LPtheory88
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I've never posted anything I wrote here but I decided I would just to see what you guys think. This isn't actually my first poem but it's the first one I'm putting in LPF. In my opinion, it could use a little work but oh well. I wrote this a while ago about my ex boyfriend. It doesn't have a title. Anyways, here it is:
The sun sits behind the clouds
Casting no shadow on the land.
Faces are grim
As time sifts through sand.
Slowly the hands of time turn
As things seem to move in slow motion.
This harmless night shade,
With one kiss, turns into a deadly potion.
Love should band us together
Instead of tear us apart.
I should’ve known from the beginning
That this was a bad start.
I gave you everything
And expected nothing in return.
The heart ache doesn’t hurt,
Only the after burn.
After all those pointless nights
Waiting by the phone for a call.
I never heard the ring;
Received nothing at all.
So now my days are dark
My feelings don’t exist.
I should’ve never listened to my heart
And gave you that one last kiss.
The sun sits behind the clouds
Casting no shadow on the land.
Faces are grim
As time sifts through sand.
Slowly the hands of time turn
As things seem to move in slow motion.
This harmless night shade,
With one kiss, turns into a deadly potion.
Love should band us together
Instead of tear us apart.
I should’ve known from the beginning
That this was a bad start.
I gave you everything
And expected nothing in return.
The heart ache doesn’t hurt,
Only the after burn.
After all those pointless nights
Waiting by the phone for a call.
I never heard the ring;
Received nothing at all.
So now my days are dark
My feelings don’t exist.
I should’ve never listened to my heart
And gave you that one last kiss.