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So, for honors English we have to write a short story. The catch is it has to be EXACTLY 55 words.. I have written one. But I am not excactly sure I like it.. So, can you guys tell me what you think?
The hunger pains stings at the mouse’s side. Slowly, gently, and quietly, it sneaks its way across the new floor. Eye on the prize. The smell is so intoxicating. The color, yellow. The sensation is unbelievable as he takes the first bite. This food is in creditably, and overwhelmingly filling. The cheese is no more.
The hunger pains stings at the mouse’s side. Slowly, gently, and quietly, it sneaks its way across the new floor. Eye on the prize. The smell is so intoxicating. The color, yellow. The sensation is unbelievable as he takes the first bite. This food is in creditably, and overwhelmingly filling. The cheese is no more.