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Okay ppls. i am writing a book called poems 4 a soul.

 

I am wanting 2 know opinions.

 

Pls ask for a copy of the file (ill send it 2 u) via my hotmail or yahoo.

 

Just line up here...................

Mia Elizabeth 18/2/10

Kate Helena 8/7/11

 

My baby girls <3

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can u like copy it into a email or something because if its attatchment i cant dl it or i will b kicked off net again

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yer sign us up for one. sounds good to me send it to me hotmail

Everyday I shit into the sea

It's strange but it doesn't mean much to me

Everyday I talk to my machines

More sense than talking to human beings

It's pretty in the land of the free

Where things ain't quite what they seem

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woody did u make them urslf!?

they r so good!!

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i've done loads more up2 lyk 22 poems........stupidsoul, ill try to get them in ur mailbox out the front of your house...if i remember.......

 

heres another one

 

Another Road to Cross........

 

 

Another day goes past; the sun has gone to sleep,

Another day goes past; a massacre in the headlines.

Another day goes past; another lost soul at sea finds peace,

Another day goes past; another death.

Another day goes past; another good catch for the sea lords,

Another day goes past; a poltergeist haunts a family.

 

Another day awakens; the sun peeps its head through the hills,

Another day awakens; the alarms go off in every house.

Another day awakens; the adults buy their coffee for the day ahead,

Another day awakens; the roosters awake their owners.

Another day awakens; the sun reveals a suffering planet,

Another day awakens; more deaths to get by with.

 

Another path to cross, before the end of the line,

Another day, to live.

Another night, to sleep through,

Another phone call, to call back.

Another company to sue.

Another detention to give out.

It's just another road to cross, from where I'm standing.

Mia Elizabeth 18/2/10

Kate Helena 8/7/11

 

My baby girls <3

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Good poem, wait no great! *goes to end of line*

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and ppls 2 more things....

 

for the ppl who have recieved them...can you frwd them onto ppl who haven't get them, cos it saves me some hassle and bitching around on my comp.

 

and plz rate every poem out 10...thanks for ur opinions...really appreciate it ppl cos im GETTING THEM PUBLISHED ! ! soon

Mia Elizabeth 18/2/10

Kate Helena 8/7/11

 

My baby girls <3

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i say 10/10 i like the another day goes past thing how u made it the first thing on each line

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