The World Moves On - dedicated in the memory of my aunt

[LPHybridSnax]

I've been told it's too simple, but figured I'd post it here anyway.

this is the story of another kid

Indiana, 317, not no crip

I wasn't raised through ****

but *** knows now I'm livin' it

that's what it's been since you aren't here

by now I should be used to ****

can't help it

*** took one of the best in the world

no you weren't rich

you didn't sport no diamonds and pearls

you'd give that money up

share it with the starvin' boys and girls

even though it was cigarettes took you away

I can still feel your presents here even today

always right here beside of me

still can't bring myself to toss the pack anyway

but please believe me

when I say I apologize

and I wish I had just one more second

so I could only say goodbye

yeah so

the world is still movin' on

but mine stopped

when I found out you were gone

hard times ahead

ain't new news

I lie in bed

try to gather myself

all I get is tears

wonderin' why you left

and why you're not here

try to get up

try to pull myself along

but yeah

the world is still movin' on

we all knew it was commin'

we all knew we couldn't stop it

but still when I heard

I broke down and ******' lost it

hurts just because of so many memories

impossible to forget not one of these

how many times can I say I miss you

and it to have the exact same value

it's just how i feel

every time you cross my mind

so many thoughts playin' in my head

I try to say I'm alright

but in reality

I'm a complete wreck inside

that's only reason I ever try to rhyme

just so I can pour myself out in every line

so please believe me

when I say I apologize

and I wish I had just one more second

so I could only say goodbye

yeah so

the world is still movin' on

but mine stopped

when I found out you were gone

hard times ahead

ain't new news

I lie in bed

try to gather myself

all I get is tears

wonderin' why you left

and why you're not here

try to get up

try to pull myself along

but yeah

the world is still movin' on

your gone now

but I still try to make the best

of every day, every morning

now that you're forever at rest

it's harder some days a little more than others

seeing how you were almost a second mother

taught me so much

in so little time

turn back the pendulum

make the hands rewind

miss you so much I already said it

it hurts and makes me start to cry

and I wish I had just one more second

so I could only say goodbye

yeah so

the world is still movin' on

but mine stopped

when I found out you were gone

hard times ahead

ain't new news

I lie in bed

try to gather myself

all I get is tears

wonderin' why you left

and why you're not here

try to get up

try to pull myself along

but yeah

the world is still movin' on

 

[LPShinodaFM]

I like it. It's really emotional, and I'm very sorry for your aunt. It wasn't too simple, it definitely had depth. Great job on this.