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Well this came outta nowhere and I decided to post it, Im ina band and I just started rappin somethina and this all came out, after some variations it became a song. I dont know if we'll record it just cause of what's said in it, its nothing great. Oh an after that theres some other things ive wrote in the past couple days for the band.

 

Song 1-Something a Little Crazy:

I know Im crazy

And I love to show it

People love it and I show it

I dont care people know it

Yeah im a rapper

Kinda confusing I know with my 6'0 white guy stature

Mentally im a writer

Physically im a vocal nightmare

All I need is a mic and a lighter

Just play this off as a spark in a fire

Yeah take all this in

Ill give you three minutes of time

As I keep makin this up

Am I this good or am I just bearin good luck

Sometimes I feel like im just not good enough

Round edges seem out of place and rough

Other times I feel like a party favor

A flavor

That leaves you needing a designated driver

Just like your friend who crashed the the Chevy Blazer

That left him in a haze

For several nights and days

Basically Im just here to tear down

Just like Michael Vicks career after messin with bloodhounds

Oh wait, so soon?

Dont think so

Whats up with this Kayne West up cryin in his room?

Pathetic anymore

Competition making artists complain

I have better things to do then drive myself slowly insane

Now dont get mad at me

Please take no stabs at me

No im not playin

Thats just what your thinkin

Im not here to fight but here to produce it

Come on cant you have fun with this music?

 

Song 2- Blind (Written by our Bassist) (Last Part written by Me)

Verse 1 (Rap)

So this is how its gonna be

With you and me

Was I just too blind to see

Or was it all just a dream

All these feelins I feel

Just don't seem real

And you don't think I can deal?

Well Guess what

 

Chorus (Rap)

I don't give a damn

I don't give a f***

Cause this life is

Nothin but luck

But I'll pull it off

Just wait n see

When I figure it out

You'll see the true me

 

Verse 2 (Rap)

You keep sayin dreams are just for fools,

Instead of bein a tool i broke all the rules and now

All that I'm leaving all behind

Because as of now I through with you on my mind and

Don't tell me what to do I'm done with that

I'm lookin ahead not lookin back

 

verse 3 (Written by Me)

Its hit or miss

See this?

Mixed up with the way I act

Oh the sweet bliss

My mind is clear

And you cant stop me

As I stand up and no one got me

Only you know what Ive been through

This is why my back is to you

I may never forget the times I had with you

But the truth is

Im Looking ahead and im not looking back

 

 

More coming haha.

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You said that was a chorus? Why doesn't it reapear?

 

Because choruses don't have to. That's not what a chorus does. A chorus is just a vocally enhanced portion of a song. Chorus - Chorale - Choir.

 

If it were called a refrain though, then, yes, I would ask why it doesn't repeat.

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Heres another I wrote a little bit ago, its about a friend of mine (a girl I dated) who helped me out through a tough time this summer, i almost wrote it in her b-day card I sent, but I decided it needed to be happier so here it goes...

 

Always There:

Verse 1:

Times like these come very little

A chance to thank someone very special

That one person who you can always count on

Who you can always rely on

Someone you miss when they are gone

To this story some can relate

I'm one of those people

Thats why i'm writig this song

I reach for a pencil and begin to write

Stop....

Maybe I shouldent rap this out loud

Its late

And I dont know why im in this state

Maybe its just someone deserves a thank you

For helping me through a time when I was blue

But as I try to write the words

Nothing comes out right

Its hard to write

Maybe its just the way I feel tonight

 

Chorus:

Because your...

Always There

When I need someone near

Someone who leaves me with nothing to fear

There to comfort you when you shead a tear

You were there when I needed a hand to hold

A person who wouldent leave me out in the cold

When I would think of you I wasnt alone.

Verse 2:

Now I know

People dont think they deserve recognition

But just open your ears and listen

>

>

>

>

>

You were there when things fell apart

Shed the light on me when things seemed dark

And you took away the bad before it could start

When things turned blue

You were there to pull me through

And to me that deserves a thank you

But as I try to write this song

Nothing comes out right

Maybe its just the way I feel tonight.

 

Chorus

 

The blank lines are things I havent thought up yet that i feel were missing, but im sure ill figure it out soon.

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