Poem "HELP"

[linkinparkbabe87]

I can't breathe

I've stopped thinking

paranoia controlling me

and I'm slowly sinking.

my mind scrambled for answers

my body shaken with fear

my heart screaming for relief

and my eyes filled with tears.

Each and everyday

it's steadily growing worse

Please just somebody..

get me away from this curse.

Here where I don't belong

Eventually going to breakdown

Loneliness is just a slow form of suicide

Pressured to drown.

The last four lines spell out 'Help'.

 

[Ocean_soul]

Jej I'm first

wow beautifull ...i almost start crying

:thumbsup:

 

[angelwithburntwings]

wow thats really good,

i love the last stanza, the H E L P thing, really cool

 

[LPGirl]

omg.. thas so sad it made me cry, it very good and the h.e.l.p thing really cool

 

[FanSince1999]

i like this kind of poems...they make me think about so many things...

 

[linkinparkbabe87]

Wow, I didn't think I would get this kind of response from people. Thank you all for the great comments.

 

[chester_Crazy]

thats sad...but good...but still sad...I'll help you, will cake help?

 

[Friðbjörn]

you've got my nomination for "best lpf poem"

 

[shirakawa_otori]

It's very good and emotional! Congrats, you're talented

 

[.hP.]

This kiks ****

 

[linkinparkbabe87]

lol, Thanks again homies.