Preformance in the country

Greyfoxx

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Here is a poem i had to write for my Lit. Class....plz tell me what u think....

The open countryside

I watch the clouds fly by.

Wolves voices sound

from far across the ground.

To the mood

The wolves swoon.

The moon listens to thier song

Thier heartstings of wolves are strung.

I listen as the song comes to an end

The moon has not been offended.

The stars dance for the wolves.

They shine bright, just like the trend.

The wolves, they watch the dance

As if they were sitting on a fence.

I lay in the grass, by myself

Watching, Listening to the preformance unfold itself

 
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Black_Angel

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B-E-A-utiful... as Bruce Almighty would say, haha.

But yeah, its pretty, hopefully your teacher will agree! :]

 

Greyfoxx

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Thanks, i hope i get a good grade, but my LIT teacher sucks and dosnt know good work from sucky work
 
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