UnControlled (My Messed Up song lol)

[chester_Crazy]

Yeah well I made this song during one of my classes at school, I was bored and I basically wrote it in about 10 minutes while my teacher rambled on about something I wasn't paying any attention to lol: Well Its about Drug Problems and Alcohol Problems. So tell me what you think of it.........

Verse: Inexperienced and new in the game

she thought it would be okay

had nothing to loose had nothing to gain

thought it would feel the same

when problems get to hard to controll

you grab some and go for a stroll

she lost everything she had

she was never told it was bad

Bridge: When its always insight

you think its alright

Chorus: I don't want to have to look into your eye

you have no clue how I feel inside

It kills me when all you think I do Is lie

As I lay alone

all these thoughts come to mind

I seek a place

I know I can't find

This is hard to hold

hard to fold

Its uncontrolled

Verse: He didn't know it would effect him

friends have to walk out on a limb

not knowing what he did

he was just a kid

in pain going insane

didn't mean to walk the wrong lane

Road the wrong track

Self-Controll Is what He lacked

Bridge: When its always insight

you think its alright

Chorus: I don't want to have to look into your eye

you have no clue how I feel inside

It kills me when all you think I do Is lie

As I lay alone

all these thoughts come to mind

I seek a place

I know I can't find

This is hard to hold

hard to fold

its uncontrolled

 

[chester_Crazy]

Maybe I should add another verse.......After reading it a few times over it looks like I'm missing something I'm not sure

 

[chester_Crazy]

So what do you all think?

 

[chazzy_rox]

ooo funky munkey is whAT I THINK. it reminds me of a country song called Whiskey Lullaby, and i dont really like the song, but the lyrics are sooo sad. koolio. school tomorrow, grrrr. mopre writing time though

 

[chester_Crazy]

ooo funky munkey is whAT I THINK. it reminds me of a country song called Whiskey Lullaby' date=' and i dont really like the song, but the lyrics are sooo sad. koolio. school tomorrow, grrrr. mopre writing time though [/quote']I'm not sure if thats a compliment but I'll just pretend it is lol

 

[LPtheory88]

woah... I like it. When I was reading it I was imagining LP singing it. Like, Mike kinda rapping to the verses and Chester singing the chorus. I'm not sure if that's the kind of song you thought of it as though. Anyways, good job!

 

[Black_Thought]

woah... I like it. When I was reading it I was imagining LP singing it. Like' date=' Mike kinda rapping to the verses and Chester singing the chorus. I'm not sure if that's the kind of song you thought of it as though. Anyways, good job![/quote']

are you a mind reader? ffs that's what I thought too!!!

you rule, Chester_crazy!! :thumbsup: I love it!!

 

[angelwithburntwings]

thats a well good song, i like it.

you can actually imagine lp singing it!

 

[chester_Crazy]

awww you guys are so nice.......Thanks for posting your opinions.I'm glad you like it. just so you know I did kinda imagaine LP Singing it,but not until I actually finsished the song though lol

 

[LPtheory88]

yay! I'm not the only one who imagined LP singing it!

 

[chester_Crazy]

yay! I'm not the only one who imagined LP singing it!

yeah lol