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My newest poem. I might put some of my others. This is waaay different from what I usually write though. Hope you like it all the same. :) Critique appreciated.

 

(Your Title Here)

 

So stereos hum into the starry moonlight

with us on our backsides;

Music is poetry to the ears and mind

and like hands, we intertwine.

We fit each other, so.

 

The air between us is silent but our hearts are singing,

"Hallelujah, hallelujah" and

we rock our heads in beat to the

old love songs played in the stereo tonight.

Notes across the glistening sky.

 

There's something familiar about this place:

the music playing, the sky twinkling,

and I think I visited this place before,

yes, in my dreams each night.

It is the same so why is it different?

 

This is more than a dream, so much more.

I feel as if each sound in the song is

a piece of my heart and with each note

my heart grows fonder for you, so I

turn up the volume.

 

Now all I hear is the music blasting and

our love intertwined. Our hearts are singing

each other's names in the moonlight and

everything else is drowned out and

your title goes here because you are the love song of my life.

waiting on

a sunday afternoon.

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for what i

read between the lines...

 

your lies

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wow that was good ........I actually started singing to it lol

 

I am the enemy who is honest and the friend who has betrayed

but it's not my fault you've left your mind in my hands to invade

Remember to return the needle once I'm done with your vein

And I'll remember to give a push when your mind can't complain

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