FM2005 Posted October 6, 2007 Share Posted October 6, 2007 Well this came outta nowhere and I decided to post it, Im ina band and I just started rappin somethina and this all came out, after some variations it became a song. I dont know if we'll record it just cause of what's said in it, its nothing great. Oh an after that theres some other things ive wrote in the past couple days for the band. Song 1-Something a Little Crazy: I know Im crazy And I love to show it People love it and I show it I dont care people know it Yeah im a rapper Kinda confusing I know with my 6'0 white guy stature Mentally im a writer Physically im a vocal nightmare All I need is a mic and a lighter Just play this off as a spark in a fire Yeah take all this in Ill give you three minutes of time As I keep makin this up Am I this good or am I just bearin good luck Sometimes I feel like im just not good enough Round edges seem out of place and rough Other times I feel like a party favor A flavor That leaves you needing a designated driver Just like your friend who crashed the the Chevy Blazer That left him in a haze For several nights and days Basically Im just here to tear down Just like Michael Vicks career after messin with bloodhounds Oh wait, so soon? Dont think so Whats up with this Kayne West up cryin in his room? Pathetic anymore Competition making artists complain I have better things to do then drive myself slowly insane Now dont get mad at me Please take no stabs at me No im not playin Thats just what your thinkin Im not here to fight but here to produce it Come on cant you have fun with this music? Song 2- Blind (Written by our Bassist) (Last Part written by Me) Verse 1 (Rap) So this is how its gonna be With you and me Was I just too blind to see Or was it all just a dream All these feelins I feel Just don't seem real And you don't think I can deal? Well Guess what Chorus (Rap) I don't give a damn I don't give a f*** Cause this life is Nothin but luck But I'll pull it off Just wait n see When I figure it out You'll see the true me Verse 2 (Rap) You keep sayin dreams are just for fools, Instead of bein a tool i broke all the rules and now All that I'm leaving all behind Because as of now I through with you on my mind and Don't tell me what to do I'm done with that I'm lookin ahead not lookin back verse 3 (Written by Me) Its hit or miss See this? Mixed up with the way I act Oh the sweet bliss My mind is clear And you cant stop me As I stand up and no one got me Only you know what Ive been through This is why my back is to you I may never forget the times I had with you But the truth is Im Looking ahead and im not looking back More coming haha. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/dd5e77cbc54bb3e92523a9cd6d63c99d.jpg MY BAND: www.myspace.com/flightbymidnight I aint gonna do no laundy.....BITCH! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarknessLover Posted October 6, 2007 Share Posted October 6, 2007 You said that was a chorus? Why doesn't it reapear? Quote The Park is Back? No way! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tsinoitcelfer Posted October 6, 2007 Share Posted October 6, 2007 You said that was a chorus? Why doesn't it reapear? Because choruses don't have to. That's not what a chorus does. A chorus is just a vocally enhanced portion of a song. Chorus - Chorale - Choir. If it were called a refrain though, then, yes, I would ask why it doesn't repeat. Quote I am in your forum, posting grammatically accurate responses. http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/51008fd4d789106ea866d69b38495153.gif OWNED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarknessLover Posted October 6, 2007 Share Posted October 6, 2007 Oh heh, my bad Quote The Park is Back? No way! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FM2005 Posted October 7, 2007 Author Share Posted October 7, 2007 Yeah, like none of these are done haha. They are just some stuff that we throw around, im sure we have a pile of about 100 songs that we combine with each other somehow or someway. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/dd5e77cbc54bb3e92523a9cd6d63c99d.jpg MY BAND: www.myspace.com/flightbymidnight I aint gonna do no laundy.....BITCH! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FM2005 Posted October 8, 2007 Author Share Posted October 8, 2007 Heres another I wrote a little bit ago, its about a friend of mine (a girl I dated) who helped me out through a tough time this summer, i almost wrote it in her b-day card I sent, but I decided it needed to be happier so here it goes... Always There: Verse 1: Times like these come very little A chance to thank someone very special That one person who you can always count on Who you can always rely on Someone you miss when they are gone To this story some can relate I'm one of those people Thats why i'm writig this song I reach for a pencil and begin to write Stop.... Maybe I shouldent rap this out loud Its late And I dont know why im in this state Maybe its just someone deserves a thank you For helping me through a time when I was blue But as I try to write the words Nothing comes out right Its hard to write Maybe its just the way I feel tonight Chorus: Because your... Always There When I need someone near Someone who leaves me with nothing to fear There to comfort you when you shead a tear You were there when I needed a hand to hold A person who wouldent leave me out in the cold When I would think of you I wasnt alone. Verse 2: Now I know People dont think they deserve recognition But just open your ears and listen > > > > > You were there when things fell apart Shed the light on me when things seemed dark And you took away the bad before it could start When things turned blue You were there to pull me through And to me that deserves a thank you But as I try to write this song Nothing comes out right Maybe its just the way I feel tonight. Chorus The blank lines are things I havent thought up yet that i feel were missing, but im sure ill figure it out soon. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/dd5e77cbc54bb3e92523a9cd6d63c99d.jpg MY BAND: www.myspace.com/flightbymidnight I aint gonna do no laundy.....BITCH! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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