thenumbluver Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 It's been a while but I'm BACK!!!!! [Verse 1:] Staring at the snow Ice falls from the trees Which way to go? Trees begin to fall No way to get out How can I back away from it all? (away from it all) [Chorus:] I can't help but break apart [my heart begins to race] Losing everything from the very start [my heart begins to race] The weak and powerless, cab't afford this big mess [your heart begins to race] work this out, work this out [Verse 2:] 5 days of nothing to do Boredom's taking over How can you change my view? Too many with no power Call in reinforcements So many new ones every hour How can we change it all? (change it all) [Chorus] [Verse 3:] I'm standing in the middle Everyone I know, is all around me This isn't so simple Everyone in fear So speechless I try to hol everyone near How will they listen to me? (listen to me) [Chorus] [Whisper:] Never back away, back away Never back away, back away [Verse 4:] Staring at the snow Ice falls from the trees Which way to go? I'm missin' the old life See what I'm sayin? Doesn't it brin gtears to your eyes? (tears to your eyes) [Chorus x2] Right in the middle, of it all This sad face Ready to fall Tell me what you think. It's still kinda rough. Quote
chester_Crazy Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 oh thats good...... :thumbsup: Quote I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain
angelwithburntwings Posted January 9, 2005 Posted January 9, 2005 tis a bit rough, but it's good, raw.... thats the way songs should be i like it Quote I remember your other account being banned OOPS!!!
thenumbluver Posted January 9, 2005 Author Posted January 9, 2005 tis a bit rough, but it's good, raw.... thats the way songs should be i like it Thank you. I thought about going through and looking it over and making changes. It's just a little to rough. @ chester_Crazy-Thank you! Quote
twistedxxfate Posted January 17, 2005 Posted January 17, 2005 Nice work, I like 4th verse the best. Fantastic title! Quote waiting on a sunday afternoon. [broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v69/LinkinLuver13/My%20Sigs/VReyeliner.png for what i read between the lines... your lies
thenumbluver Posted January 18, 2005 Author Posted January 18, 2005 Nice work' date=' I like 4th verse the best. Fantastic title![/quote'] Thank you! Quote
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