2much4U Posted March 1, 2009 Share Posted March 1, 2009 I started work on this track about 2 months ago, and I'm sharing it now so I can get critique on what I have so far. Recently, my grandma passed away, and I've decided to dedicate the song in her memory. please review, as I'm hoping to use your opinions to improve it. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/217047 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HaziLPTonz Posted March 1, 2009 Share Posted March 1, 2009 oooh i like this, it sounds nice it has abit of a sadish start, moving on to what reminds me of a lullaby, then the song hits a bit where i get sort of reminiscent? its a nice track, though im not a big fan of the last minute, i thought the build up was wonderful if you were dedicating that to ur grandma, i think she woulda been proud Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/ddd296f8f90eca79dbafae096b6d28b3.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LPHybridSnax Posted March 1, 2009 Share Posted March 1, 2009 That's a very nice gesture of you (and track). Are you using MIDI for the keyboards/strings? Quote That's sexual harassment, officer! (5/8/09) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2much4U Posted March 1, 2009 Author Share Posted March 1, 2009 yeah, I'm using midi for everything lol. The whole track is being done using FL Studio. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GraDoN Posted March 1, 2009 Share Posted March 1, 2009 its pretty cool but the intro is too long for such a short song. The second half of the song sounds cool Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/095443c5f5914cdd05b1d389456c201e.jpg http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8df3638f80a4f010e06ef2c959f426e8.gif http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/fe80ab99471398f0ef121d8f90c31038.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2much4U Posted April 3, 2009 Author Share Posted April 3, 2009 hows this? I just uploaded an update. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/226630 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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