Stabbing the pain (A poem)

[Pyro_Storm]

Hide and seek

You cant find me

Aggression is too strong

Play the puppet master

Cover your tracks

While I take this

Bullet straight to my

Heart

Don’t tell me things

Say stuff im doing

When I know it

Is the truth

Put on a mask while

I take this bullet

Right into my

Heart

Clog the air ways

Fill the gaps

Open the newly healed wounds

Laugh out loud at the pain

Clenching my jaw

Stabbing my wounds

Taking the last bullet to

My heart to dull this

Everlasting regret, pain

Guilt and sorrow..

Just to see the look on your face…

 

[brokenangel]

whoa... it's like i could feel it. intense

 

[Chaser]

omg u 2 get a room

 

[Marizka]

omg u 2 get a room

no, you do. and lock yourself in it.

anywayz..very good poem, as brokenangel said: intense. that's the right word.

 

[immortal89]

^indeed, that is intense

 

[gaia89]

^indeed' date=' that is intense[/quote']
i agree with this too..

Also,the imagery's good..

i love these lines:

Clog the air ways

Fill the gaps

Open the newly healed wounds

Laugh out loud at the pain

Clenching my jaw

Stabbing my wounds

Taking the last bullet to

My heart to dull this

Everlasting regret, pain

Guilt and sorrow..

 

[4gottenSoul666]

This os amazingly intense!!! Emotional, inspiring, and awesome...That is a beautiful poem. Great job! Props to you..

 

[4gottenSoul666]

This is amazingly intense!!! Emotional, inspiring, and awesome...That is a beautiful poem. Great job! Props to you..

 

[Pyro_Storm]

Thank you, im glad ppl like it

 

[Hyper]

mmk, i'm starting `[cA] (club angst) wanna be in? XD

 

[Pyro_Storm]

mmk' date=' i'm starting `[cA'] (club angst) wanna be in? XD

me? uh.. sure.

 

[Hyper]

yes, you, rofl, XD, sweet, wewt, x-)

 

[Pyro_Storm]

yes' date=' you, rofl, XD, sweet, wewt, x-)[/quote']

hehe im blonde , what do you expect?

 

[Hyper]

meh.. i'm.. brunnetted/blacked, rofl, idk..

 

[Pyro_Storm]

meh.. i'm.. brunnetted/blacked' date=' rofl, idk..[/quote']

ok so its a dark blonde but i still got the ditzzyness