Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 Okay, Ill give u a run of the story (a prologue) Mike has been cooped up in his office doing music stuff (lol) and the manager calls saying like u get a break for a while. Anna decides to get him a dog, so he can get out more. So Mike is reluctant, he doesnt want one, but Anna persuades him to. They get one, and they soon realize the dog might be more then just a pet. U like the idea?? If so, reveiw! =D Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azemkamikaze03 Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 sounds like a movie pitch but i like! Quote ¿whysoserious? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilightcrimson7 Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 lol, sounds kool Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/caa111db447cb1d28d713cebad979c8d.png ...:away and onward:... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4everLP_Shinoda Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 sounds good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted December 24, 2004 Author Share Posted December 24, 2004 Chapter 1 A simple request Mike's eyes hurt from staring at the computer screen for so long. He wanted to stop, but he wanted to get it finished at the same time. He quickly fixed a few sound levels on papercut, saved, and exited the window. He walked out of the dimly lit office and into the bright hallway. He could hear the clacking of pans and the smell of something he had neglected all day. FOOD. His stomach grumbled and walked into the kitchen. Anna was standing over the stove, stirring something in a large pot. She dropped the spoon and turned around. "Mike, I am so glad ure finished, I made some dinner!" she sed cheerfully. "Im far from finished,but ill be happy to join in dinner, ill continue my work tomorrow-" he was inerupted by the phone ringing. He went to pick it up. "Hello?" "Mike? O hi." Chester sed, sounding happy. "Hey, Chaz. Whats up?" "We can take a break, for a month or so." "Great! Im tired out from sitting at that computer...ugh" The mere thought of the moniter made him shiver. "Well, I just called to tell ya. Bye." He hung up. Mike put down the phone and walked in the kitchen. "Anna, guess what? I have a break, for a month or so!" Mike sed, his spirits were rising. "Great! More time to spend the..well, ill tell ya at dinner. DINNER TABLE "now, Anna, what did u want to tell me?" Mike asked. "Mike, U need to get out more, so, i have a favor.."Anna replied. "Wut is that?" "it is a simple request, getting a dog!" "No, I dont think so" "But Mike! U need to get out more, sitting in front of that computer for days!" Mike sighed. "Where are we gonna get it?" "The pound, why not save a life in the process?" "I dunno, Anna" "Please? Id like to kno, if I ever leave, that u have a reson to get out of the house." "Fine...okay, wen are we getting it?" "tomorrow? Okay?" "Sure...why not," he sighed. "Great! I told it was a simple request!" Ill update wen i get at least 3 reveiws!! Ttyl, bibi Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4everLP_Shinoda Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 I like it,why does mikes hates dog lol?I love them Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilightcrimson7 Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 lol, good! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/caa111db447cb1d28d713cebad979c8d.png ...:away and onward:... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted December 24, 2004 Author Share Posted December 24, 2004 He doesnt hate them...jus doesnt want one Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pheonix791989 Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 love it. hope all goes well. lol Mike dosent need to loose his pants again over a dog. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted December 24, 2004 Author Share Posted December 24, 2004 haha, Mike wont lose his pants.....or will he?? lol Chapter 2 A little TLC The next morning, Mike stepped out of the house, and walked to the already waiting SUV. He sat in the drivers seat and stuck the keys in the ignition. And the big car rolled out of the driveway and into the street. And they drove to the pound. AT THE POUND Right wen they walked in, they saw ppl in wut looked like some kind waiting room. A lady came and greeted them. "Hello! And wrlcome to the Dewey Animal Shelter!! Would u like to adopt a dog today? Or a cat?" The lady asked cheerfully. "We would like to adopt a dog" Anna persisted. "What kind of dog would u like?" the lady asked. "Uh...could we look around?" Anna asked "Ya, I want a german shepard!" Mike decided. "We dont have any in the kennels rite now." "Oh....Mrs. uh......" Mike tried looking for nametag. "Just call me Shaley" She sed. "Okay, Shaley, may we look around now?" He sighed. He wanted to get this over with. "Oh, yes! Down the hall to the right!" She sed, pointing down a long corridor. Wen they got there, they were met by frantic barking, like they were asking to be picked. They walked down the kennel block. At the end of the corridor of cages, Anna bent down to the lower cage. "Mike! Look at this one! She is adorable!" Anna sed, pointing to a Black and white dog. "It says she is a border collie." he sed, reading the tag. Then Shaley came walking up. "That dog was neglected and abused as a puppy. She loves frisbee, tho. she is a show worthy dog and needs a big place to run around." sed shaley "Mike! Its perfect! We have a huge forest like thing in our backyard, she'll be so happy!" Anna sed. Mike sighed." sure. Alright, we'll take her." he sed ADOPTION DESK Mike told her all the info. Then she asked for the name. "uh...we havent...-" Mike was interrupted by anna whispering in his ear. He nodded. "Her name is Bandit." "Show name?" the lady asked. "Uh...," anna whispered in his ear agian. he nodded, yet again. "A friendly Bandit" He concluded. "U ready to give this dog a lot of TLC?" She asked. "Yup, ready as i'll ever be." "Okay here is Bandit." She led the border Collie over to them. Bandit jumped and quivered with joy. "Come on, letsgo home." He sed, and they led the dog to the SUV. That is the end of this chapter!! ttyl, bibi :thumbsup: Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkinparkrunaway Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 Great chapter it's really good so keep it up Quote [broken External Image]:http://uploader.clausercorp.com/uploaded/dfdf.jpg Somehow I need to be alone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4everLP_Shinoda Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 kool chapter,keep it comming Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pheonix791989 Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 awesome this is going to be good. cant wait to hear the res Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black_Thought Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 yeah, bring it on! Quote Your eyes are not enough to understand my chaos... http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/34de8c5de1655a9fc020e5347ecba681.jpg Click to see a winter poem... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted December 26, 2004 Author Share Posted December 26, 2004 Thanx for all the replies, Ive been VERY busy, w/ christmas and all! O ya, Merry xmas!! Heh, here is the next chapter! Chapter 3 The Top Dog On the way home, they went to petco and bought a few things, including a frisbee. This consisted of food, treats, tennins ball, collar, and a leash. They went to the check out counter, payed, and loaded everything into the SUV. "The dog is riding in the back. Im not gonna have slobber on the seats." Mike sed. "Fine. Ill get her in the back..." She sed grabbing the leash and leading Bandit to the big trunk. Bandit hopped in and Anna closed the trunk. AT THE HOUSE Mike was tired...he just realized as they stepped thru the door. "You finally got a dog? Wow, and I thought u didnt want one." Sed his cousin, laughing. Her name was Melissa and she stayed with them a lot. She also had a dog, Benji, That didnt like Mike, and showed it by chasing him around the house. Benji came back with Mike's pants quite a bit. It was a pretty funny sight. "I kno, I kno. Anna sed it would be good for me since I was sitting at the computer so long." He sed, letting go of Bandits leash. Bandit dashed over to Melissa, barking happily. Then Benji came out. Mike was immedietly nervous. What if Bandit attacked Benji?? It would result in a fight. "Bandit! Come here, girl!" But, she didnt. That is the end of the chapter! ttyl, bibi! Reveiw for the next chapter! Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkinparkrunaway Posted December 26, 2004 Share Posted December 26, 2004 lol I wonder what Benji is gonna do, great chapter can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter Quote [broken External Image]:http://uploader.clausercorp.com/uploaded/dfdf.jpg Somehow I need to be alone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pheonix791989 Posted December 26, 2004 Share Posted December 26, 2004 lol i love this chapter. its really awesome. can't wait for u to write more. I love it so far. wonder what's going to happen next Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LPGirl Posted December 27, 2004 Share Posted December 27, 2004 its great keep it comin plz :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fire_witch_monkey Posted December 27, 2004 Share Posted December 27, 2004 kool story cant wait 4 an update, i think i know what might happen Quote Amy: honestley no matter what happens i know i'll still be making music. Ben: n i'll be making burgers. *~*slinky + esculator = never ending fun!*~* :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pheonix791989 Posted December 27, 2004 Share Posted December 27, 2004 come on up date already. im wating to see what im gonna end up doing with my dog. lol hope more comes soon Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted December 30, 2004 Author Share Posted December 30, 2004 Hiya!! Im back!! LPF was down soo i couldnt get on, lol. well here is the chapter!! Chapter 4 suprise, worries, relief Bandit stood there, just staring Benji. Then, she kinda stepped forward in whut seemed like a frightened babystep. Benji, tho, let out a low growl from deep in his throat. Then a loud bark. It sounded like the bark wen he was gonna chase mike. And that is exactly whut happened. Benji ran around Bandit. He came to Mike with a series of barks and growls. Mike, knowing wut would happen, ran for his life. Melissa and Anna laughed as Bandit ran after Mike, also. He had his dog AND Benji after him. 'Wonderful. Benji is giving my dog BAD influence. Great.' Mike thought warily, looking back to find both dogs still after him. He ran a little faster. Then, to his relief, Melissa whistled, and Benji ran to her. And there for stopped Bandit from running any further. She licked Mike's hand and jumped on him. She nearly knocked him down, and he pushed her off him. He sighed as Bandit just kept following him to the kitchen. Then, Benji came into the room. He growled. But not at Mike. It was toward bandit. Bandit gave an angry growl, and before u could even say 'no' they were entangled in a feirce fight. Then, Benji and Bandit had stopped and were licking any wounds the other dog might of inflicted. Then something weird happened, the dogs walked away TOGETHER. They didnt fight. They just walked together. And they started to sniff eachother. Bandit had actually, already, made peace w/ her enemy. That is it, for chapter 4!! Chapter 5 will be up shortly. ttyl, bibi Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkinparkrunaway Posted December 30, 2004 Share Posted December 30, 2004 great chpater I love what happens with Mike and dogs in these stories it's so funny Quote [broken External Image]:http://uploader.clausercorp.com/uploaded/dfdf.jpg Somehow I need to be alone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pheonix791989 Posted December 31, 2004 Share Posted December 31, 2004 really great i love it. I can just see this happening to him. Love your stories. they rock. you should be an english major Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted January 1, 2005 Author Share Posted January 1, 2005 Awwww, thanx!!! I wont be on for a while, my mom is in the hospital, so im kinda busy. But i will post chapter 5 VERY soon, actually, as soon as i can. Ttyl, bibi Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pheonix791989 Posted January 8, 2005 Share Posted January 8, 2005 more more you gotta write more Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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