This is my last ...(a Poem)

[lpunderground]

There have been so many

Things I have wanted to do

(tempted to complete)

Too mnay things that left scars

(emotionaly i am drained)

I cant take it anymore

So just listen

This is my final good bye

My final smile

my last breath

Many things have lifted me up

(only to plumit to the ground)

Many things have brought me down

Things have darkened

(past shadows now turn cold)

washed away to the endless rain

Please just listen to my final plea

This will be my final laugh

My final tear

My final Break

This is my last attepmt to save

anything that can be salveged

This is my final farewell.

 

[uwantme2b]

I found that really moving. Awesome poem.

 

[shahfire]

Many things have lifted me up(only to plumit to the ground)

Many things have brought me down

Things have darkened

(past shadows now turn cold)

washed away to the endless rain

i love that stanzar. cool stuff. :thumbsup:

 

[lpunderground]

thank you.