Pheonix791989
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this is a story I'm writing with alyssa (fainting LP fan) so here's the first chapter of our romance/horror story. so we'll be switching on and off writing it.
They were all resting peacfully in their bunks. the eight were all asleep. Some were dreaming peacfully. Others were plagued by nightmares. There was a screaching of breaks and everyone fell out of their bunks painfully. Alyssa and Melissa tried to untangel them selves from the mass of blankets and bodies that was the band called Linkin Park. Mike swore as his and chester's heads colided together. As brad turned the light on in the small hall way, It looked like they wern't the only things that were dislodged from their usuaul spots. Everything was everywhere and the bus driver was no where to be found. Chester pulled at his boxers as he put some clothes on. Mike was busy helping everyone up. Phoenix cautiously took a step out of the bunk area, suddenly the lights went out. There was more movement in the dark and more cursing as the band and the two girls hit their heads and other body parts on bunks.
"Guys who did I just step on?"
Joe asked.
"Joe get your fat *** off me!"
Chester hissed.
"I can't see a thing...someone just sat on me!"
Alyssa said as she whimpered.
"sorry alyssa I couldnt see you."
Brad said.
"Who's *** is right infront of my face?"
Melissa asked as she reached out infront of her.
"*** Melissa stop being kinky and leave it for a hotel room! I know you like my *** but still...."
Rob said a smirk was evident in his voice. Someone finally found a flash light. The thin beam of light illuminated the floor where every one was. Phoenix held the flash light up a little higher. There were two sets of yellow eyes glowing in the front of the bus a few feet away. This made him drop the flashlight and there was a sound of broken glass as the flashlight broke. Soon there was the sound of snarling and a high pitched yell. Everyone made a mad scramble towards the sound. Rob, Chester and Melissa all did something very stupid and brave. They threw themselves at the pair of glowing eyes. There was more snarling and shouting.
"******* ****!"
Melissa shouted as Rob's foot connected solidly on the creatures head as it clamped down on her arm. There was something that sounded like a cross between a snarl and a scream as the other creature attacked Chester. There was a yelp as the one that Melissa and Rob were fighting against whined and ran off. Then Melissa ran over to chester where he was having a hard time fighting off the other thing. Rob picked up a rock and threw it as hard as he could at the beast. It then turned and launched its self at him. Melissa pushed rob out of the way as she wresteled with the creature. There was a scream in pain as razor sharp claws raked her across the stomache. Suddenly there was a wounded howl as rob dragged his body over towards Melissa. He panted as his chest was heaving up and down. He propped his head on the tour bus. Melissa then laid her head on his stomache. The three of them winced as Joe shined a light in their eyes. Mike grabbed a bunch of water bottles and towles off the bus. Alyssa was holding onto Brad like he was her last hope.
"Joe go get the first aid kit and the extra tape and gauze! Mike, Brad, Alyssa, drench the towles and put pressure on the wounds!"
Phoenix barked out orders. Everyone was too scared to question them. Joe ran back on the bus. Melissa hissed as Phoenix put presssure on her stomache.
"JOE HURRY THE **** UP!!"
Phoenix said with an air of emergency around him.
"Come on Melissa stay with me.... tell me what are the lyrics to your favorite song?"
He said as melissa's eyes slid in and out of focus.
"w-w-w-why d-d-does it feel like......n-n-night today, s-s-s-s-something ins-s-side's not right today. W-w-w-w-why am I so uptight t-t-t-t-today..............p-p-p-paranoia's all....I got left..."
Phoenix started cleaning her wounds with some rubbing alcohol. Melissa cried out when it stung as she took Rob's unwounded hand. He wrapped up her arm expertly and did the same for her stomache and leg. Phoenix them moved on to Rob, who hissed every time he was touched. Joe brought back the gauze and tape. Phoenix then moved on to chester who was unconcious. Soon Phoenix was pretty much covered in blood just like Melissa Chester and Rob were.
"I think we need to get out of here. Joe, Mike, grab the bags, Alyssa and Brad get the food in the cooler, Rob can you carry Melissa? She won't be able to walk on that leg.''
Rob nodded a yes as he swept her up like she weighed nothing. Phoenix hoisted Chester up. Joe came down with almost three duffel bags on his arms with the bookbag of the first aid suplies, Mike carried the rest of the stuff as well as the flashlight Joe had. Alyssa and Brad carried one, so did Melissa. Mike's eyes fell on a dirt road that went through the trees.
"If we follow that dirt road then we can find some place to stay."
Mike said.They nodded and followed mike. He and Joe led the way with the flash light while joe carried his bamboo kendo stick for protection. They had been walking for almost an hour and a half before they came to a clearing. There was an old white house with a green roof. There were flickering lights on in the windows. Mike knocked on the door. It swung open with the lightest touch. Mike peered his head in and took a look around. He and Joe dropped the bags and set off to check the old house while the others stayed behinde. Brad shined his light on an old plaque that was on the door.
"The Rainkin House. Built 1764."
He read out loud. It looked like one of those old southern plantations. Mike and joe came back from their expidition.
"There's no one in here. I guess we can just stay the night here."
Mike said. Alyssa gave a laugh.
"Why do I have the feeling that this might end up like a scooby do episode?"
They all laughed.
"We should all stay together. There's a big living room downstairs so we can stay there."
Chester's red mohawked hair bobbed up and down as Phoenix lugged him into the room where Joe had put the sleeping bags out. Rob gently laid Melissa down on the sleeping bag between him and Phoenix. Alyssa and brad (who are dating by the way) set the cooler down and were getting snuggly by the fire place. Joe was busy reading some book he found on one of the bookcases. Then there was a howl right out the window where Joe sat. he jumped up scared.
“What the **** is that?”
hope you like the story ur turn alyssa
They were all resting peacfully in their bunks. the eight were all asleep. Some were dreaming peacfully. Others were plagued by nightmares. There was a screaching of breaks and everyone fell out of their bunks painfully. Alyssa and Melissa tried to untangel them selves from the mass of blankets and bodies that was the band called Linkin Park. Mike swore as his and chester's heads colided together. As brad turned the light on in the small hall way, It looked like they wern't the only things that were dislodged from their usuaul spots. Everything was everywhere and the bus driver was no where to be found. Chester pulled at his boxers as he put some clothes on. Mike was busy helping everyone up. Phoenix cautiously took a step out of the bunk area, suddenly the lights went out. There was more movement in the dark and more cursing as the band and the two girls hit their heads and other body parts on bunks.
"Guys who did I just step on?"
Joe asked.
"Joe get your fat *** off me!"
Chester hissed.
"I can't see a thing...someone just sat on me!"
Alyssa said as she whimpered.
"sorry alyssa I couldnt see you."
Brad said.
"Who's *** is right infront of my face?"
Melissa asked as she reached out infront of her.
"*** Melissa stop being kinky and leave it for a hotel room! I know you like my *** but still...."
Rob said a smirk was evident in his voice. Someone finally found a flash light. The thin beam of light illuminated the floor where every one was. Phoenix held the flash light up a little higher. There were two sets of yellow eyes glowing in the front of the bus a few feet away. This made him drop the flashlight and there was a sound of broken glass as the flashlight broke. Soon there was the sound of snarling and a high pitched yell. Everyone made a mad scramble towards the sound. Rob, Chester and Melissa all did something very stupid and brave. They threw themselves at the pair of glowing eyes. There was more snarling and shouting.
"******* ****!"
Melissa shouted as Rob's foot connected solidly on the creatures head as it clamped down on her arm. There was something that sounded like a cross between a snarl and a scream as the other creature attacked Chester. There was a yelp as the one that Melissa and Rob were fighting against whined and ran off. Then Melissa ran over to chester where he was having a hard time fighting off the other thing. Rob picked up a rock and threw it as hard as he could at the beast. It then turned and launched its self at him. Melissa pushed rob out of the way as she wresteled with the creature. There was a scream in pain as razor sharp claws raked her across the stomache. Suddenly there was a wounded howl as rob dragged his body over towards Melissa. He panted as his chest was heaving up and down. He propped his head on the tour bus. Melissa then laid her head on his stomache. The three of them winced as Joe shined a light in their eyes. Mike grabbed a bunch of water bottles and towles off the bus. Alyssa was holding onto Brad like he was her last hope.
"Joe go get the first aid kit and the extra tape and gauze! Mike, Brad, Alyssa, drench the towles and put pressure on the wounds!"
Phoenix barked out orders. Everyone was too scared to question them. Joe ran back on the bus. Melissa hissed as Phoenix put presssure on her stomache.
"JOE HURRY THE **** UP!!"
Phoenix said with an air of emergency around him.
"Come on Melissa stay with me.... tell me what are the lyrics to your favorite song?"
He said as melissa's eyes slid in and out of focus.
"w-w-w-why d-d-does it feel like......n-n-night today, s-s-s-s-something ins-s-side's not right today. W-w-w-w-why am I so uptight t-t-t-t-today..............p-p-p-paranoia's all....I got left..."
Phoenix started cleaning her wounds with some rubbing alcohol. Melissa cried out when it stung as she took Rob's unwounded hand. He wrapped up her arm expertly and did the same for her stomache and leg. Phoenix them moved on to Rob, who hissed every time he was touched. Joe brought back the gauze and tape. Phoenix then moved on to chester who was unconcious. Soon Phoenix was pretty much covered in blood just like Melissa Chester and Rob were.
"I think we need to get out of here. Joe, Mike, grab the bags, Alyssa and Brad get the food in the cooler, Rob can you carry Melissa? She won't be able to walk on that leg.''
Rob nodded a yes as he swept her up like she weighed nothing. Phoenix hoisted Chester up. Joe came down with almost three duffel bags on his arms with the bookbag of the first aid suplies, Mike carried the rest of the stuff as well as the flashlight Joe had. Alyssa and Brad carried one, so did Melissa. Mike's eyes fell on a dirt road that went through the trees.
"If we follow that dirt road then we can find some place to stay."
Mike said.They nodded and followed mike. He and Joe led the way with the flash light while joe carried his bamboo kendo stick for protection. They had been walking for almost an hour and a half before they came to a clearing. There was an old white house with a green roof. There were flickering lights on in the windows. Mike knocked on the door. It swung open with the lightest touch. Mike peered his head in and took a look around. He and Joe dropped the bags and set off to check the old house while the others stayed behinde. Brad shined his light on an old plaque that was on the door.
"The Rainkin House. Built 1764."
He read out loud. It looked like one of those old southern plantations. Mike and joe came back from their expidition.
"There's no one in here. I guess we can just stay the night here."
Mike said. Alyssa gave a laugh.
"Why do I have the feeling that this might end up like a scooby do episode?"
They all laughed.
"We should all stay together. There's a big living room downstairs so we can stay there."
Chester's red mohawked hair bobbed up and down as Phoenix lugged him into the room where Joe had put the sleeping bags out. Rob gently laid Melissa down on the sleeping bag between him and Phoenix. Alyssa and brad (who are dating by the way) set the cooler down and were getting snuggly by the fire place. Joe was busy reading some book he found on one of the bookcases. Then there was a howl right out the window where Joe sat. he jumped up scared.
“What the **** is that?”
hope you like the story ur turn alyssa
