my 1st fanfic plz read..

[LPGirl]

hey u guys here is the new chapter... plz plz r & r and vote on the poll above..

 

10 mins later

 

they make it to the hospital car park and they meet up with nikky and dan there, they all enter the hospital and went to the receptions and ask where melissa bennington is, she replies "umm.. im sorry but you cant see her at the moment see still in surgery" mike's mum starts to get frantic "well can somebody please at least tell us what the hell is going on here, we need to know the details and we need to know them NOW!!" "ok ma'am it you will just calm down, and i will ..." nikky cut her off

"i will not calm down, because my daughter is in there and she has been SHOT!!!"

"ok i will get Dr. katt out here when she out of " said the receptionist

 

20 mins later

 

Dr. katt walked out and greeted them with a smile, "hi im your daughter Doctor, ummm.. well she has been shot twice, once in the chest and once in the spine, we took out the bullets and fix her leg but she need spinal surgery and she needs it fast if she wants to live through this night, but its very very expensive"

"we don't care how much it cost just help her, please.." said nikky

"ok, ill do my best" and with that Dr. katt let and when back to surgery.

 

"there is no point everyone being here, ill stay the night everyone else please go home" said nikky

everyone mumbled tiredly and left..

[FadedBlue]

Ouch,shot in the spine..thats gotta hurt..

 

Great work LPGirl!!

[lpp]

More i need more more more

 

please

[LPGirl]

i just fully spell checked every chapter up(took forever), so if something didnt make sense re-read plz..

[PookieMookieRockz07]

I just read it all today and so far, so good. can't wait for the next chapter. :thumbsup:

[LPGirl]

next chapter, enjoy!!!

 

*next day*

 

chester and mike woke up really early and got ready and ran down stairs to dan, "DAD!! can we go see melissa?" asked mike in a frantic panic "no sorry mike and chester, i just spoke with your mum about this over the phone, she said its best it you go to school and it there is any change we'll come and get you from school" "DAMN!!"yelled chester as he stomped his foot "ok, you guys have some breakfast and then go to school" "yes dad" "yes dan" replied mike and chester..

 

*30 min later*

 

chester and mike arrived at school, brad, rob, joe, phi, liz, anne and sam came running up to them.

"omg, you guys all right, is melissa ok?" said sam slightly out of breath

"we don't really, know how she is, dan said he'd pick us up if there is any change, and me well i'm just depressed" said a very chester

"awww.., poor chazzy chaz" said sam, she walked up and gave him a hug, chester started to turn a nice shade of red.

"lets try and take our mind of this horrible ordeal(sp?)" said brad as he was walking away towards the music room

"im glad we have a join grade music class for all today" said rob

"yeah, cuz then you can hang with us" said joe as they all walked in to the music room and sat down.

"why do we have music all day" asked chester slightly confused

"the teacher thought it would be best that if once a month for the whole day we did music, its meant to bring out creativeness or something in us" said mike

"its just a great day where we get to do NOTHING" yelled phi and the teacher happen to hear him, well since you think we are going to nothing we are going to do something now!! JOE!! PIANO NOW!!" screamed the teacher

"but.." whimpered joe "NOW!!" shrieked the teacher joe walk over to the piano "now we are going to TALENT day today, everybody has to get up on stage and do some there good at, now if you CANT or WONT do any thing i'll give you a song to sing, and joe will play the music on the piano, ill give everybody 5 mins to get ready and then ill start picking random people!" said the teacher more calmly them before.

*joe kept think, how the hell did she know i could play the piano, NOBODY knows that, so how the fuck did she?*

[LPGirl]

i wrote an other chapter... its kind funny this 1

 

 

"what are we going to do?" asked chester

"umm.. who can play sing or play instruments here, i can rap" said mike

"i can play the Drums" said rob

"i play Bass" said phi

"i can kind of play Guitar" said brad

"what can you do chester?" asked mike

"umm.. i don't really know, i cant play any instruments" replied chaz

"can you sing?" asked mike

"i don't think so, get some body else to sing" said chaz

"nar.. i bet you have a great voice" said sam

"well if you think so" replied the blushing chester

"now what shall we call ourselves?" said phi

"umm.. how about we call ourselves Hybrid Theory?" said rob

"nar.. how about Lincoln Park" said chester

"why?" asked brad

"as a tribute to melissa.." said chaz

"lets change the spelling so it L-i-n-k-i-n P-a-r-k, cuz the the other spelling sucks..!" said rob

"ok we're set, but are we going to play?" said mike

"your 5 mins is up, and 1st to go is Mike" said the teacher

"but Mrs. we have a band we just need to work out a song can we have 5 more mins?" asked mike

"NO.. since your band doesn't have a song you will all come up he 1 by 1 and show us your talents" screamed the bitch of a teacher

mike walked up on stage and started to rap his favorite song, the teacher wasn't happy about him rapping, but the class liked it.

"ROBERT, get on stage NOW!!"

rob got up and started playing the drums the loudest he could just to piss the teacher off, and he did that very well, so well it got him detention, cuz she knew he did on purpose.

"DAVID, on stage" said the teacher

phi got on stage and played smoke on the water, he finish and got off stage he was the 1st who hadn't been yelled at.

"BRAD, up there now" said the teacher point to the stage

brad didn't really know any song, so he had to play mary had a little lamb, he got laugh off stage.

"CHESTER, up on stage now" said teacher

chester walked up to the teacher and said "but i don't have anything to do" she replied with a scream "sing this and give the music to joe to play on the piano, he nodded and walk over to joe gave him the paper and walked on stage, then he look down at what he had to sing "Big Girls Don't Cry" by frankie valli and he said to himself "oh fuck" because its got some of the highest notes and he sure he wont be able to hit them or even try to with out looking like a idiot.. he started sing and he hit every note perfectly but he kind of screamed it but it sounded really good, every one was in shock, because he sang it so well, when he finish he got off stage and everyone was looking at him and he thought to himself "fuck why are they looking at me, cant they just laugh and get it over and done with"

 

lyric to the song:

Big girls don't cry, big girls don't cry

 

Big girls don't cry (they don't cry)

Big girls don't cry (who said they don't cry)

My girl said good-bye (my oh my)

My girl didn't cry (I wonder why)

 

(Silly boy) Told my girl we had to break up

(Silly boy) Thought that she would call my bluff

(Silly boy) But she said to my surprise

Big girls don't cry

 

Big girls don't cry (they don't cry)

Big girls don't cry (who said they don't cry)

 

Baby I was cruel (I was cruel)

Baby I'm a fool (I'm such a fool)

 

(Silly girl) Shame on you your Mama said

(Silly girl) Shame on you, you cried in bed

(Silly girl) Shame on you, you told a lie

Big girls do cry

 

Big girls don't cry (they don't cry)

Big girls don't cry (that's just an alibi)

[stupidsoul1]

LMAO whoa! i didnt realise i had missed out on so much!!!!!

 

dammit!!!!! poor melissa!!!!

 

ur such a great fanfic writer! keep it up

[LPGirl]

i cant update today mabe tomoro(if lucky) or the next day, srry

[FadedBlue]

I absolutely love your stories renai!!

They're brilliant!!

We need MORE!

[LPGirl]

hmm.. srry just really havent been in the mood to write heres the next chapter, thxs ms for betaing

 

*1 week later at the hospital*

 

"I’m sorry but only a few at a time can go in, She still is a bit groggy from that sudden coma, That she went into after the surgery," said Dr Katt.

 

"Will she able to ever walk again?" asked Chester.

 

"It’s to early to tell, its best not to get hopes up" replied Dr Katt

Chester nodded sadly as him, mike, Mr and Mrs Shinoda when into see Melissa.

 

"Hi Melissa, how you feeling?" asked Mike with a hopeful smile on.

 

"To tell the truth I feel like shit, everything hurts or at least did before they stuck me on Morphine" said Melissa.

 

"Well we're just happy your alive, we were all so worried" said Dan.

 

"You guys I feel tried, I going to have a nap" said Melissa sleepily.

 

"Ok, well go now, have a nice sleep" said Nikky.

 

There all waved good bye and left Melissa's room.

 

"Sorry guys she just fell asleep maybe you guys can see her tomorrow" said Nikky.

 

"Ok, but is she ok?" said rob with tears in his eyes.

 

"She ok at the moment just really tried" said Chester.

 

"Ok" said Rob.

 

They all left the hospital and when back to mike and Chester house to hang out.

 

"Me and Dan have to do some shopping we'll be back later" said nikky as her and Dan left for the car.

 

**10 minutes**

 

"I’m so go dam bored, we've done nothing but sit on the couch for 15 minutes..." said Brad

 

"Why don’t we try and work out our band?" asked mike

 

Everyone nodded in a agreement and they get to work

 

**30 minutes**

 

"Ok so I'll read out who what, Rob plays drums, Phi plays bass, Brad plays guitar Joe is the DJ, I’m the emcee, and Chester is the lend singer and we're all back vocals.., is everyone ok with that?"

 

"Yeah I’m down with that" said Phi.

 

Mike looked around at every one else and they all nodded and say yes.

 

"Ok so what will we be called?" asked Rob.

 

"Linkin Park, you know, like we though up a few months ago in music" said Chaz.

 

"Yeah, ok" said Mike.

 

"Hmm... we need to write some lyrics, anybody got any?" asked Brad.

 

"Yeah, I’ve been writing some the past few months" said Chaz.

 

"I’ve written some as well" chirped Mike.

[LPGirl]

hmm.. ive kinda lost intrest in writing, hm.. probly beucz i suck at it.. ya i wont continue with this story or the funni 1

[lpp]

hmm.. ive kinda lost intrest in writing' date=' hm.. probly beucz i suck at it.. ya i wont continue with this story or the funni 1[/quote']

 

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

 

 

but good chapter

 

but atlease finsh the story

[LPGirl]

hmm.. i know what i said, well i feel bad so here is another chapter

 

 

**month later**

 

*at hospital*

 

“Ok Melissa I pack all your cloths, are you ready to leave?” said nikky

 

“Yea of course, I’ve wanted to get out of this hospital for soo long”

 

“Chester, mike and there mate, will be home soon, and they have a big surprise for you” said a rather cheerful nikky

 

“Really? What is it?”

 

“Sorry I can’t tell or then it wouldn’t be a surprise, now would it?” said nikky as they wheeled out to the parking lot

 

“Yea I guess so, but still, hmm…”

 

**at home**

 

“Hey Melissa welcome home” said Chester

 

“Hey everyone”

 

“How are you feeling?” asked mike

 

“Pretty shitty but I’m so happy I’m home, hmm… So what’s my surprise? I’m dying to know” asked Melissa

 

“Ok everyone follows us to the garage” said rob

 

 

*at the garage*

 

“Ok give us 10 mins to get organised” said mike

 

 

*behided curtain*

 

“What songs are we singing??” panicked Chester

 

“Chester stop freaking out, remember I’m the glue I got every organised”

 

“Ok mike”

 

“Now first we’re doing my December the song that Chester wrote, then runaway and finally crawling and as a encore Melissa fav song which is smells like teen sprit, ok got that everyone to there places” said a very organised mike as he opened the curtains

 

“ok now Melissa while you we gone we started a band, we’re called linkin park, we know it’s the park you were shot in that’s why we named ourself it as a tribute, first song we’re sing is called my December written by Chester”

 

*40 mins later*

 

“Omg thank you guys so much, I’m so happy thanks” squealed a excited Melissa

[LPGirl]

~The next day~

 

“Mel darling it’s time for breakfast” called Nikky

 

“She must be sleeping in, give her a while sweetheart”

 

“Of course, god I wasn’t thinking, she just came home from hospital”

 

“Guys get off the PS2 and come eat the pancakes your mother made”

 

“But.. I was just about to kick mike ass in mortal combat”

 

“Pft you wish Chester, no one can beat the mighty Mike”

 

“Oh yea? Well I bet I can beat to breakfast”

 

“Your on Chazzy”

 

“Mike no running in the house”

 

“But...”

 

“No buts”

 

“Dam you Chester! You won this round but new time, your gone”

 

*Chester grins evilly*

 

~hour later~

 

“I’m gonna go and wake Melissa up”

 

“Ok, while you’re up stairs can you find me a shirt for work please?”

 

*Nikky nods as she goes upstairs to Mel bedroom*

 

*knock knock, opens door* “honey you awake?”

 

“Mel honey its time to get up for breaky”

 

“DANIEL CALL 911 NOW!!”

 

*at the hospital*

 

“What wrong with her Dr?”

 

“Um... We don’t know at this point in time but it probly has something to do with her surgery, they may have been complications, I very sorry Mrs. Shinoda”

 

“What do you meant complications!! Dr. Katt said everything was fine!! No this isn’t happening!!” cried Nikky

 

“Honey it’ll be ok” said Dan trying to calm his frantic wife

 

“Sometimes in these cases, the complication don’t show up till months after the surgery, Dr. Katt will be with you shortly after she done running some tests” replied the doctor

 

~ 2 hours later ~

 

“I have the resalts after the tests and “

 

“And WHAT???!!” yelled Chester

 

“And I’m very sorry but there’s nothing we can do, she gone very bad internal bleeding and she will die with in a few hours”

 

“Nooo!!!” yelled Chester * everybody starts to crying *

 

“Guys we have to strong for Melissa I’m sure she wouldn't want us crying at the moment, I’m sure she just wants us to be spending as much time as possible with her before she goes” said Mike

 

“Ok then somebody ring rob he's Melissa boyfriend he deserve to be here with her” said Chester as he wiped away his tears

 

~ Half an hour later ~

 

“Ok you can now go in” said the Nurse

 

“Mel how are you feeling?”

 

“Really tried, what’s going on Chester?”

 

“You got very bad internal bleeding and you’re going to die in very soon” said Chester as he burst in to tears

 

“Ha you’re got to be joking right? Mikey he’s joking isn’t he!!??”

 

“Melissa, he’s not joking, I’m so sorry, but we’re here for at the moment and that’s all we can do and that matters”

 

“Oh my god I’m going to die! No I can’t!! ROB!!”

 

“I’m here sweet-heart, we're all here and well all love you very much” cried rob as he kissed Mel on the forehead

 

"i know you guys do, i love you all too" whispered Melissa as she shut her eyes and smiled for the last time

 

 

ok guys that was the last chapter, im so sorry it took so long to finsih i was just never in the mood to write and i had low self esstem (which i still do) so i alwasy thought no one liked this story so i didnt continue but i felt really bad so yea i decideed to finish it.

[gorillaz]

um didnt mike write "my december"?

[LPGirl]

yer well i didnt know that at the time..

and plus this is a fic.. pft god kill me..

[gorillaz]

stop being so oversensitive

there are a million things wrong with this fic and I could quite easily tear it to shreds, so stop being so pretentious.

[LPGirl]

yea i know im a bad writer, god ever heard of giving something a fucking try? well thats what i did and i know its not got enough for you(like i care anyway), i know its shit but hey that is basically me in a nut shell, shit..

 

and how i am being pretentious? im far from being that, god it you have nothing better then to come to lpf and tell me my fic is really bad and that im oversensitive, and pretentious, well you can blow it out your ass.. and go on thinking you fucking witty and better then me somewhere else..

 

god you probly dont even know what pretentious means and are just using it hoping it makes you sound smarter.. btw it means:

 

PRETENTIOUS - making claim to special merit or importance, given to outward show.

[gorillaz]

I know very well what the word pretentious means, dumbass.

If someone asks you a question, there's no need to act so high and mighty.

It's a fic, not your first born child.

[LPGirl]

i wasnt acting "high and mighty" by say pft god kill me i was being sarcastic you twit, and acting if tho this was my first born child?, haha i'd feel really sorry for it if it was..