my first lp fanfic

this is my first one ever of lp

chapter 1

chester days of highschool

so this is chesters first day of highschool.He really didn't want to go but he did so as he walked up the steps of the school he felt really scared to go to highschool.so as he walked into his class and the teacher said'' welcome you must be chester'' and chester said'' yes '' and the teacher said''go find a seat chester''.so chester sat by the window and he did everything right he took notes and he listend to everything she said .so the bell rang and chester ran to his locker and had troubles opening his locker and he started to kick his locker. and then this guy comes and offers to help chester out with his locker and chester said''back the fuck off asshole''and mike said'' that was my old locker last year so i can help you out if you let me plz?'' and chester finally said"fine" so mike got it opened and chester said"thnks now back the fuck off".so then chester went to his p.e class where he met up with mike again and chester said"oh shit its you again"and mike siad"yea got a prob with that?" and chester said"fuck off"and mike calmed down and said"my name is mike kenji shinoda and i'm a junior" and chester calmed down and said" i'm chester charles bennington nice to met you"so then class was over and the bell rang and chester ran to the lunch room and that when he saw the most beautiful gurl ever and as he watched her he walked in to a wall and samatha came over to see if chester was okay and she said'' are you okay sir" and chester said"i think so yea i'm good" so then chester got his lunch and went to where sam was and he said"can i sit here?" and sam said"sure you can"and chester said"thnks my name is chester" and sam said"your welcome and my name is samatha" so as the two ate lunch

together they became friends so 3 weeks later they were b/f and g/f. so they were the gest couple and chester became friends with mike and the others. he met as in joe phoenix,rob,brad.all of them and all .So chester is the king of the school the N0oB re afraid of chester .so chester and samatha and mike ,rob,brad ,phoenix,joe walked the halls of the school everyone is afraid of them and all the teachers are more afraid of chester then the others but chester tells everyone to fuck off and all so now people fear that chester is using or drinking alchol.....so the head person of the school called mrs,bennington to school because chester got into a fight with someone at aschool. So his mom came and got him and she grounded him to his room for 3 weeks.because he got suspended from school for 3 weeks.so all he did was play halo for 3 weeks straight.

so he was able to go back to school only if he didn't get in a fight again.so then he was really happy to see samatha and the other again.so then chester started to be alittle bit nicer but still told ppl to fuck off only if he was pissed off or in a bad mood and all so ppl listend to chester had to say about others opion.but still cheser had to learn about life problems!so his sister still cared about him.but he didn't care anymore so he tryed to take his own life.so he is at the hospital on the psyc ward and he woke to a docter by his side and they said you need therapy.so chester did and started to be alittle be happier then before.so he is still in school and is still has his friend and gurlfriend.so then it came to the day chester became a senior in highschool.and he was happy and he is still with sam and the others.but chester sees his theraphist 2x a week and he still loves sam with all of his heart.then it came to his senior prom and he took sam as his date to the prom so sam wore this really pretty black dress and chester wore a suitto his senior prom.so a year has gone by and chester and sam and the others are free from school now.they all have graduated.

and chapter one is done

so let me know what you think.

ps:i'm still working on chapter 2

i found, it not that it should have been hard but u no me...

its kewl, like the repeatativeness of it, tell me when chap 2 cums out, i wanna read it...

thnk you both.

so anyone else

I like it' date=' I'm curious to see where this is going keep it up :thumbsup:[/quote']

 

thnk you i'm still working on chapter 2.

thnk you i'm still working on chapter 2.

Good,cuz I wanna read more

its pretty good but if I might add' date=' try to not use the he said she said kind of thing. it makes the story seem boring. u should use words like mumbeled and things like that. It also seems like your rushing it a little. s-l-o-w d-o-w-n. Give us some details of his mom yelling at him for being suspended. go into some more detail. its really good by the way. I cant wait to see what you do with the next chaper[/quote']

 

thnks for the tips but i kinda wrote this when i was kinda really tired.

and more not so tired

Chapter 2

The Call

So now Chester and the others went to different colleges.So one day Chester got a phone call from

Mike asking if he would wanna join Hybrid Theory? so Chester said "sure but i wanna see if u guys

think i'm good enough k"so Mike said'' Okay we can do that so talk later Chester" ...Chester said"

okay bye Mike".....So day 1of auditons came and group 1 went but one by one went before the 5

band mates and then group one didn't meet there a approvel so then they took a break till day 2

so then day 2 came and then group one didn't meet there aaprovel again. so then came day 3

so then the last singer was chester and the others before chester didn't make it and chester did.

So then came there first gig with chester and there song was And One so as chester sang the

middle of the song"its to late to love me now you helped me to show me its to late to love me

now you don't even take in a word" the crowed went wild so after there little gig this guy from

record companey came up to the guys and said"hi i'm derek from wb record compeny and we

would like to sign u with our lable?" Chester said "can the 6 of us talk this over plz?" and derek

said"sure take as long as u need i have time" so the 6 guys were talking this over and then they

decide to take up on his offer so then the 6 of them came back to where he was and Chester said"

we decide to take up on ur offer Derek." so Derek said" kewl i will set up a meeting for tomorrow okay."

so and Chester said"okay see u tomorrow then."

*At the record studio*

so there at the meeting and Derek asked what there band name was.Chester said"Hybrid Theory"

and Derek said"u guys need to change ur band name."and Chester said"why the fuck do we need to

change our band name?" and Derek said "because there is another band using that name."and chester

said"fine we will.".....so the meeting was over .....and Chester was pissed off that they had to change the band

name. * At Chester's House*

Chester:So what re we going to change our name to?

Mike:Not sure Chester.

Joe:well why not choose someone to come up with a name?

Rob:yea Sounds like a good idea to me to choose one band mate to change the name.

Phoenix:I'm with Rob and Joe on this one

Brad:Yup same here...

the 5 guys decide to choose Chester so

Mike said"chester we choose u to make the new name for the band.

Chester said"fine with me.....i don't give a fuck i already had name anyway lincoln park.

and the guys agreed with the name......

* So At The Record Studio*

So the guys met up with Derek again and then they went with Derek and met in a big meeting room with

the boss of the building so then Chester stud up and said" we changed our band name to Linconl Park"

and Derek said "already we thought it would take u guys longer."Chester said"the 5 guys decide to choose

me to come up with a name...so i did"and Derek said"okay now plz sit we need to talk this cd of ur guys over."

so Chester sat down and listend.to was Derek said.........and then Derek said"so re u guys cool with this?"

Mike Said"Yes we re Derek and we re willing to fellow the rules but i'm not sure about Chester he is totally

another story and u don't wanna know. but yes we re willing to listen."Derek said"okay lets start next week."

* so its the week to record the cd*

so they were woking on the cd so as they did by the end of the year 1998 they finshed the cd hybrid theory was

done and they by 1999 they released the video for crawling.....

*At Chester's House*

so they guys and there gurl friends came over to Chester and Sam's house to celebrate the biggest task ever.

so they had a good time parting all night long.....so then everybody went home and they decide to do a concert so

they did they told Derek they wanted to so he said "okay we can do that"

so linkin park decide to plan it for july of 2000 to go from cali to atlease florida

so as linkin park was on stage and it was one step closer and as Chester screamed

*SHUT UP WHEN I'M TALKING TO YOU *

the crowed went wild.............so then they counted to finsh there tour.

so after there tour they decide to take a break for a while....

the end

ps:its longer then the first one..but its better i hope.

chapter 3 will be delayed for awhile i'm gonna take abreak from writting my fan fic...

Wow! Awesome story' date=' babe! Keep it up![/quote']

 

thnks so much tack

Chapter 3

Chester's Secert

So after there toure they went on a break so Chseter's sister called up chester

with some bad news so they talked.Kat:chester umm i have some bad news about mom and dad:

Chester:What the fuck! do u mean bad news tell me now:so Kat told Chester.Kat:umm mom

and dad were in a car crash and they didn't make it i'm really upset to k.so Chester almost dropped

his cell phone!Chester:No its a lie your just lying Kat!!:Kat:No i'm not Chester Mom and Dad are gone

so deal with it Chester okay and don't do anything stupid k:Chester:Ummm Kat i gotta go cause i'm at a video shoot:Kat: okay bye: so after the phone call Chester sat on his bed in dis beleif about his parents so then Sam walks in and asked Chester if anything was wrong and Chaz said"No Just Back off Sam."and Sam left the room crying.So the same night Chester and Sam went to bed so Chester woke in the middle of the night and was thinking about his parents and his emotions got the better of him so he went to the bathroom and took out his shoe box and took this box to the guest house and took out a needle and took the shot of the drug and he became high and took the razor and took it acrossed his wrist and then he pulled down his wrist band and went back to bed where Sam was so he crawled back in to bed.So as he slept though the moring Sam found his shoe box that beholds his drugs and razors.So Sam went to Mike 's house where Rob

Brad Phoenix and Joes were so she showed them the shoe box so Mike said"we will talk to him Sam okay."

so Sam said"thnks Mike"so Sam hugged Mike.So a few hours later Chester woke up to the guys around him

with disappointment on there faces.Chester said"why are u guys here?" so Mike pulled out Chester's shoe box and Chester almost choked Mike as Rob and Brad held Chester back.And Chester said " how the hell did you find my shoe box Mike?'' Mike said " Sam found it and asked us to talk to you Chester" and Chester said" Fuck you mike i need what in the box to feel better." so Mike opened the shoe box and opened it to find razors and drugs in the box so Mike took the box and threw it away.And Chester said"Damn you Mike how the hell am i going to forget my parents."Mike said"This is about them wonder what they will say right now chester huh?"Chester started crying and said"My Mom and Dad re DEAD they DIED in a car crash guys."So the Chester and the guys talked for hours straight then they left to there

video shoot for in the end. So the 5 guys were there for Chester so after the video was done they couldn't

find Chester anywhere so Mike went to the parking lot to the car was missing and Mike Realzied Chester had the keys to the car.So they noticed they were in the bad part of down town cali where there re drug dealers lived so then they knew chester had gone to one to get more since Mike threw out his other stash away.So as Chester returned to get the guys to take them back to his place Mike noticed Chester was acting weird!so as they got to Chester's place and he parked the car in its spot the four guys got out but Mike stayed to talk to Chester so Mike said"DAMN YOU CHESTER do you want to lose Sam again and your son and go to REHAB again and feel like SHIT there?"so Chester thought long and hard about what Mike had just said to him so Chester said"No i don't wanna lose Sam nor my son and i don't wanna go back to rehab all i want is my parents back Mike i want my Mom and Dad."so Mike took Chester in his arms and just hugged him as Chester was crying.So after about 20 or 30 minutes Mike and Chester went inside the house.And when Chester look up and saw his sister Kat standing infront of him and ran into his arms crying

. So Chester held his sister and sang my december chaz singing"this is my december this is my time of the year this is my december this is all so clear this is my december this is my snowed coverd home this is my december this me alone."so Kat had fallen asleep as Chester sang my december. So Chester carried kat

up to the guest room where he layed her on the bed in tears. So Mike went to where Chester was and

said "Don't worry she is fine Chester." so Chester felt better after hearing those words.

ps:this chapter was written in 2 days

i like it too much..

a different way of writing but it's fine..

It´s good so far' date='keep it comming:thumbsup:[/quote']

 

thnk u snowy

Woo! Awesome story my 2nd little blue smurf

thnk you my blue smurf friend

Girl you should check your grammer and spelling mistakes maybe it's good story but you need alots of things to show it like write what's in thier minds ,discribe thier feelings and actions, like how did they do this and how did they say that .And it doesn't feel like Im reading a fiction I feel more like one of my firends in school telling what happen to her the other night or something

Go to http://www.lpfiction.com and read some fictions then you'll know what Im trying to say .it's good story but you need to re-write again it to show how good is it and get rid of the slangs here lol

bye