Rivspunk Posted January 9, 2005 Posted January 9, 2005 We Want More We Want More !!!!!! I Want To Know What Happens Next!!!!!! Quote Lets do It rivermen Style!!!
Pheonix791989 Posted January 9, 2005 Posted January 9, 2005 lol love your story. who'd have thought u'd use my name. yup its melissa. heehee n_n i dont mind being chesters sister, not in the least. ne wayz good story Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Liz_m_mike_9077 Posted January 9, 2005 Posted January 9, 2005 yay his sister is alive!!!! Whoo hoo!!!! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/c8d8f8175c170649a8613d388d0a9159.jpg Part of me won't go away. Every day reminded how much I hated it. Liz-n-Mike
LPGirl Posted January 10, 2005 Author Posted January 10, 2005 next chappy "so what are we doing now?" "well we going to check, the accident reports and see if anybody reported your parent car crash and if they are indeed dead, eerrr.. well.." melissa cut him off "WELL let me see, we will both being going to a foster home and probley be separated for life!!!" "umm.. well maybe, but well we will try and get you a home together, but we might not be.." chester cut him off "able too... hmmm. thought soo *sigh*" chester sister started to cry again, so chester tried to make her feel better by hugging her. it was late by the time they got back to chester's house, chester and melissa were both asleep. "chester, melissa" the policemen said as he shaked them both gently "wha.. what..?" chester said sleepily "were back at your house, now we have check the crash reports and i think we should go inside to tell you" chester and melissa both got out of the car and followed them inside the house, then chester and his sister both sat on the couch and wait for the news that they were about to hear "well umm... we checked the crash reports and your parents are dead because in the car which they found, it had been very badly burn they did not find any remains at all of your parent so, you guys better pack because in the morning you will both be going to a foster home!" "umm.. ok, come on melissa lets get packing*sigh*" "before you go i just want to tell you guys that 1 of us will be staying tonight to make sure nothing happen to either of you" "ok, then goodnight" chester and melissa said at the same time as they walked upstairs to there rooms to pack. Quote
stupidsoul1 Posted January 10, 2005 Posted January 10, 2005 awwwwwwww they better not get separated! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/25cb22d29f0c2f027cf1acc5b7bf6cf4.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/459bb3c6fed65d05781dbdae0319d254.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/0dcf45273040e11bc56a99d4601a58d5.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/bfdf068f8fa963062b979cec565ff7f7.png Fiona is teh Fionizzle... and we all love her ^^
linkinparkrunaway Posted January 10, 2005 Posted January 10, 2005 awwwwwwww they better not get separated! Yeah that would make things even worse for them. Keep going I can't wait to read more Quote [broken External Image]:http://uploader.clausercorp.com/uploaded/dfdf.jpg Somehow I need to be alone
FadedBlue Posted January 11, 2005 Posted January 11, 2005 yeah,i hope they dont get separated! keep it coming!! Quote Last.fm
nocturnal Posted January 13, 2005 Posted January 13, 2005 hey Im waiting for the next chappy... Quote Just wish that I didnt feel like there was something I missed...
FadedBlue Posted January 13, 2005 Posted January 13, 2005 me too *starts getting old* lol,ill try to be patient Quote Last.fm
Pheonix791989 Posted January 14, 2005 Posted January 14, 2005 more more, pwease! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted January 14, 2005 Posted January 14, 2005 I neeed moreee, plz? *gets on kneez* IM BEGGING U!! WWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥
chester_Crazy Posted January 14, 2005 Posted January 14, 2005 I actually want tehm to be seperated....all the more interesting I guess Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
LPGirl Posted January 15, 2005 Author Posted January 15, 2005 sorry i have been over my nannas house and when i left my internet wasnt work, lol cuz i over used it and now it is working and im back from my nanas house, i will post a chapter later, becuz at the moment im going to a theme park and wont be back till nite, so i promise ill post 1 tonite when i get home or tommorrow, and once again im really sorri:D:D Quote
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted January 16, 2005 Posted January 16, 2005 HAVE FUN!! LoL, ride the roller coaster ^^!! yaaaaahooo, im booored! ttyl, bibi ^^ Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥
LPGirl Posted January 17, 2005 Author Posted January 17, 2005 here the next chappy i hope u lik.. enjoy:D :thumbsup: chester woke up the next morning around 6am, and then he when in to melissa's room to wake her up, "melissa, melissa wake up!" whispering in her ear and gently shaking her. "mmm.... wot chester?" melissa said in a groggy tone. "get up, we have to get ready cuz remember we're going to the well-fair place today" "dam!!! i forgot about that, f--k, chester i don't want to go, cant we just stay here and we can look after our selves!" "i wish we could but we cant!!, ill be happy just as long as we don't get separated, cuz then we'll be f--ked." melissa got up "lets go downstairs and have some breakky and try and avoid the events of today along as possible" "yeah ok" chester and melissa walk down stairs, and when to the kitchen and make some breakfast and when they finish they when back up stairs to finish packing. an hour later the police man woke up and when up stair to get chester and melissa "are you guys packed?" "yeah almost" chester said in a droll tone "how about you melissa?" "ill be packed when im packed, so don't f--king rush me, ok pig" "ok" he walked into chester room "so when will we be leaving?" "when your sister finishes packing and maybe loses that tone and attitude!!" "i don't think she'll be doing that anytime soon, and wouldn't you be pissed off if your parents just f--king died in a horrible car crash, with no remains and then having to go to some foster home and you mite also 'to top all of these fu-king great events off' mite get separated when we go to a foster home??!!!, HOW THE F--K WOULD YOU FEEL THEN???!!!!!" "sorry i didn't real..." chester cut him off " of course you don't understand, im going to check on melissa!" chester left the room and when to melissa's "are you done?" "yeah, i've been done since yesterday!" "ohhh ok" "come on let grab our stuff and go" "ok" melissa grabbed her stuff and when down stairs and outside to the police car, the police man followed, chester grabbed his stuff when downstairs, lock the door and when to the car. "ok belt up chester, melissa" "yeah wot ever"(melissa) "ok"(chester) the police man started the car and then drove off with chester and melissa to take them to wall-fair so they could go to there new families...... Quote
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted January 17, 2005 Posted January 17, 2005 I looove the story, post MORE!! lol, ttyl, bibi Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥
XrockinfreakX Posted January 17, 2005 Posted January 17, 2005 good story!!!! write more soon Quote August eighth, two thousand and seven was the best.
LPGirl Posted January 18, 2005 Author Posted January 18, 2005 have u other ppl who been reading this forgot bout it? Quote
FadedBlue Posted January 18, 2005 Posted January 18, 2005 awsome work! :thumbsup: cant wait til the next chapter Quote Last.fm
linkinparkrunaway Posted January 20, 2005 Posted January 20, 2005 I hope things are going to work out for them great chapter hope you post more soon :thumbsup: Quote [broken External Image]:http://uploader.clausercorp.com/uploaded/dfdf.jpg Somehow I need to be alone
LPGirl Posted January 20, 2005 Author Posted January 20, 2005 sorri im gettin lazy They soon arrived at the well-fair office, the police man rang the buzzer and a lady called elanna asked "hello you must be that officer with the children whose parents died in the horrible car crash.." melissa starts to cry, and chester tries to hold back his tears, but it didn't work so he just patted his sis on the back and cry quietly... "uummm... yeah they are.." said the officer looking worriedly at the children and elanna just kept working and didn't take any notice off them crying... after about 5 mins elanna came back "you two are in luck.." chester cut her off and said in sarcastic tone "are we just!!!?" elanna didn't take any notice, she seemed very good at doing that..! "yes you are just as luck happens to be, we have two foster home waiting for you guys" chester got pissed off "WHAT THE F**K!!!!! ME AND MY SISTER WANT TO BE TOGETHER!!! WERE NOT GOING TO SEPARATED AGAIN!!" "uumm... ok ill have to check that out" elanna walked off and returned an hr later "yes that is possible luckily..., they will be here in 4 hours to pick you up.." "where do they the hell do they live?" chester said still acting a bit pissed " "ummm.. let me check..., they live in california" melissa finally spoke "but that's really far away from here" "well im glad it is!! maybe ill finally make some friends for the 1st time in my life" chester said with a *sigh* "what the hell are we going to do for 4 hrs" "don't know melissa, uumm.. maybe sleep? i didn't get much last night" "yeah i suppose" melissa rested her head on her big bro's shoulder and soon both of them fell asleep.... Quote
angelwithburntwings Posted January 20, 2005 Posted January 20, 2005 awww so they're moving to sunny ol' california, cool! cool chapter, post the next one soon Quote I remember your other account being banned OOPS!!!
FadedBlue Posted January 28, 2005 Posted January 28, 2005 LPgirl!! we want more!!! sorry, just getting a little unpatient:D Quote Last.fm
LPGirl Posted January 29, 2005 Author Posted January 29, 2005 sorry, it just a got a lil discoraged cuz i posted it on lpfiction and ppl hated it, so i thoght u guys didnt lik it either... ill go and write a chapter now.. Quote
LPGirl Posted January 29, 2005 Author Posted January 29, 2005 here you guys go.. melissa woke up cuz she was going to pee her pants, so she got up and when to look for the toilet, it seemed like forever before she found it one.. when she found it she ran like crazy to the toilet and sigh "Thank you god!!". after she finished. she when back to when they were sitting, but chester wasn't there.. "when the hell is he?" she thought. then she look out the door and saw him with a lady and a man and she heard them talking "ill go look for melissa, she probley just when to the toilet" "ok" replied the man chester walked in side and spotted her "hey melissa, where'd you go?" "just when to the toilet, are they our foster family?" melissa said as she pointed outside to the lady and the man. "yeah, that's them, there nice folks from what i can tell and they have a son my age." "ok, lets go out side to them then" they both grab there belongings and left for the car with there new foster family. when they were in the car, the man started to talk to chester and melissa "hi, im Mr. shinoda, but you can call me dan" "and im Mrs. shinoda, but you guys can call me nicky" "nice to meet both of" said melissa "yeah its nice to meet you guys" chester said as they all drove off together to sunny california. Quote
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