darkmoonbluesilver Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 i hope this is good please tell me if it is or if it isnt chapter 1 chester woke up by the noise mike was making "get up lazy ass" mike said. chaz yawned and went back to sleep "you...we are gonna be late for school again" mike said picking up from the floor chesters glasses. "i think you arent gonna need your glasses while you sleep" he said laughing pretending to brake chesters black framed glasses. chaz jumped off the bed runnig to mikes room ,he found the picture of mikes girlfriend karina and he puted it under his boxers holding it with his right hand so it wouldnt slide. "oh come on, it had karinas perfume on it now i dont want to know how it smells like"mike said "well give me my glasses". they kept on chasing eachother around the room until they ended on the floor chaz trying to get his glasses back and mike figuring out a way to get his picture without touching something he didnt wanted to. "what is it now?" rob asked laughing at what he was watching from the rooms door "give me my glasses and you ll have your picture back" chaz told mike. they both got up mike gave chaz his glasses and chaz took out mikes pic from his boxers.he looked at the picture and smiled "i think she liked it" he said returning it to mike and runnig to his room. they were already late for school however chaz took a shower and dressed up in 13 minutes beating up his record again. chester went to the kitchen were rob and mike were eating breakfast "it-it took me forever to get his ass up " mike said with his mouth full of potato chips he ate them for breakfast "the same it used to take me and joe" rob said "hopefully joe is at his brothers mansion now" mike said. chester didnt ate anything but water. they went to get their backpacks and than their scateboards from the backyard.they rode to phoenix and brads house that was across the street then they all togheter rode to their highschool six blocks away.brad ,phoenix and rob were riding a few feets awayfrom of mike and chaz that were the last as always.they were discussing how mike had woken chaz up chaz then felt like loosing control of his scateboard and he spinned through the air hitting his knees first,then his elbows,hands,chin,and nose.they all atopped and looked at him "chester?"mike asked picking up from the ground chesters glasses again... please tell me if you like it so i can keep on writing more i still have waiting more chapters and i think the storie turns intersting Quote what would i be doing without Linkin Park?
fire_witch_monkey Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 i like it keep going Quote Amy: honestley no matter what happens i know i'll still be making music. Ben: n i'll be making burgers. *~*slinky + esculator = never ending fun!*~* :thumbsup:
chester_Crazy Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 oh I liked it!! post more its very funny... I just wanted to know how old are they? Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 i like it, keep it cumin! Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥
darkmoonbluesilver Posted January 8, 2005 Author Posted January 8, 2005 ooops!!!!! i just read the thingy that we cant write about any lp getting hurt i m sorry i hadnt read it does anyone know if i can finish on what i am on i wont hurt any one else Quote what would i be doing without Linkin Park?
darkmoonbluesilver Posted January 8, 2005 Author Posted January 8, 2005 they are in the 11 grade Quote what would i be doing without Linkin Park?
anna_loves.chaz Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 lol i think it's ok just keep going i cant wait for more poor chazy Quote
Black_Thought Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 don't hurt Chaz!!!!! Quote Your eyes are not enough to understand my chaos... http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/34de8c5de1655a9fc020e5347ecba681.jpg Click to see a winter poem...
chester_Crazy Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 don't hurt Chaz!!!!! don't worry...its not the real chester,its Fan "Fiction" remember Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
Black_Thought Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 don't worry...its not the real chester' date='its Fan "Fiction" remember[/quote'] It doesn't matter! I wov Chazzy and I don't agree with this lol stupid thing Quote Your eyes are not enough to understand my chaos... http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/34de8c5de1655a9fc020e5347ecba681.jpg Click to see a winter poem...
chester_Crazy Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 It doesn't matter! I wov Chazzy and I don't agree with this lol stupid thing I love chazzy too, and I understand why you wouldn't like it, but arn't you taking this a bit to seriously Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
chazzy_rox Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 all these sites have too many rules for fan fictios. its kinda stupid. i mean it is after all a "fiction" as chester_Crazy said. Quote [broken External Image]:http://www.freewebs.com/mypersonalgraphics/chazzy_rocks%20siggy.JPG PLEASE JOIN MY FORUM, IT NEEDS GOOD MEMBERS! LLW Forums
chester_Crazy Posted January 9, 2005 Posted January 9, 2005 Hey if anyones fan fiction gets closed down then you guys can post it a t Chazzy-Rox's forum.....she has a section their for fan fics.The link is in her signature. or here: http://llwforums.proboards44.com/index.cgi Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
Black_Thought Posted January 9, 2005 Posted January 9, 2005 I love chazzy too' date=' and I understand why you wouldn't like it, but arn't you taking this a bit to seriously [/quote'] I was off yesterday sooooowy Quote Your eyes are not enough to understand my chaos... http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/34de8c5de1655a9fc020e5347ecba681.jpg Click to see a winter poem...
chester_Crazy Posted January 9, 2005 Posted January 9, 2005 I was off yesterday sooooowy Thats okay, I'm off alot too lol Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
Black_Thought Posted January 9, 2005 Posted January 9, 2005 Thats okay' date=' I'm off alot too lol [/quote'] I'm glad your not mad at me lol Quote Your eyes are not enough to understand my chaos... http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/34de8c5de1655a9fc020e5347ecba681.jpg Click to see a winter poem...
chester_Crazy Posted January 9, 2005 Posted January 9, 2005 I'm glad your not mad at me lol I don't worry I can't be mad at you Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
xSHAKETHESHOCK411x Posted January 12, 2005 Posted January 12, 2005 awsome work! I agree! . Post more. . Quote Vote for Linkin Park and Jay-Z!! Andale, mis amigos!! [broken External Image]:http://www.musicforrelief.org/assets/MFR_468x60.jpg
darkmoonbluesilver Posted January 13, 2005 Author Posted January 13, 2005 chapter 2 "chester?" brad asked. they all saw blood coming from one of chesters knee "cheter are you okay?" mike saked "i dont know" a weak voice answered. they helped chazzy stand up and mike took a look at chesters knee "looks very bad ,but you will survive" he said chester smiled "what about my elbow it hurts a lot?" mike pulled chesters sleeve up and saw the elbow he just made a face "do you wanna return home or are you gonna go to school?" he asked "i am going home i dont wanna go to school with this scratches besides they hurt " chester said. the scratches did hurt but he really didnt felt like going to school "i ll go with you" mike said "no thanks mike you should better go to school i ll take care of myself" chester said turning back home "wait" mike yelled "what do i do with your scateboard and your glasses it looks like the wheels were the problem three are missing" "put that scateboard at my locker i dont want to see it til my scratches are healed but i do want my glasses" chesster said getting his glasses. when he was two streets away from home he saw four boys coming in his direccion, he couldnt really see who they were for his glasses were all broken but he thought they were aaron and his friends "stupid shit" he wispered not because he didnt wanted to be heard but because his chin was hurting "hey chaster it isnt halloween yet" aaron said his friends laughed "i have a feeling that somebody did something to the wheels of your scateboard" he and his friends laughed even harder then before "bastard you did it didnt you?" chester yelled he felt anger in his veins "no i dont think so why would i do that do you know why chester?" chester knew why " i told you to stay away from avril i saw you with her on saturday" aaron said. aaron was one year older then chester but he looked five years older bacause he was much taller then him " she is my girlfriend and i dont want you with her or both will suffer the concequences" aaron continued "dont you touch her" chester said walking away going home when rob and mike returned home chester was in the kitchen drinking a soda mike took one too "he did it" chester said "who did what?" mike asked "aaron did it" "dont tell me aaron did what i think he-" chester interrupted mike "yes i saw him when i was returnig home he told me to stay away from" chester stopped and looked away "you saw her again?" rob asked "yes it was on saturday when i said i would go buy some cds but i dont know how he saw us" "chester you know aaron knows every step avril takes he protects avril more then his own ass"mike said walking from one side of the room to the other "mike you know that i love her i cant keep on hiding my feelings and she feels the same for me she just fears that when she finishes aaron he would go crazy and do something like he did today"chester said sadly "look chester if you dont care about your ass we do,but you have to choose avril or your ass i know you dont care bout your ass but what about avril he will hurt her too" " no, i have to call her" chester said realizing she could be in danger too... please keep on telling me if you like it or not Quote what would i be doing without Linkin Park?
anna_loves.chaz Posted January 13, 2005 Posted January 13, 2005 wow this awesome i really really cant wait to read sum more i love avril i love chester i love this story n love u too *hugs the stroy* plz keep going i cant wait poor chaz sumone should kick aaron's ass Quote
chester_Crazy Posted January 13, 2005 Posted January 13, 2005 post more!! Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
FadedBlue Posted January 13, 2005 Posted January 13, 2005 CHESTER SHOULD BEAT UP THAT DUMBASS AARON! ...stupid... awsome story! post more Quote Last.fm
darkmoonbluesilver Posted January 14, 2005 Author Posted January 14, 2005 chapter 3!!!!! chester called avril to her cell phone like 20 times but no one answered.chester was now beginig to sweat he felt his stomach sick "if he puts a hand on her i ll kill him i swear i ll kill him" he yelled across the house going to the door "chester were are you going?" mike asked "to kill him" chester yelled "chester dont do something stupid you ll make things worste" mike said they took chaz to the kitchen and gave him a glass of water "relax chaz what about if she left the cell phone somewere or maybe she is taking a shower or shopping she may have things to do" rob said trying to relax chaz "yeah but if thats true why doesnt she has her cell phone or worste why doesnt she answer it" chaz said relaxing a bit. he went to the door again "are you guys coming with me?" he asked "where?" they asked "to look for avril and to kill aaron" "what?" mike spitted out some soda " aaron has more dudes then we do we could get brad phoenix and the other guys but it would stil wont be enough if we want to beat aarons ass we ll first have to kill his friends and if we go look for her were are you gonna go do that?" "first at her house" chester said "why dont you call her mom?" rob said "if she knows were avril is she wont tell me .you know she hates me she likes aaron better then me to be her daughters boyfriend" chester said "just try it" mike said a few minutes later chester was screaming across the house again "guess what she doesnt knows were avril is"chester left going to avrils house mike and rob followed him when they got there mike asked "and now what?" chester knocked on the door noone answered "lets go back chester theres nobody home" mike told him "no" chester said climbing avrils room window "what are you doing ?" rob asked chester didnt answered he got inside the room then he searched the house but no one was there then he went out he was so sad that he didnt remerbered his scratches hurt. when they got home chester whent to his room "were could she be?i swear i ll kill him i dont know how but i ll do it maybe he got so angry that he would hurt her too remember what he told me this mornig maybe he ll kidnap her and and-" he was so nervous that he letted himself fall on his bed "lets wait til tomorrow you ll see her at school" mike said, rob was doing mikes and chesters homework at his room. that night chester didnt sleep thinking about how much he didnt wanted avril to get hurt he loved her so much that he was shure he would do anything so she would be okey he hold on his hand a chain that avril had given him he kissed it. on the mornig he got up before the others at 5:50 he took a long shower ,shaved and dressed all in 45 minutes he didnt cared bout his record nomore mike and rob were surprised but said nothing.they left the house early they didnt went to look for brad and phoenix this time chester wanted to be at school early so he could wait for avril but she never showed up... i hope this is good and dont worry nothing is gonna happen to chester he ll get revenge just wait and thanks for those who like it Quote what would i be doing without Linkin Park?
nocturnal Posted January 14, 2005 Posted January 14, 2005 I just read it..its awesome..great story..continue I cant wait,it s so exciting Quote Just wish that I didnt feel like there was something I missed...
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