called "Leibowitz" for school, but I like the title "Jews" better. Listen and you'll see why.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/523612562d7fc849/

- open to constructive criticism

^ yeah sorry, I just posted the lyrics and I might re-do the vocals since it was my first time "singing", it's a long life I'm only gonna get better. I've just been practicing for a couple weeks... when I'm in my car lol... I'm only happy with it because my friends would literally laugh at me when I talked about doing doing vocals.

(verse one)

it's the story of Francis and the wondering Jew

if you think it's fair then Jesus can come too

they blame it on Name and his little government mission

they can say what they want I still say it was Nixon

each section is split into six hundred years

but to get through each chapter takes about six hundred beers

I don't know when this book will end

but I can only hope it's soon

cause I have the attention span

of a senile baboon

(pre-chorus)

Jews

Jews

(chorus)

I'm not writing a canticle for Leibowitz

cause I don't believe in that gospel Christian music shit

so crucify me because I'm not a fucking hypocrite

just like the goddamn catholic priest that got caught fucking little kids

it's okay to pray so let's all say grace

(because)

they shot Francis in the face

Jews

Jews

(verse two)

the pope had kids that were also his nieces and nephews

but what else would you really expect Christian to do

they live on a hill all deformed and coved with sports

if they wonder into down you can stab them with a fork

this is where Wes Craven stole the "Hills Have Eyes"

but he's also a Christian Jew so I'm really not surprised

he'll always be another one

who likes to take it in the bum

because he has the same sex appeal

as a blubbly baby seal

(pre-chorus)

Jews

Jews

(chorus)

I'm not writing a canticle for Leibowitz

cause I don't believe in that gospel Christian music shit

so crucify me because I'm not a fucking hypocrite

just like the goddamn catholic priest that got caught fucking little kids

it's okay to pray so let's all say grace

(because)

they shot Francis in the face

Jews

Jews

(guitar solo)

(pre-chorus)

Jews

Jews

(chorus)

I'm not writing a canticle for Leibowitz

cause I don't believe in that gospel Christian music shit

so crucify me because I'm not a fucking hypocrite

just like the goddamn catholic priest that got caught fucking little kids

it's okay to pray so let's all say grace

(because)

they shot Francis in the face

Jews

Jews

He-

-brews

(chorus)

I'm not writing a canticle for Leibowitz

cause I don't believe in that gospel Christian music shit

so crucify me because I'm not a fucking hypocrite

just like the goddamn catholic priest that got caught fucking little kids

it's okay to pray so let's all say grace

(because)

they shot Francis in the face

(outro)

Jews

Jews

Jews

Jews

Jews

Jews

Jews