My Poetry...

So ya this will be my thread for my poetry so I don't have to make a million and get everyone pissed off at me. I will just post like one a day cause I am lazy.

I wrote this in math class like a week ago it doesn't have a title yet. If anyone has any good ideas for a title please let me know.

 

So close to the edge

does anyone even see?

I'm slipping away

please hold on to me

 

I strive to find some worth

in this seemingly worthless existence

someone or something to hold on to

but everything I love pushes me away

 

So I am alone

its so dark and very cold

I can see the end

its so very close

but I don't want to give in

 

Tonight I will slice

Hurt, Pain and Loss

and maybe when I wake

sore and lost, I will begin again

and I will find some worth

whoa that's nice man you should write more that's if you want though

whoa that's nice man you should write more that's if you want though

 

 

Thanks, more poems or more on this poem? Also any ideas for a title?

I have no idea

cause I have some poem's and I can't even find a title from them

Ya making titles is my least favourite part because I always ene up making it something crappy and unoriginal

Yeah no Shi* aye?

I wrote this one shortly after a guy at my school killed himself

 

One Little Tree

 

One domino falls

and soon there is silence in the halls

who would have thunk

that one tradgic little punk

could cause so much chaos

 

If a tree falls in a forest

then it is free no more worries

the birds should be happy

its life is no longer crappy

why is everything so chaotic

 

When a string snaps

then you are no longer trapped

you can go home

and watch the sea foam

how did it become so chaotic

 

It's not that I am insensitive

I just don't have the incentive

to cry over things that don't affect me

over the loss of one little tree

who caused all this chaos

sad...but a good poem. touching :thumbsup:

thanks! I appreciate your comment!

I wrote this poem about my friend andrew

 

Reflections of Time

 

These lost memories

plague my thoughts

and leave me wondering...

Who am I?

 

I walk along the cold, dark passage

searching for something lost

and at the same time

losing pieces of what I have become

 

Tears stream down my face

as I remember people I have lost

forgotten in the void that is my mind

beyond recall, locked away

 

I hang my head in defeat

the memories are gone

just beyond my reach

but lost forever

Have you ever thought about sending this to a poetry magazine or something? Cause, these are really good, and I'm not just saying that.

umm... not really *blush* I think that if I sent them in and they were not accepted they would ruin my confidence. Thanks for the compliment though ^^

I wrote this one when I was really depressed last year it had pretty drawings and all, There was a noose and a spilt bottle of pills and written faintly in the background over and over was "I woke up in hell today, I woke up depressed and drained"

 

Broken Star

 

If I could remember, a face i've never seen,

Perhaps maybe, it would give me some reason to be,

I have given up hope,

I keep thinking about that escape rope,

Why I continue to hold on, I do not know,

I wish that I could just go...

Become nothing but a broken star

Far off in the pitch black night sky

 

No one will miss me

When I am gone....

 

Please forgive me...

If we never get to be together...

Goodbye....

Well, of course not everything gets accepted, that's true. But if you were to send a poem of yours in, and get rejected, you should not let something like that get you down. You still write good poems. Plus, if anything, your poems will only get better through the years.

 

I like what you do in this last one. I've seen so many poems on the same format. Now of course, one can not expect it from every poet to do unorthodox things, but when those are made, they're a fresh breeze. So seeing this one is a good sight to see. Overuse of rhyme is destroying many poems nowadays, so skipping a rhyme here and there looks nice, if you ask me. And breaking up the format in the middle of a poem, nice work! :thumbsup:

Wow, I really like you work, they have a certain flow..good work

I wrote this one about my best friend

 

Before You

 

Before You

Life was dark

I was always sad

When I met you everything changed

 

You made me realize

There was more to life

Than being sad

And alone

 

You gave me someone

Someone to hold on to

To be there for me

when I was down

 

You made me realize

the beauty of the sky

whats truly in peoples hearts

what love feels like

 

You helped me know

what it felt like to not be so alone

to have some one to hold

someone to care for

 

Thank you so much

for being there for me

Love

 

Love is pain

Love is hurt

Tears like rain

Love is worth it

 

Love is hard

It makes me want to die

But I know I have to try

I must let down my guard

 

Love is tough

Its hard to make last

Love is rough

Feelings change so fast

 

Love is Pain

But it is never in vain

so simple, yet so much said. beautiful poem, and I feel the same way really :thumbsup:

Thanks very much for your support ^^

your welcome

 

one can't help complimenting such good poems

Once Again

I choose to love someone

That didn't understand me

 

Once again

I pushed to hard to make it work

and end up hurt

 

Once Again

I made assumptions

and hurt the one I loved

 

Once Again

I have to let go

But I can't

 

Once Again

I want to take back what was said

and start all over again

 

Once again

I still love him

but I wonder if he feels the same

 

Once again

I Fucked up

and I will never know

 

Once Again

I still Love him

And I always will

wow...that's unbelievably close to how I'm feeling these days...great poem

haha well usually I write poetry when I am really depressed. so It is like my atm feelings. That was right after I broke up with my bf.

whoa man your great at this well

yes I write when I'm depressed to

but not as good as this you are really good really I'm serious