Poems That you wrote when you were feeling down?

Mine is:

As i sit next to my window and look at the view I see my flower plant very happy and shiney. Locked up in my room makes me happy.

My mom comes in, slames the door open starts and and screaming. As i sleep in my bed I start to cry, as my flower plant gets sad and dies.

o.O...my kinda thred...

Stars

oh how much simpler life seems

when you gazes upon the stars,

the endlessly twinkling stars

on their slow path across the sky

your mind wanders

and all your cares liquefy

flowing from your body

like an invisible river of emotion

all that is around you morphs

degrades and disappears

until there is nothing between you

and the endless dark of night

and you feel yourself become weightless

and fragile and somehow the stars seem closer

almost as if you could reach out

and pluck them from the sky

and yet without fail

something will cause you to fall

cause you to cascade toward the earth

and ruthlessly snap you back to reality

and it is so sudden that you look about

examine your surroundings

you reach out and touch the nearest object

just to make sure you are alive

I think I've wrote one poem that wasn't for school. I wrote it when I was kind of stressed. It goes a little something like this:

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Beautiful, hey?

I guess what I'm trying to say is I don't write poems or anything when I'm feeling down. I usually find other ways of trying to feel better.

I think I've wrote one poem that wasn't for school. I wrote it when I was kind of stressed. It goes a little something like this:

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Beautiful, hey?

 

I guess what I'm trying to say is I don't write poems or anything when I'm feeling down. I usually find other ways of trying to feel better.

hah go you

Mine is:

 

As i sit next to my window and look at the view I see my flower plant very happy and shiney. Locked up in my room makes me happy.

My mom comes in, slames the door open starts and and screaming. As i sleep in my bed I start to cry, as my flower plant gets sad and dies.

aww.. thats a sad, but very good..

heres my poem, lol i wasnt sad when i wrote it, i wrote when i as eating chocolate ice cream, and that was about 10 mins ago, and i dont think this poem relates to me in anyway, it just kinda popped into my head, so i thought i write it down.. meh.. i knows it sucks..

Here i lay at night curled up in a ball, staring at the ceil and wonder why i exist,

and asking myself these question..

Does anyone i love me?

Does the world need me?

Does anyone care if i die?

Then i remember what you said to me, all those years ago,

I love you..

I need you, your my world..

If you died, i would die too..

Then i smile to myself and slowly drift to sleep.

Why?

There’s a woman crying out tonight,

She moans and wails, there is no light.

She cannot sleep at night,

She cannot make things right,

Her son has died,

He committed suicide.

No one noticed his pain,

They thought he was sane.

He was the one walking in the hall,

Bumped and not noticed at all.

And yet it changed right there,

With a flick and a swish of air.

Now they notice and care,

As they talk about it walking down the stairs,

“Who was he?” they ask,

After school has passed.

They tell his name,

And how they’re to blame,

But soon they’ll forget his name,

And everything will remain the same.

There’s a woman crying out tonight,

She moans and wails, there is no light.

How can they sleep at night?

How can they make things right?

She can’t sleep at night,

No one can make it right.

inspired by the Good Charlotte song We Believe

I think I've wrote one poem that wasn't for school. I wrote it when I was kind of stressed. It goes a little something like this:

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Beautiful, hey?

 

I guess what I'm trying to say is I don't write poems or anything when I'm feeling down. I usually find other ways of trying to feel better.

*tear tear*

That was so beautiful!!

I dont write poems,when im feeling down,i turn up music,REALLY LOUD.

It calms me.

these are really good guys :o

im impressed

When im down ilisten to music and write at the same time, its kinda my therapy, and i write a lot. this is a poem when i felt really really down, it isnt exactly a happy poem..

Go on

Scream

Scream at me

I wont feel it

Not anymore

I’ve become numb

I’ve blocked your voice

I’m waiting

Waiting until your done

But I stay in the anticipation

Of your screaming

Your mortifying words

Feeling it cut

Cut in my soul

Deeper everytime

I’m waiting

Waiting for the lethal strike

I will be freed

I will be free

When I die

It’ll be over

I’ll never feel again

Anything

Nothing

The bliss it would be

Please kill me..

yeah..i was kinda depressed..

Good poems people :thumbsup:

I'd post mine, but I already have in Writers Corner.

This is a poem I wrote when I was a bit depressed

It’s Now

Here I go, I’m diving in

Straight to the depths of this ice cold ocean

It’s freezing now, but not to me

I can’t feel myself dying

Because to me my blood is boiling

And as the waves crash down

They bury me within the sands

So perfectly still I lie here

Trying not to make a sound

As the rocks cut my body

And blood pours all around

And it’s now I start to freeze

My hands shiver with the waves

And it’s now that I feel I’m dying

The waters turn a crimson red

Where my body lays

So still beneath the surface

It feels like I’ve been here for days

My heart pounds loudly in my head

I can’t hear myself scream

Just the sound of my dying heart

I want to wake up from this dream

But I have to face the truth

There’s no one here to save me now

I’m drowning in myself

I pray for life, I pray for air

I know I’ll never wake

I’m not living in a dream anymore

I think I've wrote one poem that wasn't for school. I wrote it when I was kind of stressed. It goes a little something like this:

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Beautiful, hey?

 

I guess what I'm trying to say is I don't write poems or anything when I'm feeling down. I usually find other ways of trying to feel better.

best one yet.

wow everyone is very talented. well i do have poems in the writers corner but i will post here too.

Lonely Tomorrow

Being alone is the scariest feeling.

When there is no one around to talk to.

When you're stuck in a rut of loneliness.

When you feel as if no one could possibly love you.

When you feel ugly no matter what they will say.

The face in the mirror is even full of despair.

The personality has become annoying.

The people who loved you once, no longer care.

Then the world you live in begins to transform.

It takes on a new face.

The peole that were once here are dead to you now.

There is no one worth the pain in this place.

You go though the day without help.

You feel nothing but disgust for these people who fake sympathy.

You're too insecure to even be concerned.

You hide your confusion in your misery.

You forbid too cry because tears show weakness.

Frowns bring nothing but questions and sorrow.

All memories of the past are erased to protect the isolation you now live in.

Now you dread for another lonely tomorrow.

written by: Terry O

I write some "poems"(if u can call what I write poems:rolleyes:lol)when I feel sad or happy or even if I´m listening a romantic song lol,I have a romantic side(kinda).

Anyway here it´s the last one I wrote:

Without You

Here I am

Watching this landscape

And thinking you will never come back

Now that I´m alone,I don´t know what to do.

Everything feels so empty

Without you.

We used to be happy together.

Why did u have to leave?

My heart cries every time

I think about you.

Sometimes I wonder if I

Was the one who made a mistake

I wish everything could be like before,

But now everything is different and

I miss you so badly that I can´t live without you.

I ask myself if you can live without me.

I write some "poems"(if u can call what I write poems:rolleyes:lol)when I feel sad or happy or even if I´m listening a romantic song lol,I have a romantic side(kinda).

Anyway here it´s the last one I wrote:

 

Without You

 

Here I am

Watching this landscape

And thinking you will never come back

Now that I´m alone,I don´t know what to do.

Everything feels so empty

Without you.

We used to be happy together.

Why did u have to leave?

My heart cries every time

I think about you.

Sometimes I wonder if I

Was the one who made a mistake

I wish everything could be like before,

But now everything is different and

I miss you so badly that I can´t live without you.

I ask myself if you can live without me.

I really like that. and yes thats a poem.

This is all good!!!!!

and... i dont kno.. im kinda stupid sometimes.. heh