chester_Crazy Posted January 2, 2005 Posted January 2, 2005 Yeah well I made this song during one of my classes at school, I was bored and I basically wrote it in about 10 minutes while my teacher rambled on about something I wasn't paying any attention to lol: Well Its about Drug Problems and Alcohol Problems. So tell me what you think of it......... Verse: Inexperienced and new in the game she thought it would be okay had nothing to loose had nothing to gain thought it would feel the same when problems get to hard to controll you grab some and go for a stroll she lost everything she had she was never told it was bad Bridge: When its always insight you think its alright Chorus: I don't want to have to look into your eye you have no clue how I feel inside It kills me when all you think I do Is lie As I lay alone all these thoughts come to mind I seek a place I know I can't find This is hard to hold hard to fold Its uncontrolled Verse: He didn't know it would effect him friends have to walk out on a limb not knowing what he did he was just a kid in pain going insane didn't mean to walk the wrong lane Road the wrong track Self-Controll Is what He lacked Bridge: When its always insight you think its alright Chorus: I don't want to have to look into your eye you have no clue how I feel inside It kills me when all you think I do Is lie As I lay alone all these thoughts come to mind I seek a place I know I can't find This is hard to hold hard to fold its uncontrolled Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
chester_Crazy Posted January 2, 2005 Author Posted January 2, 2005 Maybe I should add another verse.......After reading it a few times over it looks like I'm missing something I'm not sure Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
chester_Crazy Posted January 2, 2005 Author Posted January 2, 2005 So what do you all think? Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
chazzy_rox Posted January 3, 2005 Posted January 3, 2005 ooo funky munkey is whAT I THINK. it reminds me of a country song called Whiskey Lullaby, and i dont really like the song, but the lyrics are sooo sad. koolio. school tomorrow, grrrr. mopre writing time though :D Quote [broken External Image]:http://www.freewebs.com/mypersonalgraphics/chazzy_rocks%20siggy.JPG PLEASE JOIN MY FORUM, IT NEEDS GOOD MEMBERS! LLW Forums
chester_Crazy Posted January 5, 2005 Author Posted January 5, 2005 ooo funky munkey is whAT I THINK. it reminds me of a country song called Whiskey Lullaby' date=' and i dont really like the song, but the lyrics are sooo sad. koolio. school tomorrow, grrrr. mopre writing time though :D[/quote'] I'm not sure if thats a compliment but I'll just pretend it is lol Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
LPtheory88 Posted January 5, 2005 Posted January 5, 2005 woah... I like it. When I was reading it I was imagining LP singing it. Like, Mike kinda rapping to the verses and Chester singing the chorus. I'm not sure if that's the kind of song you thought of it as though. Anyways, good job! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/104959f8508042e235d537ad8cfa25a8.jpg
Black_Thought Posted January 5, 2005 Posted January 5, 2005 woah... I like it. When I was reading it I was imagining LP singing it. Like' date=' Mike kinda rapping to the verses and Chester singing the chorus. I'm not sure if that's the kind of song you thought of it as though. Anyways, good job![/quote'] are you a mind reader? ffs that's what I thought too!!! you rule, Chester_crazy!! :thumbsup: I love it!! Quote Your eyes are not enough to understand my chaos... http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/34de8c5de1655a9fc020e5347ecba681.jpg Click to see a winter poem...
angelwithburntwings Posted January 5, 2005 Posted January 5, 2005 thats a well good song, i like it. you can actually imagine lp singing it! Quote I remember your other account being banned OOPS!!!
chester_Crazy Posted January 5, 2005 Author Posted January 5, 2005 awww you guys are so nice.......Thanks for posting your opinions.I'm glad you like it. just so you know I did kinda imagaine LP Singing it,but not until I actually finsished the song though lol Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
LPtheory88 Posted January 5, 2005 Posted January 5, 2005 yay! I'm not the only one who imagined LP singing it! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/104959f8508042e235d537ad8cfa25a8.jpg
chester_Crazy Posted January 6, 2005 Author Posted January 6, 2005 yay! I'm not the only one who imagined LP singing it! yeah lol Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
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