L.A. Falling

New original story. Mike in this story is not The Glue. Sorry ladies and gents.

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~INTRO~

The summer Los Angeles fell was hot and dry with a stink of motor oil and death in the air. I was only seventeen when the first bomb dropped. Senior year had been a long fought journey and on the day of graduation, a whisper of an unknown war had drifted through the air, making its way slowly from each scholars ear to another. But, without hesitation, we threw up our hats and left all rumors stay embedded in those bleachers metal seats, bolts and all. We let ourselves forget it all over the sight of a graduation gift or two. It wasn't until a week or so later that those forgotten words, sunken into those bleachers, suddenly became our lives. No more gifts or cake or good-byes to college bound friends. The extermination began and we had to do all that was in our power to stay alive...

~PART ONE~

The Rules Of War: Civilians are to be unharmed and protected by any means necessary.

The Ferris wheel spun gracefully on the pier, the lights blurring into the purple- pink dusk. As I looked up, I could see kids hands and stuffed prizes hanging from the sides. Neon coloured elephants and giraffes hung from the edges, creating a colourful montage of animals and lights. I laughed a little and noticed a blue object hurtling to the ground from one of the carts further up. It landed with a splat. A snow cone, now nothing but a blue sugary and watery mess on the ground. The contents spilled from the goopy, yellow cardboard. Small pieces of ice were floating in the cold liquid.

The line shifted forward and I moved with the wave of people. We were almost at the front and were bound to be one of the next groups up. My stomach churned. Heights... Ive had a fear of them since I was a child. I wouldnt be standing in this line of people if it werent for being coaxed on. "Its in honor of graduation," my friends told me. Honor or not, heights are still frightening. And theyre lucky they even pried me from my home and the grips of my parents.

Ever since graduation, where the words of a war on the east coast began, they have been uneasy about the thought of letting me out. Rumor has it that a militia group from another country came in and started reeking havok in Hartford, Connecticut. Unknown (to the public at least) tensions have been raging on for months now and weve had plenty of warnings and incidents. But most have proved false. Its said to be spreading further west, but I wouldnt worry much about it. Everyone is in a panicked tizzy and dont know left from right or north from south.

If we were indeed "teetering on chaos" as our teachers and other officials have said, then why havent we felt this huge shock wave of violence? Nothing to worry about... its all just a load of poppy ****.

As if life couldnt get more hectic, Im tapped on the shoulder by the young kid working the Ferris wheel. Its our turn to get on. With a quivering foot, I step on, followed by my friends, Mike on one side, Colton on the other. Everyone else seats themselves around the perimeter of the cart. I stay far from the door, in fear that I, in my gracefulness, will manage to fall out.

Im shaking uncontrollably now and my heart drops with the rocking of the rising cart. I take a last look around and catch Mikes eye. He just nods, smiles, and looks away. I dont blame him.

I close my eyes. The swaying gets worse and I think Ill vomit. Make it stop! And soon enough, it does after a screeching and jerking halt. This happens again and again until I find the courage to take a peek through my tightly closed eyes. I can barely breathe. I open one eye and lean over the edge. What I see is an almost undescribable beauty. An ocean of blue unfolds in front of us, shimmering with the evening sun. A sea of lights and people swirl below us. The wind blows into my face. Its dry and warm. My hair whips in my face and I watch the setting sun. Mike looks back with me and grabs hold of my hand. And suddenly, I feel like Im going to fall. I hold onto the side tightly and close my eyes again. He lets go.

I can still feel the breeze on my skin and the salty smelling air travel through my nose. But I dont open my eyes. I picture the sun in my head and think that its good enough. Get me down. Get me down! And then, its over, and the sea of lights and people flood my eyes again. Mike gives me a helping hand in knowing to my wobbly steps. I want to cry.

He tried to smile, "That wasnt so bad now was it?"

I look back out to the sun. Its almost completely gone. Dipping into the horizon behind the California waves. My eyes travel back to him, but hes gone, walking with the others. The blue snow cone is still on the ground. But now, it was just a simple puddle of blue. How much Id rather have stayed down here, target to childrens stray snow cones.

I catch up with everyone to here them talk about the battles going on across the country.

"I wonder if any of this stuff is true? I mean, we never hear about it on the news. Do you thinks its just someone trying to get a rise out of everyone?" Colton asked hopefully.

"Who knows? Maybe thats just true. If so, its working." Krystal answered in her normal calm voice.

Mike fell back from the group and put his arm around my shoulder, "You okay? You seem a bit tense."

I looked straight into his eyes. Dark green, "What do you think Mike?" I demanded.

He backed off and put his hands up, "Im just asking. *** Lanny, chill a bit."

I frowned and looked at the ground, "Sorry."

No response and I look to see that Mikes not there and neither are the carnival lights.

 

andrea

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Yeah! Your posting it here! Like I said to you over at Quizilla at went for more when you get the chances.
 
Okay. The first thing you'll notice about this story is that it jumps around quite a bit. Things at first won't make much sense, but they will.

~Part TWO~

I lay on my back in the heat of the night. The air conditioner was off and so were the lights. The electricity has been cut for the past two weeks and I can't remember the last time I saw the soft, green glow of my alarm clock. I turned, helplessly caught in the sweat-drenched sheets that were plastered to my legs. I sighed. Muffled sounds of gunshots and explosions rang in the distance.

I was sweating under the sheets and in my enclosed room. I haven't been able to open up the windows since the day the war started. It's too much of a risk and just staying in this city, this country has been risky enough.

I rolled over again to end up looking at Mike's rising and falling back. He was drenched, but still somehow managed to sleep. I heard his deep breathes and could still see the wetness of his back in the pitch black of the night. An enormous explosion somewhere in the city went off.

What if?, I ask myself, What if this war never started? What if we had left? What if I was still a normal kid? But I'm not. Maybe I can never be again. I can still remember some of the day this whole thing started. The day the first explosion rippled it's way through the air. I think it was a Saturday. Yeah. And I still remember the smell of mom's cookies. Mike and Colton were over. Maybe even Krystal. Alls I remember is that we had been sitting in the living room, talking about college and future summer concerts when the ground started to shake. It must've taken awhile for the sound to get to us because no longer than a minute later did we hear the explosion. It left my ears ringing and my little brother crying.

The big bang led to us rushing down the cellar stairs and my mom in hysterics. Me, though, I was just confused. I sat the cool cement flooring with nothing even processing. The ground kept shaking, my mom and brother kept balling, and my ears kept ringing. But still nothing. I had looked on while everyone looked terrified. Colton and Krystal held each other where Mike kept his back to the wall, hugging his knees closely. Id never seen him so scared. But me, I just sat, cross-legged in the middle of the floor, taking rumble after rumble as though it were an every day thing. How was I to know that it would become just that?

And when the bombing stopped an hour later, my mom still cried, Mike still silently wept, and my ears were thudding slowly with an ever going beat. What had happened? What would happen if we left the safe confines of the four-sided concrete barrier? We didn't know. The first thing that happened were rapid words from my mothers mouth.

"Is your father alright? Did your sisters day care get hit? Where did those come from?"

We all knew, though, that it was the invaders that were rumored about days before, the invaders of the east coast that had supposedly leveled cities. And... now we knew... they were real. No made up beings.

And now, I lay in my sticky, sweaty bed alone with Mike. And I feel tired. I'm tired from war, smoke, and explosions. I'm tired of hearing the glass shattering and the ear piercing bullets. And I still wonder if there's life ahead of me. And then I sleep, finally, next to Mike's hot body and the heat of the explosions.

 

andrea

New member
Love this new update. And I'm all of jumping around. I'll just let you know when I'm lost.

Yeah Parable has a lot of religious stuff, it's what the book is mostly base on but it has some good points about the way we think and all, if you know what I mean. I had to read that for my English class and end up writing a essay for it, so when I got it back I can let you read it, that's if you want!. Anyways, love it, it's creepy, but in a good way. And like always can't wait for more on this story and the Chester one too!

Oh and just to let you know the red font color is kind of hard to read.

 
Thankies. I'd love to read it when you get it back!!! ^_^ I don't think I could write a report on that. Lol. It's a good book though. It can be quite disturbing too. Ooo... really? I'll change that. Yeah. Just let me know if you get lost. I'll be happy to explain if you do.
 
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