Let You Down

[MrRandomGuy]

You were nasty and mean

And ignored my well being

Friends we were, but now no more

Because you were a *****

I will pretend

To be your friend

So when I gain your trust

I will let you down

I will let you drown

And let go of your hand

Making you fall in quicksand

I will have the final blow

And break your inward glow

*inspired by Three Days Grace and a person*

 

[Marizka]

wwooo000! I like that!

 

[uwantme2b]

That's really good. I can hear the anger in the words.

 

[numbStruck]

a person? Oh well that was neat.... cool poem.

 

[MrRandomGuy]

thanks guys

 

[Xblackwidow20X]

I like it.....good job