Nobody's listening, Everything is fading

[Pheonix791989]

I wrote this Poem as part of a Literary Magazine that my school is putting out. It was originaly an english assigment but I felt the need to post it on here. Hope you people enjoy it.

~~Nobody's Listening, Everything is fading~~

As I sit here, I wonder,

the blank piece of paper is my voice,

ever since you left me here,

not a single word I've spoken,

words alone can't describe emotions

they cant show you how I feel.

You can't see me any ways,

you can't see the things I do

I wish you could come back once more

the only one who could listen to me.

When I used to speak no one would hear me

they would pass me by without a thought

I'd strain to hear my own voice

but you were the only one who could hear.

My memory of you is fading

like a picture drawn in the sand

as the waves crash upon the beach.

So now I write everything

I won't ever speak again,

the tears I cry are hopeless

the crimson lines are temporary.

But nothing compares to the day you left,

back when I was a little girl.

For an eight year old to loose her mom

and to grow up with out her there

You were suposed to be with me forever

atleast that's what you promised me.

I found someone else who won't ever leave me

who understands how I feel.

Even though I don't ever speak a word

they hear me just the same.

 

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I wrote this Poem as part of a Literary Magazine that my school is putting out. It was originaly an english assigment but I felt the need to post it on here. Hope you people enjoy it.
~~Nobody's Listening, Everything is fading~~

As I sit here, I wonder,

the blank piece of paper is my voice,

ever since you left me here,

not a single word I've spoken,

words alone can't describe emotions

they cant show you how I feel.

You can't see me any ways,

you can't see the things I do

I wish you could come back once more

the only one who could listen to me.

When I used to speak no one would hear me

they would pass me by without a thought

I'd strain to hear my own voice

but you were the only one who could hear.

My memory of you is fading

like a picture drawn in the sand

as the waves crash upon the beach.

So now I write everything

I won't ever speak again,

the tears I cry are hopeless

the crimson lines are temporary.

But nothing compares to the day you left,

back when I was a little girl.

For an eight year old to loose her mom

and to grow up with out her there

You were suposed to be with me forever

atleast that's what you promised me.

I found someone else who won't ever leave me

who understands how I feel.

Even though I don't ever speak a word

they hear me just the same.

that was really good i can see the poem is about death and how to express yourself....very well written

 

[Pheonix791989]

thank you so much.

 

[Xblackwidow20X]

that was really good. i can relate to that so well too. i lost my mom when i was 18. almost 3 years ago.

 

[Pheonix791989]

thanks but atleast you knew your mom for eighteen years, for me it was only eight but thanks for you kind words

 

[Xblackwidow20X]

thanks but atleast you knew your mom for eighteen years' date=' for me it was only eight but thanks for you kind words[/quote']

yeah im thank full for all 18 too. but it does get harder cuz you have more memorys to deal with. and i dont know what i woudl have done if i woudl have lost her at 8 thats hard to cuz its hard to understand at such a young age. it was hard for me to comprehend at 18. may i ask how she died?

 

[Pheonix791989]

she died of cancer and the last thing i can remember of her was back in school when she taught, she said that I was gonna be the end of her. I miss her alot, I'm going on seventeen and its sad knowing that im not gonna see her at my graduiation. how did your mom die?

 

[Xblackwidow20X]

cancer as well. yeah my mom tried to make at my graduation. she did. but im going to miss if i ever have a baby or get married. its hard for a grl to lose there mom ya know. alot of people dont seem to understand.

 

[Pheonix791989]

i know because i have a twin brother and an older brother and a dad so there's really not someone i can talk girl stuff with. I dont like my step-mom too much. but what can I say im a gurl born with a bunch of guys.

 

[Xblackwidow20X]

Yeah i have 2 brothers and i live with my dad and one of them. and i hate my dads gf who comes over. so yeah i knwo what you mean i dont have any oen to talk grl stuff with either.