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wow this story is great! by the way when did chester say that thing in ur sig it's so sad!
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yeah, chester wrote that a while ago (or so i've been told...) anyways, here's the next chapter. I might not post for a while, seeing as how school is goin back in on tuesday...and i have a new years party coming up...and my dad thinks this website is giving our computer viruses...o well. glad you guys (and girls)like it.

 

Chapter 8; midnight wake up call

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*Mike's Nightmare*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~(part 2)

 

When Mike arrived, on that Wednesday in June, him and Chester spent the whole day together...well they would of, if Chester didn't have to go to school. "Just ask your parents if you can stay home for today" mike said, while they were on the phone in the morning. “I can't" said Chester "they'll just say 'no'". "you never know..."said mike, trying to persuade him. "yes, actually, I do “he responded. "How?". "It doesn't matter how”. “you already asked didn't you?" "yeah..."Chester lied "they said no" "why didn't you just tell me that in the first place?" mike asked, confused. "I don't know, i didn't feel like it." mike laughed "your weird, just like when I left." "let me guess, you aren't weird at all?" he said sarcastically. "not at all!" he said, matching the tone of sarcasm in Chester’s voice. the two laughed "well I got to go to school, bye" "bye". mike lay on his back, on the couch, with his head on the floor watching TV all day. at 4:00 (Chester’s school gets out at 3:30) mike heard something outside. he sat up and looked out the window. A boy was walking toward his house, a big group of kids following him. The boy looked familiar, it was Chester! mike pulled on a pair of shoes and walked outside, all the kids were gone. Mike walked up to Chester’s house and knocked on the door. he heard Chester make his way down the stairs. Chester's jaw dropped when he saw mike at his door. this was the first time they saw each other since mike mooved away. the both of them were surprised. they both looked so different. Mike looked older than he was, it looked like he'd been working out. he wasn't loaded in muscle, but he was in good shape. Chester, on the other hand, was small. he was skinny, he had blonde spiked hair. he had glasses, but they didn't look that bad. mike was about 5 inches taller than Chester. "it's been a while, man..." mike said slowly. "yeah..."said Chester, still staring at mike's muscles. he didn't really get along with people stronger than him, they usually used him as a punching bag. but mike was different, and Chester knew that. they talked for hours about everything, Chester said a few things that made mike wonder if there was anything wrong, anytime mike hinted to Chester about that he was catching on, Chester changed the subject. Mike knew, if there was anything wrong, it wasn't going to be easy to get Chester to tell him. After a while, Mike's mom called him in for supper. after supper he went to bed. at around 12:00, he woke up from yelling next door. he opened his window and stuck his head out. he looked in the window of Chester’s house, Chester and his dad were fighting. Mike watched for a while. after a bit, he could see this was no little argument. it started to get physical. Chester dad punched him across the face. blood was everywhere. he stumbled around, trying to get back on his feet. Chester was crying a bit when he ran out the front door, trying to get away from his dad. Chester sat on the curb and pulled his knees to his chest, an buried his head in his arms. Mike pulled his head back in his room and tried to get some sleep. It wasn’t easy.

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Sometimes I feel like a prophet,

Misunderstood,

Under the gun like a new disease...

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awww poor chazy, its so sad. Good story, its interesting. :D

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

Posted
OMG! I laughed liked crazy when I read the first chapter...or was it the second? [the sneezing part] lol.

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this has nothing to do with my story, but, who here has heard the "breaking the habit" at the 'almost acoustic christmas'. the first is only done with piano, and it's pretty cool. and it sounds awsome live. "i don't want to be the one the battle's always chose..."lol. b.t.w, who here knows wich band member that song relates to? it made that band member cry. that's sad.

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Sometimes I feel like a prophet,

Misunderstood,

Under the gun like a new disease...

Posted
ooh this is really good keep it up

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this has nothing to do with my story' date=' but, who here has heard the "breaking the habit" at the 'almost acoustic christmas'. the first is only done with piano, and it's pretty cool. and it sounds awsome live. "i don't want to be the one the battle's always chose..."lol. b.t.w, who here knows wich band member that song relates to? it made that band member cry. that's sad.[/quote']

 

It's related to chaz I read it in an interview but I don't remember where. Mike wrote it and chester listened to it and he was like "Dude I swear to God you wrote that about me" he couldn't even sing it at first cuz he said he broke down in tears everytime he tried. When I read that I almost started crying.

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oh, 'chester crazy', 44 times isn't nearly enough times to shoot some f**king bastard who doesn't like LP! (my friend told me to say that...so...don't mind it!plz!)

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Sometimes I feel like a prophet,

Misunderstood,

Under the gun like a new disease...

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It's related to chaz I read it in an interview but I don't remember where. Mike wrote it and chester listened to it and he was like "Dude I swear to God you wrote that about me" he couldn't even sing it at first cuz he said he broke down in tears everytime he tried. When I read that I almost started crying.

OMG.... that's so sad... i swear i'm crying right now... i didn't even know... i knew that some of LPs songs are related to chester (like Easier To Run) but i didn't know BTH was one of them... and i didn't know chaz cried when he sang it... god... that's really sad... *still crying* man, it's hard to type like this...

BTW, this fic is the best! great job! :thumbsup:

I ordered a frappuchino... where's my f*cking frappuchino?!?!

 

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My taste in music is soooo questionable... :D

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oh' date=' 'chester crazy', 44 times isn't nearly enough times to shoot some f**king bastard who doesn't like LP! (my friend told me to say that...so...don't mind it!plz!)[/quote']

 

Fine then I will Shot them 44 times then slice them open, eat there insides and then chop them into a bunch of pieces and barry each peice in different random spots of the world mwahahahahahaha, maybe even mail a few peices to their family and friends, nothing like mental torture to drive someone completely insane. :thumbsup:

 

Is that better? lol

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

Posted
are u gonna update this story anytime soon?

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

Posted

i'm back, i might be a while before i post again though, im sorry. anyways...in my story, you'll see why "breaking the habit" is related to chester (evil laugh), but yeah that's really sad...it didn't make me cry, but, it made me pity him, until he wore the 'chester the molester' shirt then i'm just like 'if he wants to make kids scared of him, like he was to (place name of his raper here), then i just give up!'...let alone the fact that he said he'd never do drugs again, but wants marajuaina legal! god, he's hopeless!(btw, for those of you who don't know, don't ask me) and yes 'chester crazy' i think that's enough torture for one person...but my friend thinks your a canibal...i don't...i think your cool...YAY!p.s. 'Hybrid theory ep' is the best cd ever. it only has like 6 songs but there the best ever!

 

Chapter 9;Grafity decorations...not so decorative...just depresing...

(muhaha long chapter, i'll try to post again soon)

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*Mike's Nightmare*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~(part 3)

A loud noise woke chester up. It was yelling. His parents were fighting again. He looked around, he was on his couch. He remebered sneaking in last night, if his dad knew he came back in the house, he'd hurt him. why? he was drunk or something. Chester didn't know, and didn't want to, because sometimes the thruth hurts. His father wasn't the same, when chester was a kid he used to look up to his dad, like a role-model. what happened, he didn't know. he didn't care. He just wanted to live to live to see another day. But if the next day would be like the last one, then screw it! Chester had tried suicide many times. always chickening out. He didn't know what he wanted anymore. Chester shook his head and slowly got off the couch. he made his way up the stairs trying to avoid his father. he locked himself in the bathroom and turned on the shower. while it was warming up he looked in the mirror. he despised his face, he thought he was ugly. Sam didn't think so. He smiled as he thought of sam. she was a beutiful girl, blonde hair, big brown eyes, and best of all, she liked chester.(flashback-"your not ugly chester!" "yes i am, look at me!" "if ti will make you feel better, ugly ducklings-" "KNOW YOUR CALLING ME UGLY!" "NO! i'm not, you just called yourself ugly...so this might make you feel better about yourself" "...and im not a duckling either..." "will you shut up!" "..." "finally, well, all ugly ducklings grow up to be beutiful swan's" "what about thomas edison, he was an ugly kid, he didn't look any better when he was 20...or 30...0r 40...or 5-" "i get the point..." "well that means i might be ugly forever" "no you wont, you can't be ugly forever if your not ugly now" "if you say so") he was happy he met her. she always knew the right thing to say at the right time. After chester's long, hot, (and somewhat painful) shower, he got dressed and made his way to school. he was heading down his street when he heard a voice behind him "hey". Chester stopped and turned around. sure enough, mike was walking down the street behinde him. Mike caught a climps of the cut on chester's face. chester could see mike staring at it (p.s whenever you see * it means there thinking it) *hurry up, think of an excuse! mike can't know what happened!* mike reached his hand out and turned chester's head so he could see it better. "i-i tripped" *smooth move, now you look like a klutz!* he scolded himself. "so you tripped into your father's fist?" chester pushed away mike's hand and backed up, he looked into mike's eyes. "i saw what happened" Chester lost eye contact with mike, he turned his head away. *GREAT! this is gonna be just like when eric found out! goddamnit!* "you alright?" mike walked closer to chester. chester looked up at mike "yeah, i guess". "well" said mike slowly, trying to get off topic. "my parents want me to take a look at your school today, so i guess i'll be following you" mike looked at chester, waiting to see if he'd be happy or not. to mike's surprise, he didn't look very happy. Chester tried to reasure himself *it might not be that bad, i always liked him better than that ass anyways.* chester forced a smile "sounds great" he finally said. "soo..." mike said as they walked down the street "what ever happened to eric". chester got pissed just hearing his name. "i don't wanna talk about it. mike looked at chester *i wonder what happened?* he thought

They walked into the front doors of the middle school, they walked down the long hallway. Mike found it peculiar how chester kept his head so low, what was wrong? what was he scared of? a locker at the end of the hallway caught mike's eye. it had grafity on it, not spray paint, just permanent marker. as they got closer mike could make out some words like;loser, ass face, weirdo...ect. *that kid must not be very sociable.* he thought. Mike's jaw dropped when chester walked up to the locker and opened it. he threw his books inside. *no way, this can't be, not chester...* chester shut the door, put his back agains't the locker, and slid down to the floor. "shinoda? is that you?!" mike turned his head to see who was there, it was an old friend of mike and chester's, eric sinclair. "Eric?" "dude!it is you! it's been a while" eric glanced at chester with a nasty look on his face, then looked at mike. "why are you still hanging out with low-life's like him, you can do better than that!" Mike, at this point, was pissed. but it made sense why chester didn't want to talk about eric. "maybe..." mike said walking up to eric, he shoved him back to the wall "...i don't want to better" "oh, jeez, thanks!"chester yelled sarcasticly. "sorry, man" mike said with a slight laugh, realizing how insulting that actually was. He focused his attention on eric. eric shook his head, one of the girls in the back yelled "he's got looks, but no brains!" they all laughed. eric, being the smart-ass he is said "he doesn't even have looks!hanging out with that little sewar-rat, he's probably a queer too!" Mike wasn't pissed off very easy when people made fun of him, but they called chester a sewar-rat! Chester wasn't the type of kid who stood up for himself, he had been teased so much, he was begining to believe all the lies they told. Mike couldn't stop himself, he swung at eric, hitting him in the face. blood poured from the cut. eric's little 'groopie's' started to gang up on mike. mike got himself out of the fight without getting hurt, and him and chester made a run for it. they stopped outside where they were sure they wouldn't be found. A smile came across chester's face. "that...was...so...COOL! nobody has ever hit eric, he's like, the god of middle school" mike was confused "what kind of god rejects people?" chester shruged "a very rude one". It sudenly struck mike that this may have been the first time, in a long time, chester got to talk to someone. mike thought to himself *face it man, his life sucks. what happened to the chester i used to know? he's gotta be in there somewhere, right? well i'll just have to make things easier for him* mike didn't know it, but he alredy had.

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Sometimes I feel like a prophet,

Misunderstood,

Under the gun like a new disease...

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yay ..that was so nice of Mike! I hate eric! :mad: Good Chapture..post more soon please

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

Posted
nhah... so cool!!! great chapter!!! i love this fic!!! Mikey's the best!! ^^

I ordered a frappuchino... where's my f*cking frappuchino?!?!

 

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My taste in music is soooo questionable... :D

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yeah more hurry!!

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

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p.s. all the teachers in this story are teachers that teach at my school, and their personalities are the same too. and the school is the same too, so if there's anything that confuses you ask. you'll see how important the teachers are later in the story. p.s.don't mind the French names, i go to a French immersion school (two languages are cool, but our teachers are stricked, we get caught talking English, we get in trouble. parler vous francais?lol! mais, non! aime mon histoire? oui? non? (dire oui, or i mean say yes! lol!)) or don't mind the crappy story line of this chapter, very confusing :( :)

Chapter 10: Mr.Cloutier

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*Mike's Nightmare*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~(part 4)

Chester and Mike walked home together after school, Chester was happy mike was back in town. It gave him someone to talk to instead of keeping it all inside. There was allot that he wasn't telling mike, but it relieved him to know that if things got worse, he had someone he could trust to tell. He looked at mike, they both smiled, that day was fun. Eric had avoided them all day. at one point he walked into the bathroom, and mike, who was in there, jumped at him and yelled "boo!" Chester had never heard Eric yell so loud. he got so scared he almost peed his pants. Chester was glad not to be teased that day, he was even gladder that mike was different than Eric. Chester remembered when him and Eric used to be friends, and when Chester’s dad became an alcoholic. His dad started to get aggressive, Chester needed to tell someone, so naturally, he told his best friend at the time, Eric. Chester felt glad to get this off his chest, he almost built up the courage to tell someone else, some one he was sure could help him, but, Eric didn't know how to deal with it, so he ditched him, and all the courage, went down the drain. to Eric, Chester was to needy, but to mike, he was his friend, and he needed his help. Mike had convinced Chester to skip gym that day. The teacher had caught them, Chester was nervous, but mike had quick thinking. "he was just showing me around the school, right Chester?" Chester just nodded and forced a smile. Mr.cloutier was a nice teacher, he was always concerned about Chester, he noticed the cuts and bruises on him. But no matter how many times he asked, he could never get Chester to tell him where he got them. under the sweater and baggy jeans he had multiple cuts and bruises that mike hadn't seen yet. The teacher didn't believe them, but he let them go. Chester lead mike outside. they sat down on the rocks that sat in the shape of the letter P. they talked for a while. Every time mike asked him a question about his parents or the cuts, Chester would give him a cold, hard stare and say something like "none of your business!" but eventually, he told mike a little bit, he showed him all the cuts and bruises, well almost all of them, he really didn't want to take his pants off, cause then, well, there would be a bit of awkwardness between them. (:rolls eyes: lol) mike was starting to get concerned, he hadn't seen Chester in a long time and now he had him sitting right in front of him telling him he'd been abused for the last for the last two years now. it's unbelievable how he felt. sad, for Chester. regret, for leaving. and furious, against Chester’s father, Eric, and everybody else that had ever said anything, or did anything, to Chester to make him feel unsafe. "do you want to stay at my house tonight, mom won't mind, and you might be able to avoid getting hurt..." mike said, Chester looked at mike. he could trust mike, right? he was at Eric’s house with all of his friends when he got ditched, he wanted to make it public. he waited till a big sleepover and ditched him, he was made fun of the whole night. Chester mentally slapped himself for doubting mike, *he's not like that*. "sure, thanks man." he said, regaining eye contact with him.

 

In the gym mr.cloutier looked out the window of the 'emergency exit' door, and saw mike and Chester. "okay class, I’ll be back in a minute." he opened the door and walked across the parking lot toward the two male's. mike noticed him first. "hey, isn't that your gym teac-" Chester wasn't listening. mr.cloutier stopped when he was close enough to hear what they were saying. "I don't really know why dad's doing..." he looked down at his cuts and bruises "...all this" he said slowly. Mike stared the teacher in the eyes, in a sort of threatening way, like 'leave now, I’m warning you'. the teacher still stood there. Chester was blabbing on about something, but neither the teacher or mike paid attention, they had a sort of a staring contest, neither one of them appreciating the other one's presence. Chester looked up at mike and followed his gaze, he saw the gym teacher. "ahh!" he yelled surprised, and fell off the rock, hitting the ground with a large 'thud’ the drop was only about 5 inches, but he hit his butt hard on the ground "owwwww..." he whined "... my ars-hole". Mike began to laugh as he bent own over the side to see if he was alright. Mike helped Chester up, and Chester looked at his gym teacher. "a tour of the school?" "we came outside first" said Chester. "yeah, right..."said the teacher, sarcastically "we had a good reason for being out here" Chester said looking at mike for support. "yeah... you wouldn't understand" mike replied. Patrick (the teacher) took Chester’s arm and lifted the sleeve revealing all the cuts and bruises. Chester’s jaw almost hit the floor "I’m not just some stupid gym teacher..." he said "my wife's a nurse." the teacher said. “Get help" he said as he got up and walked away. Chester and mike talked for a while then they quietly made their way to the gym. A they walked in the gym, everyone looked over to see who was coming. The two males made there way across the gym, mike heard a few girls snicker something about Chester, they all laughed and looked in their direction. Mike gave them a cold stare, and one of the girls stopped laughing “hey” she whispered “that’s the kid who hit Eric, you know ‘Bennington’s body-guard’” Chester could of died right there. *what did they just call him* he though surprised *better yet, why did they stop laughing? Are they scared of him? Woohoo!* for once that day, no one bothered him, and now he was on his way to spend the night at mike’s. Chester was happier than ever, not only did mike stop trouble at school, but at home too!

p.s. If it’s misspelled, it’s in French…

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Sometimes I feel like a prophet,

Misunderstood,

Under the gun like a new disease...

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