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sorry had writer block, lol..

 

"chester the police said they would be here as soon as possible" "what do you think they're going to do?" chester starting to sound a bit scared "well, uum.. i don't really know chester, but im sure it will be ok" "ok" chester still sounding really scared "chester why don't you go to class, it may take ur mind off this and i come get you when they arrive, ok" "umm.. ok" chester got up and left the room and went to his next class, english.

 

Chester walk to his next class, when in the door and sat down. the teacher came in and everybody said good morning, except for chester and Mrs. smith pick that up as reason for picking on him. "CHESTER BENNINGTON" Chester looked up and snapped back "YEAH what do you want", "don't talk to me in that tone" chester stating to get a bit anger "i can talk to you in what ever tone i want you old hag" *class in the background saying oooooo....* "im not an old hag" "everybody in here is thinking it and you know you are" chester got up and started for the door. Mrs. smith moved in front of him "you aren't going anywhere" "I GO WHERE EVER THE FU*K I PLEASE" "don't speak to me like that" "is that all you can say? don't speak to me in that tone, don't speak to me like that" "don't mock me" chester pushed her out of the way and walks out the door and slams it in her face and leaves the classroom as well as everybody in it.

 

Chester ran down the hallway and back to the office, open the door and walks in. "hi chester, why are you back so early?" "umm.. had a little fight with Mrs. smith" "how little?" "well it quite a big 1" "ok, while we wait for the police tell me what happen" chester told her everything that had happened "omg.. that really funny, i would have done that too if it was me, she is an old hag she so mean to every1, all the teachers hate her"

 

there was a knock at the door, Mrs. white got up and walked over opened the door and let the police in..

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whats gonna happen now? post more....soon

 

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i hate that stupid teacher!!!!!! *shoves a glowstick up her nose*

 

poor chaz!!!!!!!!!!!! *cries*

 

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i hate that stupid teacher!!!!!! *shoves a glowstick up her nose*

 

poor chaz!!!!!!!!!!!! *cries*

 

I LUV UR STORY LPGIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol glowstick

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You kno? my english is an old mean hag named MR. Smith!!! He is mean like that, too! I swear to god im not lying!! How frkn FUNNY!! lol, i like the story, Smith(smut) got wut she deserved...if only i could that to Mr.Smith!

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sorry it had to be short

 

"hello chester, im police chef swine and this is my partner logon" "hi" "now can you please tell us everything you know about what has happen" "ok" when chester had finished, the police started to talk to each other then turn back to chester. "ok first things first we need to do is to find the wreck of your parents car and then find your sister it she is alive, now you need to come with us" chester gulped "ok" he followed the police out of the office and wave goodbye to Mrs. white.

 

when out in the hall he saw Mrs. smith coming towards them "shit" "what's that chester?" "nothing" "hello there officers, thank god you came and arrested that boy" "what do you mean, were helping him find his parents bodies and maybe sister body" "what?..." the police kept walking chester followed, Mrs. smith just stood with her mouth open and as chester walk past her, he tripped her and she landed flat on her fat, ugly face..

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lmao she deserved it stupid hoe bag!

nice chappy!

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lmao she deserved it stupid hoe bag!

nice chappy!

haha hoe bag...thats a funny word....... :D

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

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You kno? my english is an old mean hag named MR. Smith!!! He is mean like that' date=' too! I swear to god im not lying!! How frkn FUNNY!! lol, i like the story, Smith(smut) got wut she deserved...if only i could that to Mr.Smith![/quote']

HAHA! my english teacher is old and his name is mr.smith too! FREAKY!

 

gonna read the chappie now..

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HAHA! my english teahcer is old and his name is mr.smith too! FREAKY!

 

gonna read the chappie now..

my gym teacher is named mrs.smith

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

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HAHA! my english teacher is old and his name is mr.smith too! FREAKY!

 

gonna read the chappie now..

 

Woah! I go to Lawrence JHS, it would be cool if u went to the same school! lol, keep going w/ the chapters! lol ttyl bibi

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she got what she deserved!!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!! POst more soon!!!

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Every day reminded how much I hated it.

 

Liz-n-Mike

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next chap..

 

chester left the school with the police, they made there way to the ranch but it took a couple of hours to get there. "now turn left and go through the gates" they made there way up the drive way and then the car stop and they all got out and walked up to the house.

 

"HELLO ANY1 HOME?" "hey there chester" he heard his sister voice and turn around and had her pop up in his face... "OMG.... THANK GOD YOUR ALIVE!!!" "why wouldn't i be alive chester" chester sister starting to sound puzzled "chester why are there police here and where are mum and dad?" "umm.. i don't know how tell you this melissa" "CHESTER TELL ME!!!!!" "umm.. ok, well m..m..mum and d..d..dad ar..are DEAD!!" chester started to cry, but then try to pretend he had something stuck in his eye. melissa fell to the ground and curled up into a ball and started to whimper...

 

chester got himself together "melissa its ok, we'll be ok" chester tried to sound hopeful. melissa got up and started to yell "CHESTER IT WONT BE OK!!" "yes it will melissa!!" "WILL HAVE TO GO TO A FOSTER HOME AND WE'LL PROBLEY BE SEPARATED!!!" "MELISSA ILL MAKE SURE WE WONT OK!!!" "now can you please go pack your stuff" "no i have to tell.." chester cut her off "there out milking the cows, while you pack your stuff ill write a note and leave it here, now go pack your stuff"

 

five minutes later melissa came out with her suitcase "ok now we can go" chester put the note down and walked to the police car where the police had been waiting the whole time. they both go in.. and the police drove them away...

Posted
yay his sister is alive :D

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

Posted

that is such a happy but sad moment =( *snifflz*

good stuff!

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