To Love? PLEASE Read!!!

[misspiggy]

my first thread so please let me down easy if you don't like it. oh and i might post someother stuff here too I don't know but please read and review.

Okay here it goes.

We sit under a tree

Converse and Confess

Feeling the warmth of an embrace

that can never be replaced.

Is this what it is to love?

Why do people divorce and marry?

And abandon the children they carried?

The paper's crumpled up and the

rules are replaced with hatred that can't be erased.

Is that what it is to love?

When the memory is gone and the time is done

is it all the same?

Can the past be evermore?

Can the future be evertold?

Is this what it is to love?

Can you let go and never forget?

Or do you have time to have some regrets?

Is this what it is to love?

I guess it is because now you're gone and

that's what it was to love.

 

[twilightcrimson7]

wow, that was really good. Touching and true.

 

[misspiggy]

wow' date=' that was really good. Touching and true.[/quote']Thank you. here you get a cookie. * hands you a cookie*

 

[twilightcrimson7]

thanks! I would eat it but it would hurt XD

 

[LP186]

i liked it misspiggy

wasn't bad at all

 

[misspiggy]

ok like isaid before i would someither stuff here to so here is like a piece of a sad love poem or something that popped up in my head before i went to sleep.

ok here it goes.

We talk and talk but we never thought

that it end like this

now we're done and our

song is gone and yet we've stung.

let alone the feeling deep inside tells me that im

right that we belong together.

do we or do we not?

now you love her and i love him

but your constantly in my mind

am i in yours?

can this last like before?

i cant stop what i feel

but it hurts so much

that i cant sleep and my vision becomes foggy

the room gets dark and the walls get cold

and the pain deep inside unleashes and becomes the

monster of frieght.

now everything is done nothing

but a memory to be rememeberd by you now that im gone

im sorry but i never thought it will end

like this.

ok its not that great but it's something anyways yeah r/r.

 

[Shadow_Serpent]

i liked the first one more, but w/e. you're quite talented.

 

[bam_bam_darkslide]

First one i read...great job! love the poem.

 

[misspiggy]

a new poem for this thread!!!!

If he could be here with me right now that would be wonderful.

If he understood how i felt i would be happy.

But sometimes he can be a jerk, I love him so, but

he never knows how much i care.

Does he? I yearn to hear his voice say

"i Love You"

but he wont cuz he loves her. dont know who she is

but she sure isnt me.

The words he speaks have gone in a different direction

far from me. I could never accept the fact he is gone, not for me.

I love him so but he doesnt love me.

okay r/r