Point of grace (short story )

BextheHex

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Preface

1202 july 22

Thale,Germany

Loth stands on the roof of his house ,looking out into the dimly lit city

his arms crossed he always wears black he is in a black pants and wifebeater

and a trench coat,he just looks out in the city of sleep ...yet know one knows

he is the perp behind the murders of the two females and one male found in there

homes seeming asleep yet unaware someone broke /snuck into there house

awaiting there return to attack with surprise.

Many have awoken from there night of slumber and shower and get ready for

work,while some of the cops/detectives try to profile there killer..who has already

killed 3 in one single night with no one who heard or saw anything,Loth is proud of

how so far he got away with the murder of the female victims and the male victim as

well he hates happy people and those in love...he always tries to stay awake for as

long as he can last...he walks into his house and just falls on to his matress on the floor thats naked of sheets and blankets and only has one pillow and a small lamp that lights the room with very little light.

within 6 hours of having fallen asleep Loth awakes to many cars speeding by his single

floor house,he groans as he stands from his bed and slowly walks to the bathroom

turning on the light and staring into the mirror..noticing he has grown a beard and he

sighs reaching for the shaving cream can and sprays out some shaving cream and slabs it on his face smearing it over his cheeks and chin and above his lip and takes his shaver and wets it abit and slowly carefully shaves away his beard,when he finshs and looks into the mirror and notices his hair and he sighs and decides to work with it.

he reachs for the bottle of gel and sets it infront of him and he puts his head under the fauct of the water and lets it run down to his head as he turned it on,he pulls his head from the under the fauct and pours some gel into his hand and he slabs it into his hair and moves his hands through his hair slicking it back and spraying his hair with hair spray , and he glances at himself and is proud with his look ,and walks from the bathroom and walks to the small kitchen and makes himself a piece of grapefruit and eats it pouring some sugar and honey on it,and sips a glass of orange juice with a splash of vodka and stretchs and when his breakfast is done with ,he pulls on his heavy army boots and walks outside putting on his shades and locks his front door and heads to his support group ..which is "Anger mangement" and no one in the community is aware there killer is someone in anger mangement and a quiet shy guy who only hates humanity he cringes at the thought of being civil with other people.

he knows his father wasnt a civil guy ,or so he knows his father wasnt toward him

he hates people who seem all happy and in love with someone when he knows you cant really love someone unless you know there past dark or not.

(end of preface )

 

BextheHex

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chapter 1

Present day

5210 feb 27th

Yet the community of Thale,Germany is stil haunted by the murders of 1202

and still no one is sure who commited the murders or if its possible he is alive

after so many years,records say Loth died back in 1418 with unknown cause

is it possible some think he could of been a alien or something unhuman and

un natural..?,though lots of questions arise when the name Loth is spoken or uttered amoung the community of thale,there never was even a photo of Loth in the house

he supposely stayed in or even lived in for that matter.

Many kids go to the thale high school but only one claims to be Loth reborn..but no one for sure can prove this claim,many sciencist ask Leon many questions bout his so called past life and shockingly he has said many details that would fall into place for the still famous murders of 1202 ,and he hits every mark right on and even knows how the women and male were killed and how Loth manged to get into their houses without them knowing or seeming aware of his presence.

Leon spoke " you call yourself a science freak but how can you with you cant find anyway to prove or disprove my true claim,Loth was merely 18 when he killed his first three victims in just one night,so he would of been born 18 years before...know one knew or had any proof bout his father or mother who he claimed was his,and no one has proof that it could of been him who killed yet it was,and yet you cant seem to stick that freakin head of yours out of your *** to actually understand that life is endless and you are always reborn in some way ",the sciencist just stared at Leon shocked by his words and how much truth his words carried.

Leon walked from school to his home , he smiles as he has a photo of Loth who is still alive shockingly,Leon walks to a tube in his back room where Loth is very much alive and young but frozen in cyro...Leon had manged to research deep sleep and figured out how to defrost someone without killing them,but being a descendnt of Loth's family he manged to travel back in time in 3012 and kidnap Loth and bring him here and place him in deep sleep,and till he could figure out how to defrost that person without killing them ,and so he did so using small tubes with rats and he thinks he has it figured out and he hits the defrost button which he programed the defrosting stage to bout 4 days and slowly defrost the person,Leon is very much excited to find out if his research had worked.

(end of chap 1)

 
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