4everLP_Shinoda Posted February 28, 2005 Share Posted February 28, 2005 While I was in Bariloche,I felt inspired and I wrote this,I hope u like it so here it is: Without u Here I am Watching this landscape And thinking you will never come back Now that I´m alone,I don´t know what to do. Everything feels so empty Without you. We used to be happy together. Why did u have to leave? My heart cries every time I think about you. Sometimes I wonder if I Was the one who made a mistake I wish everything could be like before, But now everything is different and I miss you so badly that I can´t live without you. I ask myself if you can live without me. PS:If u read this plz leave me a comment,I would apreaciate it,thanx in advance :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
invisiblekiller Posted February 28, 2005 Share Posted February 28, 2005 now that was real good.Keep it up Vero. *thumbs up* Quote [broken External Image]:http://img15.imgspot.com/u/06/253/09/siggy1157980634.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misery Posted February 28, 2005 Share Posted February 28, 2005 thats rly good at first i thought it was gunna be a rewording of with you by linkin park Quote [broken External Image]:http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/9403/untitled28ic6.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1118/22wc5.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2756/7mi3.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4everLP_Shinoda Posted February 28, 2005 Author Share Posted February 28, 2005 Thank u so much Killer:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4everLP_Shinoda Posted February 28, 2005 Author Share Posted February 28, 2005 thats rly good at first i thought it was gunna be a rewording of with you by linkin park lol nope it´s something I made up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkinparkrapniknil Posted February 28, 2005 Share Posted February 28, 2005 thats really cool! i like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4everLP_Shinoda Posted February 28, 2005 Author Share Posted February 28, 2005 Thanx:D!I will read your fic l8rz cuz now I´m going,I feel tired. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HybridTheory Posted March 5, 2005 Share Posted March 5, 2005 it is pretty good. :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lpp Posted March 5, 2005 Share Posted March 5, 2005 While I was in Bariloche,I felt inspired and I wrote this,I hope u like it so here it is: Without u Here I am Watching this landscape And thinking you will never come back Now that I´m alone,I don´t know what to do. Everything feels so empty Without you. We used to be happy together. Why did u have to leave? My heart cries every time I think about you. Sometimes I wonder if I Was the one who made a mistake I wish everything could be like before, But now everything is different and I miss you so badly that I can´t live without you. I ask myself if you can live without me. PS:If u read this plz leave me a comment,I would apreaciate it,thanx in advance :thumbsup: wow its so good you can turn it into a song. *screaming in joy and saying awsom* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4everLP_Shinoda Posted March 5, 2005 Author Share Posted March 5, 2005 wow its so good you can turn it into a song. *screaming in joy and saying awsom* *feels happy 4 the review*Yay u left me a comment,thankies^^. I thought ppl didn´t care about what I wrote cuz it hadn´t any reviews in a while excepting yours so thanx again lpp Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azemkamikaze03 Posted March 7, 2005 Share Posted March 7, 2005 itz pamp and awsum Quote ¿whysoserious? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minzara Posted March 8, 2005 Share Posted March 8, 2005 I liked it, very good :thumbsup: Quote Check out my Naruto RPG Here っへ はっでっ Lいfえ げっっ, っへ っまってっ い げっ [broken External Image]:http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/2426/mynewsig5qv.gif [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1432/bestmembertobeanaelite1dg.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinnyTheory Posted March 8, 2005 Share Posted March 8, 2005 thats awesome, great effort Quote [broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v161/MissMondayNight/aaaaaaa7iz.jpg http://www.behindtheropes.cjb.net/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crawling Posted March 8, 2005 Share Posted March 8, 2005 its okay --- Quote [broken External Image]:http://img179.echo.cx/img179/9670/sig4cl.jpg My Poem :thumbsup: covering my face seeking another place now i believe in giving in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4everLP_Shinoda Posted March 8, 2005 Author Share Posted March 8, 2005 Thanx every1,what does pamp mean? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hybrid_eky Posted March 8, 2005 Share Posted March 8, 2005 thats awesome u really could make it a song! :thumbsup: Quote [broken External Image]:http://friendpages.com/pages/artist/individuality/photo12.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azemkamikaze03 Posted March 8, 2005 Share Posted March 8, 2005 Pamp---Is Pimp Quote ¿whysoserious? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FadedBlue Posted March 8, 2005 Share Posted March 8, 2005 That was beautiful vero! *tear* Kepp it up, it was great!! Quote Last.fm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pheonix791989 Posted March 8, 2005 Share Posted March 8, 2005 that is cool love it Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shahfire Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 that was sososo cool .espiciallly loved the last line. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/190/02/shahsig.psd Proud member of the CoB Thank you IK for the sig!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NVme4ever Posted March 13, 2005 Share Posted March 13, 2005 its kool.....keep it up Quote i ha8 2 luv u kause u love 2 ha8 me!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4everLP_Shinoda Posted March 13, 2005 Author Share Posted March 13, 2005 Thanx every1!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Shinodas Gurl Posted March 13, 2005 Share Posted March 13, 2005 WOW! thats really good I like it^__^ Quote Rawr. I moved to this account Sayoko Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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