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next chappy..

 

"chester have a seat here" said Mrs. white with a smile on her face. "ok" chester try to smile back, but all he could do was a sad frown. "Mrs. white remember yesterday when you rang my house to why i hadn't been at school and my mum answered" "yes i remember" "well that wasn't her" "who was it then?" "me" "why were you pretending to be your mum?" "umm..." chester started to feel really really sad and was about to cry "yes" "ummm... well my parents are dead." chester started to cry. at 1st Mrs. white didn't believe him, but then she could she that he was very emotionally distort. "how do you know there dead?" "well mum rang me on her cell when they were driving and dad was beeping the horn in the background, so i ask mum why he was doing it and she said that they was this big truck in front of them and it would move a side so they could go pass, then i heard her say to dad "Don't drive off road, its night time and we don't know what's out there." Then i heard her scream and then a crush noise and and.." "and?" "i was yelling on the phone mum dad are you there and nobody answered and then there was an explosion and the phone line went dead" "omg.. that horrible" "what about your sister?" "i think she dead, but i don't know for sure" chester stop crying and started to think he sister mite not be dead "how do you know?" "well my parents were going to pick her up from her friends ranch, cuz she had been there for a couple of weeks to learn about animals and stuff and i don't know whether they had picked her up or not." "is there a phone number for there ranch?" "no, they don't have a phone" "do you know where it is" "yes i do" "ok, ill go and ring the police" "ok" chester started to smile from the hope of knowing his sister mite not be dead, it never had gone through his mind that they mite not of picked her up, before they died"

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Aww I hope his sister is fine!!

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

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. he decided to get a donut and coffee. then go to school. .

was it a frappacino?? lol

when i pretend everything is what i want it to be

i look exactly like what you had always

wanted to see

http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/fb383ef05cd644d14adea6417e392604.jpg

Posted
was it a frappacino?? lol

lol :D

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

Posted
i love the story so far but i hope his sis is ok

when i pretend everything is what i want it to be

i look exactly like what you had always

wanted to see

http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/fb383ef05cd644d14adea6417e392604.jpg

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post more soon its great :D

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

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great fic! keep it coming!

I ordered a frappuchino... where's my f*cking frappuchino?!?!

 

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My taste in music is soooo questionable... :D

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