New track in progress: "Remember Me"

[2much4U]

I started work on this track about 2 months ago, and I'm sharing it now so I can get critique on what I have so far.

Recently, my grandma passed away, and I've decided to dedicate the song in her memory.

please review, as I'm hoping to use your opinions to improve it.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/217047

 

[HaziLPTonz]

oooh i like this, it sounds nice

it has abit of a sadish start, moving on to what reminds me of a lullaby, then the song hits a bit where i get sort of reminiscent? its a nice track, though im not a big fan of the last minute, i thought the build up was wonderful

if you were dedicating that to ur grandma, i think she woulda been proud

 

[LPHybridSnax]

That's a very nice gesture of you (and track).

Are you using MIDI for the keyboards/strings?

 

[2much4U]

yeah, I'm using midi for everything lol. The whole track is being done using FL Studio.

 

[GraDoN]

its pretty cool but the intro is too long for such a short song. The second half of the song sounds cool

 

[2much4U]

hows this? I just uploaded an update.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/226630