Touch

[Pheonix791989]

this poem I wrote a while ago. Its hard to put down because I lost the paper a long time ago but that wouldnt do me any good now.

i want to feel your hands on my face,

the coolness of water running down,

the soft ness of grass and the warm sunshine,

I want your touch to be the thing,

that shows me how to live.

I want to know you more now,

the only thing holding me by a thread.

the last thing I saw was you.

I remember your face

your beautiful eyes.

Your hands guide me through my life

a soft touch like a butter fly of my old memory

all because I'm different

they think because I cant see them

that I dont hear what they say.

You show me everything through your eyes.

ok thats it. I think that was how I origanily wrote it two years ago. I had an accident and this is what I wrote to help deal with what had happened.

 

[brokenangel]

if it relates with an accident, it completely changes the meaning of the whole thing. it's a very sensitive poem

 

[ForgottenKid]

I cant describe this poem in a word but it puts in perspective how you felt when you were going through the after math of the accident.

 

[omega]

peom writing is a great way to express how you feel toward things, i am a peom writer too. your peom was good, i enjoyed it.

 

[DerykInuTaishou]

nice one sis. is this about the surfing accident? and i know that the guy that your thinking of, yeah he likes you. (*cough*BB*cough*) he likes the poem too.